Thanks, all. And argh, I found typoes.
Marukh ate my forum password, too.
Edit: the verification email is slow; I'll do it here
Thanks, all. And argh, I found typoes.
Marukh ate my forum password, too.
Edit: the verification email is slow; I'll do it here
Spangled, not
sprangledin her staggering age the last word is missing
for his armor (not army)
had dissolved into its own tapestry of starsthe tower about them swelled and (not as) gaspedVahtache was the appellation of doom.It's supposed to be Vahtacen(SP?) here, suggesting that the rebels gave the ruin the name it has in vanilla Oblivion.
fate chose to taunt (not mock) White-Gold
and three score raiders of-'Kreath (misplaced hyphen instead of a space)
Morihaus'sMaybe its the other slaves, (apostrophe)