The Anomaly Of Regahn

Post » Sat May 28, 2011 6:35 pm

Once again, you really need to work on those spelling errors. Spell check helps. Also I found the dialogue quite confusing, sometimes I got lost and couldn't figure out who was saying what. So work on your spelling errors and confusing dialogue. Also to help you should put thoughts in italics instead of "quotes". I've said a lot before and if you look back and work on what I've said, it should be a much easier read.

Sorry about that, I'm really fraking sick (I use sci fi words in place of words Bethesda forums frown apon).
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Note: Email me or reply to this if you want me to make a machinima out of the last few episodes.

"At least now we know where to look for some one that has a plane."

"SHUT UP MILO! You never stop talking and no one cares about what you do say. And no one listens but we still HEAR it. In the end its all a mad coagulation of thoughtless thought!"
Regahn and Blaire looked at him shocked.

"......what? That wasn't-" "Oh hello Regahn I'm Blaine. You have a pretty [censored] up mind."

Note: Oh and Regahn's mind filters out words frowned upon in the Bethesda forums.

CHAPTER6:Psycho

The man had no name. As did his parents. They had no use for names or lives with what they where doing. But never did any of them wonder why they where doing it. They never thought for themselves, they just knew what they where ordered to do. Orders left on the megacomputer's memory. They never questioned who they where from. The namless people where humans. And its not in human nature to question.
He was the last one left. He had turned mostly bald at that point. So he just sat there in the dark, staring into the computer screen code named: WDYTR.
This was the only computer screen that ever turned on. All the others where either smashed, turned off, or just not mentioned in the orders.
He knew only to watch every thing through the eyes of this person and record every thing that he did.
WDYTR then did something the namless man didn't expect. He poisoned himself.
*************

"Stop him Milo! Stop him!"

"Regahn what the hell is wrong with you this time?!" Milo yelled at Regahn as he began atttempting to gouge his eyes out with his own finger nails.

"You can't kill me! I'm INVENCIBAL!" Blaine screamed and threw Regahn off of the bridge they where traveling over.
Milo and Blaire still didn't know what was happening to Regahn. They only saw him seemingly attempt to brutalise himself repeatedly.

Regahn attempted to swim upwards out of the river he had been thrown into while Blaine attempted to drown him.
Regahn then started slicing at his leg with a strieght razor he found burried in a mole rat.

"Oh, [censored] your crazy!"Bliane yelled in pain.

Milo, seeing Regahn had been under for almost ten minutes and there was a massive amount of blood in the water, decided it was a good time to save him.
He jumped into the unnatrualy warm irradiated water and pulled Regahn onto a rock.

"What the hell? Don't save us!" Blaine yelled at him and pushed him into the water.

"I'm sorry!" Regahn said and attempted to pull Milo back up. Regahn had already tore his trench coat in half and was using one half to stop the massive amount of blood coming from his leg.
Blaine pushed them back onto the rock and bashed Regahn's head into the rock.
The both disely fell back into the water onto Milo who was attempting to swim back to the surface.

Regahn's Journal 4/9/98
Annnnnd I just developed Split personality disorder. I remeber reading about this only once. Apparently its so rare that most humans didn't think it existed. But it makes scence for me to have it. I believe it is caused when the brain undergoes so much stress it developes something that it needs to survive. Which is ironic because we keep attempting to kill each other. This may be because of the restraints set by the chip in my brain stem. Or maybe I don't have it at all and I was just expected to come to that conclusion for- So, Annie Are You OK
Are You OK, Annie
Annie Are You OK?
SHUT IT! I hate this because it interfiers with thinking.
Milo and Blaire are confused and worried about it. I'm more worried about being able to record every single detail of every day before my memory blanks.
Maybe it will turn out to be helpful if it is SPD. The truth is that all we really know is You've Been Hit By
You've Been Struck By -
A Smooth Criminal
Ya, I can't stand this. [i]Come back strong with fifty belly dancers!

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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 4:54 pm

Note: SPD is a real mental disorder.

New patient
Name: Ron Wadyetir
six: Male
Age: 17-20
Race: Caucasian
Eye Color: Bright green with small blue streak in left eye (possibly developing blindness)
Hair Color: Black with premature white hairs
Addictions: Piano music
Allergies: Mutfruit and raisens (yet strangley not the graqes we have "cultivated")
Inventory: 2 Scoped magnums, fedora, umbrella, odd combat knife (looks like a home modification), ipod (strangest of all, looks like it was previously smashed beond repair), and other micellanious items.
General problems: Massive blood loss, extreme radiation poisoning (strangley this seems to not be affecting him), gashes mainly on one leg, slight head truama, watch glass blocking artaries in left wrist, glass wound penetrating left hand, burn markes on chest area, abnormaly pale, mentaly unstable
Company: None
Notes: Found seemingly unconsious. Electrical medial equipment malfunctioned in his proximity.


"Hope these burn well."

CHAPTER 7:Mindless

Regahn quickly surveyed the situation.
Blaine blew up the bomb I was disarming.

And not even that killed you skittering littile bastard that just WON'T DIE!

I found the bomb in the apartment full of traps. But Riley wasn't there, so Blaire might have led us into a trap like I was expecting.
No thats not right. I planned on that, so I would have survived.

"Well we're here aren't we?"

"And that brings us to this point" Regahn thought holding up his documents he pickpocketed from the docter.
Just as he held up the lighter he concieled from the docters, the door busted down and in the hallway was a gigantic brute of a human.
The thing was about seven feet tall and looked as though he could rip apart a super mutant with it's own hands.

"Roid rage." Regahn said, amazed by the thing-in-the-door.
*************
Milo finaly awoke. He looked around and saw that it was night.

"God, how long was I asleep?" He thought to himself.

He then saw Blaire pull herself out of the ruble and look around daised.
In a blind fury he attempted to lurch up and dislocated his shoulder. He screamed and saw that there was a large stone wall holding down his arm.

"Oh god!" She said and ran over to pull his arm free.

He, however, heard none of this but simply kicked the 120 pound wall off his arm and jumped up running at her.

