Sounds good, you're very welcome! I did the same thing with my first story, my first few chapters were completely terrible. I expect then that you will go back and edit?

Wow, you are the first person that can deny my critique without me getting the least bit upset

Thanks for writing and please keep it up; I'll try to read more later :goodjob:

Probably because I wasn't denying it
Thanks for the support m8 :thumbsup:
I guess I should look into changing the first chapters (or, rather, improve upon) but tbh, I wouldn't know where to start. They were really fun to write and it's the 1st thing I ever wrote so might be nice to reflect my newer work onto. :shrug:

Apart from the grammar and spelling errors, this really is excellent Usually I notice errors very easily, but the quality of the story has me so enthralled that I have to look to find some of them. Keep up the good work.

I'm sorry to say I am going to ask have this one closed. I need more practise before I am capable enough finishing this as it should.
Updates will follow but don't expect it anywhere soon.
I am working on another fan-fic. One more light-hearted.