"Ah well this will be a littile difficult to explaine." She thought and turned running.
************

The brute lunged at Regahn with Regahn's combat knife.

"Now how did- Hey he has your knife!" Blaine interupted Regahn's thoughts with.

The brute buried the knife in the hospital bed. Regahn rolled off the bed and under in. He then kicked the brute in the leg muscel, colapsing him.

The human like thing then attempted stabing at him thus shreding the bottom of the bed.

Regahn then burried his toe into the brute's eye. He realed up and knocked over the bed with his head.

Regahn caught the bed with his feet and pushed it back into the monster's stomache.

In the split second that he stumbled, Regahn threw the syringe he saw on the table at him hitting him in the chest.

The beast knocked the desk full of sergical equipment at him sending multiple sharp objects at Regahn. He blocked this by pulling the food tray out from behind him and ducking next to the bed with his petiful sheild.

He caught one object that looked like an over the top pizza cuter and threw it back. The saw stuck into it's neck and staied there.

The brute ran at Regahn, knocking over multiple large obejects as he went.

He streched out one hand to Regahn's neck which Regahn stuck with a scalpel he had seen on one of the lamp desks.

The brute put it's hands around Regahn's throught and lifted him off the ground pushing him against the wall as Regahn stuck sharp objects into him.

He pushed a knife he had noticed stuck into a wall into it's neck, a bone saw that was on a shelf into it's arm, a jackknife which had been in the docter's pocket into it's back, a chord Regahn then tore out of the tv shocking it.

The brute was momentarily dazed from this and Regahn kneed the empty syringe he had thrown into it's chest thus pumping air into the brute's heart.

It fell forward slowly and out the window. Regahn got up and looked around.

"Gotta write it all down, gotta-" He then noticed he didn't have his notebook. He ripped the top of a desk off and began carving into the wood with a scalpel.

He looked up at the clock and saw that it was about to be one AM.

"Uh oh."
************

Milo lurched onto Blaire's back, knocking her down.

"You betraied me AGAIN!?" He screamed in her face shaking her. "Now Regahn's dead because of you!"

"Umm, how do I put this? I was betraied this time........"
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 6:19 am

Note: Riley is addicted to radiation.

CHAPTER 8:Dependant

Regahn looked around. He was in a hospital.

"Why am I here? And where is Milo and Blaire?"

He looked at the clock.

"Its one in the morning. That explains something."

Thats when he noticed the board he was holding and the one incompleete word carved into it.

Assassins
***************

"It's raining, we need to get under something. If only we had Regahn, he always had everything for any situation-" Blaire stoped when she saw Milo's expression.

"We don't know that hes dead. We didn't find any traces of him." Milo said looking hopefull.

"Milo, his weird skitso thing blew him up-"

"Have you not seen the things hes been through? He could have survived...."

They where in a tunnel now. The tunnel looked as though someone had intentionaly dug a hole into the sewer system.

In order to get his mind onto a more pleasent subject Blaire said, "Wow I wonder whats crawling around back there....." looking back into the tunnel.
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Regahn looked out into the hallway and saw one of the things he expected. A zombie.
It wasn't a ghoul, but a zombie.

Regahn figured it was some parasitic spore or small creature that came into the brian from the ears and eat away the brain, from the strage red tentacles squirming out of the ears and sides of the head.
Hoping this didn't cause any outstanding behaviore he inched past it, pushing himself against the wall.

"Ha," Blaine said still looking at the sad thing, "Mindless morons." He then turned and saw the horde staring him in the face.

"Uh oh." Regahn said for the second time that day.

One of the less far-gone zombies screeched, "Don't touch me you [censored] cloud!" And ran at him in a strange motion. This triggered a reflex in all of them.

"RUN!" Blaine sccreamed. And as Reghan ran past the medical desk he stabbed Blaine in the arm with a ball point pen.

Blaine then steered Regahn into a door.

Regahn woozly turned and fell out of a window. He fell through a tarp onto a picknick table and landed ontop of a birthday cake with several skeletons surrounding it, frozen in the motion of cheering as zombies smashed into the ground all around him.
***************

"Look, I can't explaine it. You'll have to meet him." Blaire said staring at a spot in the distance.

"How do I do that? And what do you keep going on about?"

She sighed and gave him the page torn out of a note book she found on the short wave radio in the apartment.

Numa yei Blaire. Bretterbude auf dem Hügel.

".......what?" Milo said, strangley more confused by what it was written on.

"Hes confusing, I know, but it means hes most likley right there." She said pointing at the shack in the distance.

"And if he is, this should work." She then turned on the modified radio.

"Oi vey, merriley. Be the she that would murder the wolf of court?" Came this lunaticial voice from the radio.

"Yes, its Blaine."

"Oh thie has seen none so for a rainfall in DC."

"Wait! We can't leave without Regahn!" Milo said. "We didn't even look well.

"We can figure that out when we get there." Blaire said and pulled him out of the tube.

It was then that they heard the screeching coming from within the tube.

"We need to go. Now." Se said.

The zombies erupted out of the tube after them. Streaming up the hill.

"Start the plane." Blaire said into the radio.

"What? No! Don't start the plane!" Milo said pulling the radio from her as they jumped over a fallen marsh tree.

"Right, who are you." The voice from the radio came again.

"What who is this?" Milo asked and nearly triped over a vine.

"Zombies are after us, start the bloody plane!" Blaire said pulling the radio back.

The zombies where crawling through the trees and the marshes now.

They cleared the marshes just as the zombies poured out of it.
The plane was already being raised out of the ground on what looked like a service elevator.
They ran up the hill as the zombies where nearly on top of them.

Milo jumped and cut off the hand of one of the zombies about to reach them.
The plane began to start as they jumped into it.
The zombies scratched at their shoes and attempted to pull themselves into the plane.

"Riley we need to go now!" Blaire screamed.

Milo pulled his rifel out from behind him and began fireing into the crowd of at least thirty zombies.

"Wait! We don't-" Milo said and as the plane lurched sideways from the zombies.

"Guys, whats that?" Riley said calmly, looking out the window at the bottom of the hill.

A rock then flew over the hill and struck Blaire in the side of the head.

Milo looked in the direction and his expression faded into happiness, then shock and slight depression.
Regahn ran up the hill carrieing a duffel bag over his shoulder and appeared to be stabing himself in the hand and throwing strange objects behind him.
Then the army of zombies flew over the hill behind him.
The objects exploded then, giving Regahn a few more feet between him and the zombies.

The zombies attacking the plane then also began to run at him.
As they began enclosing him in a circle he started throwing random things on the ground at the advancing horde in both directions.
Milo started shooting into the zombies around Regahn so he could run through at least those.

"Planes ready, we can't wait for him." Riley said over the roar of the engines.

The plane began to take off as Regahn rolled under several of the zombies and continued to sprint twords them through the horde.
The plane made it about nine feet into the air when he reached them.
Regahn threw the duffel bag into the zombies inbetween him and the plane. He then jumped from the zombies and barley cought the plane with one hand.
Milo jumped down after him and caught Regahn by the hair as he fell.

"Ow! Damn you, I need these brain cells!" Regahn yelled and pulled himself onto the plane.

"Oh ya, why did Riley have your note book?" Milo asked as he pulled a book out of their pilot's shirt sleeve and gave it to Regahn.
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 10:01 am

You've got the spacing and dialogue down okay. It's much less confusing to read now, so let's focus on the spelling errors. If for some reason you can't get Microsoft Word or Open Office, then why don't you send the chapters to me? I'll edit them for you, because your spelling is pretty bad.
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 5:54 am

You've got the spacing and dialogue down okay. It's much less confusing to read now, so let's focus on the spelling errors. If for some reason you can't get Microsoft Word or Open Office, then why don't you send the chapters to me? I'll edit them for you, because your spelling is pretty bad.

I've tried downloading spell check thingys but none worked. Links?
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 6:05 am

Note: Any of the charecters can die at any time (Especialy Regahn) It dosn't mean the story will end.

Riley's Log 4/11/78
I walked in on the weird one that all the assignments have been about. It was so strange. He was smashing a ladle over his head. Only he had attached guitar strings to it.
Said he was making a new instrument “Just in case.” Then his voice got a Boston accent and he started screaming that everything was so obvious.
Then he threw it through the glass window! Bastard!


CHAPTER 9: Deliverance

They where stranded on lake Michigan now. They had to set down for fuel, only, they where in the middle of one of the most highly irradiated masses of water.

“What?” Milo said.

“I said, sea monsters.” Riley replied without blinking.

Regahn then walked out onto the side of the plane that had extended outwards to float more effectively.

“Hi what are we eating?”Regahn said being sure to look as nonchalant as mortally possible. The word normal wasn't normal for Regahn so both of them immediately stared at him strangely.

“Damn.” He said bluntly and began writing in his notebook again. And for the first time that morning, he looked up at the gigantic lake they where now stranded in.
He stood there for a second, emotionless. His eyes slowly widened about two centimeters. He shrieked madly and ran back into the plane being sure to intentionally knock himself out on Blaire's DO NOT DISTURB sign.

She then opened the door and looked down at the nearly inanimate thing that had woken her.

“Son of a [censored].” She said looking up at the shore line then back down at Regahn repeatedly.

“Nice.” Blaine thought to him.

“I guess Milo and I are the scouting party now. Seeing as Riley has to stay with the ship and Regahn is a [censored].”
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“I guess we can find fuel in the creepy, dead, and frankly disturbing sea side town.” Milo continued to rant about as they closed in on the hotel.

Blaire, who was more interested in the disease ridden thorns and....... air, said, “Why me? Why does he do these things to me?”

“Because no one likes or trusts you for various reasons. You first!” Milo said, booting her through the door.

Blaire lit the lantern they brought with them and looked around the dark, dead room.
They both gasped when they looked at the bed. There where cultist symbols written all over the walls and an enormous skeleton-like idol that seemed to be growing out of the bed and consuming a nearly fully decomposed corpse.

“Nah! Ouh- ge- away!!!” Milo sputtered remembering the cultists in Vegas.

Then Blaire saw the thing in the corner.
It was a small, deformed, mutated child like thing. Which Blaire jumped over the bed to get to.
It looked at her with a scared expression with gigantic, black eyes. She put her hand out to it as if she expected it to smell it.

“Gah! Hic! Kill it!.” Milo said and began convulsing.

“No, its just scared. It'll- OW! Whoa motherfu-” She screamed as it bit her ring finger off.
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Regahn woke up a short while after Riley kicked him in the side.

"What? No! Sleep!" Regahn said bluntly and attempted to fall back asleep on the side of the plane.
It was then that a Leviathan tentacle wrapped around his leg and proceeded to drag him to the bottom of the lake.

"Regahn! Wake up!" Blaine yelled at him.

Blaine started kicking the giant mutated octopus like creature in what appeared to be a useless eye.

Riley looked into the water dumbfounded.
Twelve tentacles shot out of the water then and began searching blindly for something else to eat. One punched through a window and out the other.
Riley jumped over it and ran to the back of the plane. He pushed through the storage room door and started throwing random things out of his way, looking for the spear gun.
The tentacles wrapped all the way around the plane and began pulling it under the water.
Riley grabbed the spear gun and was thrown into the side of the plane which was now all most the floor.
He climbed through the window onto the top of the plane and started slicing through the tentacle. It came off and the plane tipped back up.
A tintacle unsurfaced and wrapped around him, pulling him off the plane.

Another one shot out of the water carrying Regahn.
He yawned and was pulled back under again.
***************

Milo ran around the table and attempted to kick the thing but it only latched onto his foot and started chewing threw his shin.
He screamed and flung it out the window, almost impaling himself on one of the ritual staffs.

Blaire had already wrapped what used to be her finger in whatever she could find in the medical cabinet.
Thats when they both heard the moronic laughter coming from outside.

Milo stepped twords the window but heard a snap and fell down.
Almost the worst pain he had ever felt shot up hos leg. He looked down and saw that the thing had chewed almost through his shin bone which had caused his entire foot just above the ankle to snap off.
He didn't say anything but just tied his belt around his leg to stop the bleed out.
Blaire stumbled over to him and tied her jacket around his leg.

"Hic.......shoot it.........." Milo groaned.

Blaire jumped up and started tearing the shelves out of the hotel room cupboards looking for something to fight them off.
She looked out the window keeping herself out of view. There where four mutated swamp dwellers walking slowly twords the room.

Milo reached under the bed and found a Wes 44. He put it in his mouth and started crawling back to the bathroom with his hands.

Blaire started tearing through the closet and found a suitcase under the floor boards.
She pried it open and a contraption that consisted a butterfly knife blade that someone had attached to a medical bracer and compressed it so that if someone attached it to their arm and put their hand all the way up it could swing outward.
She didn't have much time to get it on before the door was axed apart.

It ran at her and put the axe over his head ready to drop it on her.
She looked up and fell backwards as a large hole appeared in it's stomach. Contaminated blood flew out of the back of it.
It dropped the axe (cutting off it's own arm) and looked down through it's stomach.

Blaire jumped back up and cut it's throat with the wrist blade.

The second one pushed through as she dropped to the floor and cut it's thin leg.
It squeeled and shot randomly around the room with an MP40.

Milo attempted to shoot that one too but had to take cover in the bathtub. A three bullets landed into the wall around his head and he quickly pushed himself all the way in.

The other two ran in behind it and the second ones hand was immediatey shot by Milo blind firing over the edge of the bathtub.

Blaire crouched and cut the end of the MP40 off.

"Fragh!" It said and fell down.
Blaire started stabbing it in the face while the other two looked at her.

"Ha!" One said and walked twords her with a lethal looking butter knife.

Milo shot out a boarded up window causing all of them to look at the bathtub.

Milo's face had gone pale and his vision was fading in and out. He looked down and saw that a massive amount of blood was coming from his leg.
He looked over and blurrily saw Blaire pounce on one of them as another lifted began to hit her with an axe.
He shot almost blindly at it and saw it stop before the axe fell on her. It fell over side ways and he saw Blaire turn to look back at it.
The one she had pounced on hit her in the back of the head with a board and Milo's vision blurred again.
His vision started to return slowly as he saw the thing walk up to the bathtub and stand over him.
Milo slowly and painfully raised the magnum to it's face.

Click
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Many things that had been on the plane floated down around Blaine. He grabbed Riley's Katana that was floating next to the Leviathan.
Blaine sliced the tentacle that was wrapped around him off and plunged the Katana into what looked like the creature's face.
He then swam to the surface dodging the tentacles and saw Riley being thrown around as he surfaced.
Riley shot at the tentacles with the spear gun but missed his aim by a good seven yards.
*****************

Milo's vision was able to focus long enough to see the thing raise the knife.
It was then that a spear went through it's neck.
*****************

Just as Blaine crawled back onto the plane the creature's mouth came up from the water and started latching onto the plane.
Water flowed down between it's teeth as it swam up at Regahn.

"What did I miss?"

Blaine crawled backwards away from the edge.

"I just saved us."

Regahn caught a can that was rolling twords the creature's mouth and threw it onto one of it's teeth.

"Huh, thats a strange thing for you to do."

Blaine jumped onto the side of the plane that was now the roof and hung on to a window seal.

"Yes but if you die a virgin I die a virgin."

Regahn threw a chair at it, still hanging on.

"How do you know? I can't make new memories. I have to read what I've done out of a damn book."

Blaine saw the medical case that was attached to the wall.

"Well I-" He started to say but was thrown down twords the Leviathan’s mouth.

Regahn grabbed on to it's tooth and injected it with one of the parasites he had taken from one of the dead zombies.

"Nice, I didn't even notice you had pulled that from the medical cabinet." Blaine said to him.

A greenish tentacle popped out of the creatures fore head and it slowly slid under water.
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Note: A --------- line means a flashback.

CHAPTER 10: Dragonfly

Milo returned to consciousness rapidly and confused.
He was lying in a grass hut which looked like it was held together by mud (some of which was dripping into his open mouth from the roof) and grass.
He coughed and rolled over onto the ground.
He had been lying on a hotel mattress that was being held up by pieces of bamboo.
Looking down he saw that his leg had been wrapped in dead banana leaves which where coated with some kind of hardened yellow liquid.
Strangely, it wasn't infected.
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11/18/77

"No keep it." Milo said.

"No, you've too much already. Why do you care so much?"

"I don't know, I just do. Keep it." He said again.

"Hey, you two! We need to go!" the administrator yelled to them from down the hall.

"Don't wait for me, I'm not ready yet."

"Okay, but we can't wait for long." Milo said and ran down the hall.

Blaire waited for him to go and then turned back to her locker.
She took the two wave radio out from under the packs of powder nitro.

She sighed and said "They'll be there in 400."
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Milo limped out the door and almost fell form the top of the cathedral the hut was set on.
He was looking out at a graveyard on a hill the cathedral was built on.
He tried climbing the ladder leading to the bell tower with the stair case. This took time because he was missing a foot.
Painfully, he struggled down the stairs not taking much time to look at the scenery.
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"Go." Christopher said.

Christopher was the leader of the band of mercenaries who then kicked open the door and flooded into the building.
The flash lights attached to the guns swept over the destroyed and light-less room.
One of the mercinaries kicked over a couch that revealed a switch on the floor.

"Get ready." Christopher said pointing to an unassuming wall.

The mercenary pushed the button and moved next to the wall.
It slid open and light flooded into the room revealing a long hallway leading to an armored door.
Christopher held up his hand and walked into the hallway.

"Ron." He called to another mercenary who followed him and began searching for traps.

"Clear." Christopher said and the mercenaries began filing into the hallway.

Milo (who was standing at the back of the group) smiled to Blaire who sighed, releaved.
It was then that the hallway exploded.
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Milo opened the door leading to the cathedral.
He fell forward and looked up to see Blaire on a throne that looked like it was once used for priests with tribals surrounding her holding torches.
The tribals where all painted white and had scars on their shoulders and knees.
She looked up at him cringed.
It was then that he noticed that he had been wrapped around the waste with a grass skirt.

"What?" He thought and then noticed a tribal in the far side of the room who was obvoiding eye contact with him and was wearing his pants.
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"No." She said out loud as Milo was thrown into her from the force of the explosion.

Troops then filed out of the room shooting at anyone left.

She pulled Milo behind an office desk and ducked down, shocked.
Milo looked over the desk and began firing back at them.

"Wait!" She yelled and pulled him back.

A troop wearing mainly brown leather walked out from behind all of them and shot one of the mercenaries in the head.
Milo rolled over the desk and raised the two mini uzis to him.
He threw a knife at him that hit Milo in the shoulder. All the bullets Milo fired hit the floor or wall as he reared back wards.
Both of them then pulled pistols on each other and Blaire jumped in between them.

"Blaire, what?!" They both said, confused.

"You said no one would be hurt!" She yelled at the man.

"We can't risk it. You know what happened last time." He replied, still pointing the gun at Milo.

"What-" Milo started to say looking confused.
He dropped the gun and stared at her.

"Wh-" Milo started to babble.

"Sad." The man said and shot Milo in the side from under her arm.

He saw Blaire say something and run to him but his ears where ringing.
She tried to catch him but he pushed her away and fell to the floor.
He looked up and saw the dragonfly necklace dangling from her neck from where she was standing.
He grabbed the uzi he had dropped and began firing into the troops.
Seven of them fell and the man threw himself to the floor.
Milo then reached over and pulled a grenade out of Christopher's pocket.
He pulled the pin from it and rolled it across the floor to them.
He then pulled himself up and limped twords the window.
The man made it back into the room and closed the door as the grenade explosion blew Milo through the window of the tower.
************

Milo limped forward, confused.
He stumbled forwards and two of the tribals caught him.

"Wow, that’s refreshing." He said and looked around at all of them.

"What...... happened?" He asked no one inperticular looking around.

"We discovered you and your master dieing in the room as the prophecy foretold." One of them said.

"Why aren't I dead?" Milo asked.

The tribal coughed and said, less mystically, "We shared our blood with you."

"You now have AIDS." Blaire mouthed to him.
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The punctuation and spelling needs a little work. Plus, if you could do something to the writing style to make it stand out a little more, that could work. Overall, I find it entertaining. So I'll continue to read. :D
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Note: Riley is clinically insane unless he has a task to preform.

Regahn looked down at the water sadly.

"Poor Leviathan."

"Well thats one thing we have in common." Blaine said sadly.


"Where'd thie androidic an rainfall stand ah?" Riley said, flailing around the plane.

"Most likely that cathedral that recently started smoking." Regahn said pointing to the hill mostly covered by fog.

"Oi?! No shizno mayeth determin the mine of mine!" Riley said amazed.

"Well I can understand your thought pattern well enough to understand you." Regahn said while trying to pull the battery acid out of a fission battery.

"Oi vey merriley!" Riley said and flung himself on Regahn with intention of hugging him.

"God thats irritating."

"Foggy carnival!" Riley said happily hugging at Regahn.

Regahn then tazed him in the side of the neck with the tazer he had pick pocketed off of Blaire.
Riley collapsed and Regahn rolled him onto a life boat.

CHAPTER 11 Lithium

"Okay, well I'm going now. Good bye." Milo said turning to the door of the cathedral.

"Wait- what?" One of the tribals said and ran after him.

"Prophecy prophecy!" Twelve more yelled and ran after him.

"Don't care." Milo said pushing past them.

"Wait, where are you going?" Blaire said grabbing his shoulder.

"To find something to fuel the plane with, then to DC away from you."

"But what will I do?" Blaire said looking nervously back at the tribals.

He turned back to her and said, "Blaire, in the time I've known you I've been shot six times, blown through a window, became the new obsession of several maniacal cults including this one, blown off a tower, lost a foot-"

"That one-" Blaire started but Milo cut her off.

"And now you've given me AIDS!" Milo said. Several of the tribals turned to look at them.

"Technically they gave you AIDS." She said pointing to the tribals as several more turned to look at them.

"Okay, I got AIDS from thirty guys living in the woods who most likely have never had a shower in their lives. That’s only slightly better than from you." He said and turned back to the door.

"What?"

"Prophecy?" The tribals babbled confused.

Milo touched the door handle and was thrown back as it was kicked open by Riley who immediately began firing into the crowd of tribals.
This continued for five minutes until the clip in the two scoped magnums he was holding ran out of bullets.
He then grabbed Milo and Blaire and pulled them out of the door.

"Riley what the hell?" Milo said confused.

"Hes saving you." Regahn said walking next to them looking bored.

"But..... prophecy....." The tribals (none of whom had been hit) said standing at the door looking confused.

"Who’s with the plane?" Blaire asked tripping over the bamboo shoes the tribals had put her in.

"We are." Regahn said leaning on the plane which they had landed down next to the cathedral.

"I just attached the battery from the light house ,that apparently I was the only one who noticed, and put a massive amount of battery acid into it. Its actually now powered by the sun. Its amazing how the-" It was about then that everyone else tuned out of Regahn's rant.

"But.... pants." Milo said sadly as the plane began taking off.

"Well I planed for the shirt." Regahn said and threw something in the shape of a shirt at him.

"What is this made out of?" Milo asked turning it over.

"Just some clothes that wouldn't fit you that I found crumpled up next to a hotel bed while we where looking for the fission batteries."

Milo threw the shirt off the plane as though it where another mutated hic creatures.
What none of them knew, however, was that the shirt contained a disease similar to the black plague for the creatures which where getting ready to swarm the cathedral.
The shirt landed on the head of a scout that then returned to the rest of the band of deformed maniacs obsessed with the destruction of the tribals.
It was all part of a religious war which the shirt quickly ended.
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Note the story is still just at the beginning.

Regahn's Journal 4/15/78

This ship could be so much simpler. Turning and engine techniques are made to look so complex but really if you rewire the lower corridor then it would be alot more effective.
Most of these components aren't even needed. Of course, I have to root through the ship's internal compounds at night when every one else is asleep. Riley doesn’t like seeing me pull wires out and plugging them into other experimental areas.
Its not like humans need sleep, they just think they do.


CHAPTER 12 Blind

Riley was thrown off his bunk by the force of an explosion hitting the side of the ship. His head hit the far wall giving him a severe concussion.
*************

Blaire, who had gotten up to check outside, was thrown out of the plane by the massive explosion.
*************

Milo, who had gotten up to see what Blaire was doing, was thrown back against his door. Then the radio Regahn had finally fixed (which was playing "Dragostea din tei") hit Milo in the head, followed by Regahn knocking them both back into Milo's room.

"Well that went well." Regahn said, still sitting on Milo.

"What did you do?" Milo asked, attempting to push him off.

"I fixed a radio." Regahn said, pointing at the crushed mass sticking out of Milo's scrap metal sculpture.

"Ya, for once he didn't break anything." Blaine said getting up and pulling Milo's 50 caliber sniper rifle out from under his bed.

"How-" Milo started to say confused.

"Oh I don't know why he notices these things." Blaine said moving to the window.

"I should make a shirt that says that!" Regahn thought.

"Why me? And why you?" Blaine said out loud.

"What?"

"No one cares about you Milo!"

"I do." Regahn said.

"Oh your god, this is confusing!" Blaine said without noticing the grappling hook wrapping around his foot.

"You just can't think as fast as me."

"You just talk to much while I'm saving us!"

"Why are you here? You don't do anything helpful."

"You're the one who has reapeatedley try to kill us."

"So did you!"

Milo stared at them open-mouthed. Too many emotions where colliding in him at that point to make sense of it all.

"Shut up! Just SHUT UP!" They continued.

"[Censored]"

"How can I live with your self?"

"There you go agai-" Blaine was cut off by the hook pulling them out of the plane in a fraction of a second.

The rifle landed at Milo's feet. But he was too shocked and confused to notice.
****************

Blaire stood up, shaken.
She looked up and saw that the plane was being attacked by...... another plane.
This was confusing because Riley was the only one she knew of having a plane and knowing how to use it.

"Unless....."
*****************

Milo found Riley on the floor bleeding from the head.

"Riley? Wake up! We need to-"

He then found the head wound.
Milo ran back out the cabin door and would have been hit by a harpoon if he hadn't tripped over Regahn/Blaine's shoe.
He shot at what looked like a window and ran to the medical cabinet.
Another hook came up through the floor and cut the side of his foot (he was still wearing what the tribals gave him and one of Regahn's shirts made out of a couch).
He wrenched it open and pulled out anything that could stop bleeding.
Another explosion threw him into Riley's door.
Just as he pulled it closed behind him, a harpoon nailed it shut to the metal door frame.
*****************

It looked as though they where trying to attach to Riley's plane by shooting hooks and harpoons into it.
Blaire then heard the sound that she was hoping she would never hear again.

*Bleep*

She sighed and pulled back her sleeve revealing the device attached to the bone in her arm.

She pressed a button on it and said into it, "I'm at the base of the rock the ship is on."
*****************

"Hmm this is a weird sensation....."

Regahn's brain then straightened out and he realized he was hanging upside down.

"What have-"Blaine started but Regahn's slammed the hard part of his palm into his right ear.
Blaine cringed and passed out.

Another hook that had failed to latch onto the plane started falling back twords Regahn.

"Not pleasant!" He swung out of the way, twirling wildly, and started trying to climb up the rope.
****************

A rope was let down next to Blaire who latched on and was pulled up to the ship.
When she was let in through the hatch she immediately stormed past the guards waiting to greet her and ran into the main room.
The plane was militarist and much more advanced than Riley's transportation plane.
And at the center of all of it was the same man who shot Milo only months ago.

"Father what the hell are you doing?"
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Note: This one is short, sorry.

"Your no longer needed with this one." The man said.

"I told you I would contact you if I found anything!" Blaire yelled at him.

"Things have changed."

"So being so [censored] blunt and explain for once!"

He stopped and turned to look at her. After standing there for a few minutes he said, "This is no longer about your target."

"You know of the basic reason of the order but not everything." He continued.

"Get to the point." Blaire said.

"We're well beyond containing it." He said and turned away from her.

"What? What happened?" She said urgently.

"It would sometimes escape and kill some of our forces controlling it's containment area and then return on it's own as if it knew somehow." He told her.

"But recently it finally killed its guardian and several soldiers from the faction whom where trying to break into the vault and steal it back." He continued.

"Look, your wasting your time looking for it here. I'll stay with them and if I learn anything I'll contact you." Blaire said.

"Its here, we tracked it using the chip." The man said as he began pressing more buttons on the ship panels.

"Well its obviously not here, are you really this desperate? How many branches did this thing take out?" Blaire asked.

He stood there and then said, "Retract all." Into one of the panels.

"Alright, but tell us if you need extraction." He said.

"Ok, but I need to be dropped back off." Blaire said, turning.

"Oh and blaire be careful." The man said.

She stopped and looked back at him. "We need you." Her father then said.

"Sure." She said with a blank stare and walked out.

As soon as she left the ventilation shaft collapsed and a portion of it landed in the middle of the room.
Regahn busted through the top of roof of the metal tube and leapt out, crouching on top of it like a cat. "What the [censored]?" He said to the one of the ship's pilots siting in a chair next to where the tube collapsed.

CHAPTERTrail of blood

"You spin me right round, baby right round-"

"Shut it Blaine!"


Two guards lept onto Regahn's back. Regahn tore the badges out of their pockets and put them into their eyes.
He stepped forwards and they both fell forwards on each side of him, writhing on the floor.
There was a short, awkward pause when everyone in the room looked at him while still comprehending what was happening.
He then leapt onto a wall dividing two desks and ran across it as guards and technicians attempted to catch him or knock him off.
One of the technicians threw a trash basket at him which he kicked back as he ran.
The trash basket landed one one of the control panels which caused the ship to begin making odd sounds.
Regahn jumped from the divider and caught a claw which swung in a half circle motion around to another compartment of the ship.
He jumped into it as large metal ball hit the claw behind him.

"Close off the ship!" He heard Blaire's father yell.

Regahn heard loud clunking noises around the ship.

"Uh oh....."

"Jump!"
Blaine yelled.

Regahn threw himself through an odd looking shaft in the wall, pressing his hands against the sides to control the assent.
Then there was an amazing moment as he was falling through the forest night air.

"What?" He then hit the ground, attempting to push off with his hands so he would slide less painfully.

"What was that?" Regahn thought, tearing out his note book.

"I'll explain when you can remember it." Blaine said distantly.

Regahn's mind flooded with theories.
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 8:31 am

I think you should do the Machinima. I would watch and comment and even rate(Youtube?).
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I meant to put it that way. I'm hoping that if I leave everything open with many questions people will want to continue to follow. Now that I think about its similar to Memento in alot of ways. So this is prety much apreview instead of a first chapter.


oooh suave
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I think you should do the Machinima. I would watch and comment and even rate(Youtube?).


Most likley youtube and Machinima.com, it'll be in a while though. Many whiles...... although I don't really know what constitutes as a while......
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http://www.gamesas.com/index.php?app=forums&module=post§ion=post&do=reply_post&f=31&t=1102020

Elder Scrolls fan fic I'm working on.
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Well this has an ironic number of views. Sorry for the abnoxious hold up, but the new chapter begins today. Don't worry fans (all four of you) I'm not killing this any time soon :flamethrower:
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Your diligent effort to this story is quite outstanding. A lot of people would've of have given up, but not you, you deserve so kind of medal. Unfortunately I'm fresh out of metal, so all I've got is my unwavering(kinda) support. Keep it up.
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 5:31 am

Reminds me of myslef, doesn't it Ytt.

Yeah, I prolonged my storires life for a loooooong time (count the o's), but I think my last installment could be considered the ending. Either way, keep this up.

KEEP THIS UP!
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Note: Oh my zod, did I just get positive support from the internet?

"Where was I?"

"Hmmm this is an interesting sensation......"

"Uh oh, I remember this. It usually ends in pain."

Regahn moved into the shape he decided would be least damaging judging on the plane floor he was about to hit.

Chapter 14: E.B.E.

Blaire was aboard the plane again, less confused but more shocked.
How could it have killed the sentinels? More importantly what did it even look like now? And How was she supposed to find it?
At least no one had known she left.
But they would wonder why the other plane was suddenly leaving them.

Her train of thought then derailed into a mountain and exploded as another hook exploded through the window and imbedded it's self in the wall two inches from her face.
She didn't even notice when some of the shrapnel reopened one of the wounds on her four-fingered hand.
*****************

"Come sail away, come sail away, come sail away-"

"God your annoying. Either your trying to kill me, your being perverted, your attempting to speak Latin, or your singing!"

"............Domo Arigato, Mr. Roboto!"

"Again, stop trying to speak [cencored] Latin!"


With Dragostea Din Tea pounding through his mind he quickly pulled up a floor pannel with the edge of the butter knife he picked up in the Vegas wasteland.
He then pulled one of the nodes out and burned through one of the hook wires with the sparks.

"B-A-N-" Blaine began.

Regahn quickly stuck the butter knife close enough to the exposed wire to badly shock himself.

"Ow! We both get the pain, you know!"

"Worth..... it......" Regahn managed to say.

He caught the hook wire before it fell out of the plane and attached C4 to it and attached the node to the other end of the C4.
Letting it go, he waited for the wire to be pulled back into the ship. He then pressed the detonator and heard a faint poof.

The friction from the node bouncing around in the small area charged the node so that when the hatch was opened by one of the three cannon maintenance janitors the compressed air threw him into the wall breaking several of his bones.
The now super charged plane core node bounced out of the compartment and around the ship with the force of a hockey puck next to a particle accelerator. Killing several aboard and doing immense damage.

Regahn heard sorrowful muttering from the room holding Milo and Riley.

"Milo how did you do this?" Reghan asked to the door.

Milo looked up and asked, "How did you know it was me?"

"Because your Riley's door. And I named you Milo because Milo dosn't have a door room- Wait, where the hell have I been sleeping?" Regahn prattled.

Milo, remembering this was Regahn he was talking to decided his only hope was to reason with the neurotic way his mind worked said, "I've been stuck to the wall by this harpoon, and Milo is stuck behind me!"

"Why would Riley put up another door behind his?" Regahn asked with a harpoon landing next to his foot.

Milo sighed and said, ".......I don't know, these humans make no sense. Just unstick me or I'll be defective! You insane bastard."

"What?"

"Nothing!"

Just as the second plane began began to recover another much larger, much more foriegn ship descended in between them.
And a big [cencored] death ray shot from it into part of the milital ship.
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Note: Benji's name , unlike many of the character's, doesn't hint at his ethnicity. Hes British.

The maniacal laughter came through the busted radio impailed on the gate and cut through Benji's thoughts like a carving knife.
In the middile of his rant on the low amount of cultrual diversity in Grays recently, Geir turned and threw a fishing pole at the radio from about twelve yards away.
The radio exploded as though it was hit by a lightening bolt.

"I hate that channel." Benji said to the rock he was now using to keep himself sane.

Chapter 15: Otherside

Geir was Benji's alternate personality. They believed he was formed due to the isolated room.
When Benji was five his parents where brutally murdered by what he learned later to be raiders who had read to much about Nazis.
Benji managed to escape the slaughter by crawling under the bed and through the trap door to the isolated room. He called it the isolated room because it was really just a hidden basemant that he spent most of his time in.

For weeks they used his home as a torture chamber for the various waste landers abducted by them in order to learn the secrets of the "resistance".
They never moved the bodies of the victims or his parents, but let them decompose on the floor above him.
The only way for Benji to survive would be the blood pooling up on the floor.

When he was too close to starvation to stand upright, Geir finally developed enough to survive for him.
Three days later when he finally had enough energy to walk, he climbed back up the later while the raiders where sleeping.
He then proceeded to rip one of their arms off and push it far enough down their throat to asphyxiate him quietly.
The rest of the raiders, including the sentry bot, where killed in similar ways.

"Must we kill everything that shoots at us?" Benji asked, annoyed.

"Yes, you limey cream puff." Geir said happily as he impaled a raving imperial with his own bayonet.
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Here is a picture I drew of Riley.

http://galen2900.deviantart.com/art/Riley-178383037
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Note: This is the first time I've written with someone else in the room...... even though hes asleep.

"You sound like a termite committing suicide with amoeba!" Riley screamed going in and out of consciousness.

"Oh great hes making less sense than usual." Milo said while trying to move Riley onto the bed and strap him down.

"Oh no, hes just bored." Blaine said from behind the door.

Riley shot up and yelled, "Domo aregoto Mr. Roboto!" Then faded back again.

"Ok never mind." Blaine said while trying to catch hooks from the other ship.
He pulled one out that had landed in the ceiling and hooked it to the door.
The door was pulled out halfway as another laser cut through the wires for the hooks.

Milo managed to struggle through the door way an dive onto Blaine to avoid shrapnel hitting him.
Blaine shook and said, "What?" without really paying attention.

"Sorry I can't concentrate with him."

"Wha......." Regahn sputtered through a mad roar of thought.

"Oh ya those guys." Blaine said.

Chapter 16: They where here first

Blaire, when recovered enough from shock, began pushing the flight controls in a sad attempt at controlling the plain.
She pushed out of the seat and ran through into the living quarters as it was shelled with shrapnel.
She ducked away from a large part of the hull as a coffee cup shattered under her arm and she quickly tripped over Blaine.

"Where is Riley?" She mouthed to Milo.

"Unconscious!" He yelled just as the sound of the shrapnel stops.

"Ow." Blaine said rubbing his ears.

"What are you doing to my ears, Regahn?" Milo said a littile creeped out.

"Huh?" Blaine said snapping back into reality, "Oh ya like I said hes a littile unresponsive."

"What do we do without Riley?" Blaire said stressed.

"Wow I never realized how important he was." Milo said, still disturbed.

"What about Regahn? He can fly right?"
Regahn then pulled his note book out of his sleeve and began ripping out pages he hadn't used.
He then pricked his finger with a random piece of flying shrapnel and began writing in blood.

Milo, who had at this point gotten an out of it look then said, " [cencored] it." And put the rifle to his head.

"Wait no!" Blaire said shooting up.

The man named Ort then fell through the ceiling and said, "Ohhhhhhhh ya!"

This was the one thing that could ever possibly snap Regahn out of his trance.

"Oh.........[censored]....NO!!!
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Note: Why the hell am I not wearing pants? I don't even remember taking them off, I have no idea what happened to them!

"Careful, buddy!" Ort said as mistook Regahn puncing on him and holding a knife to his throat as Regahn triping.
Regahn cringed at the sound of the word and Milo caught his arm before he could plunge the knife into Ort's face.

"Wait don't kill him, he might be useful!" Milo said while holding Regahn back.

"Kill it!" Regahn screamed brandishing the knife.

Blaire poked it with a peice of metaheold himl and said, "Where did it come from?"

Ort, still smileing, said, "I don't quite rightfully know."

"Bastard! It has to die!" Regahn said now using the knife to scale the floor with Milo being dragged along with him.
Everything thing about Ort cut through Regahn phsyce like melted butter.
His name, the way he was constantly yelling, his inbred lack of intellect, he even constantly used words that Reaghn loathed.

"Um.... who are you?" Blaire asked.

He smiled unpleasantly wide and said, "Ort!"

Regahn's eyes flared.
"Mothe[cencored] ginger [cencored] [cencored] [cencored]!!!"

Chapter 17: Guy FawKes

Benji crawled through the fence of the testing facility with the poison vials securly wrapped around his waste.
He was too busy being quiet that when the cell phone began vibrating he fell down and had to catch it and one of the vials before hiting the ground.

"Do we have to keep updating like this?" Benji said into the phone, annoyed.

The only reply he got was, "Codename?"

"I'm not saying it."

"Codename?"

He sighed and said, "Awsomesauce."

"Now ask mine."

"Your voice is distinctive enough."

"Look we need to be as secure as possible." The voice over the radio said.

"Fine, whats the codename?" Benji replied with less than no enthusiamsm.

"Fawkes#87"

Benji climbed a tree andhung down until the guard he was supposed to take out silently steped under it.
He quickly put both hands over the guard's mouth and swung down into his back in a way that it would induce a short coma.
The phone went off again and he stumbled over the unconcious guard.
It fell to the ground and inconvieniently shattered on a rock.

"Oh son of a tart...." Benji muttered as he attempted to fix the phone.

A guard that had heard the phone go off came up behind him and hit him in the back of the neck with an M4.
*****************

"Awsomesauce? Awsomesauce I've been compramised." Steven said trying to get a response from the phone.

"You realise we can hear you, right?" Said one of the five confused guards standing around him.

"Yes but you don't know who I'm talking to."

The guard taped his mic and said, "He has an accomplice, sweep the perimeter."

"[censored] it." Steven Said.
****************

Benji sprawled out face forwards onto the ground with the guard aiming at the back of his head.

"I found one!" The guard shouted.

Geir quickley puched himself backwards with his hands and kicked the guard in the croach.
The guard stumbled over and droped the M4.
Geir then kicked him in the tempal and knocked him out.

The other guards where coming so he ran to the testing facility and climbed it.
Seeing Steven wasn't there he moved to where he could get a good vantage point of Steven's last position.
****************

Steven's silenced rifle was still above his head because he was in the process of taking it off his back when he was found.

"Put it on the ground, slowly." Another cleched guard said.

He began doing so as he saw Benji drop down behind one of the two guards on Steven's left.
Benji stole a pistol from the one he was behind and held up two fingers.
Steven then pulled the trigger on the rifle and turned it slightly so all three guards on his right where hit with one bullet each.
At the exact same time Benji shot through the guard's neck with his own pistol and into the second guard.

They all droped at once and Benji said, "I told you cell phones would be too loud."

"You didn't have it on vibrate?" Steven replied.
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Sorry for the recent painful spelling errors, there where a few complications.
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