Epilogue
In the 1945 Einstein created the ability to split the atom, he created the nuclear bomb, with that the American army used the " Fat man "(FatBoy! was the Nuclear bomb of WWII and it was dropped on Nagasaki!!! LittleBoy was dropped on Hiroshima!!!) on Hiroshima since then war has evolved and so has man, Hitler made Germany into a fully economised country of the 20th century, but War... War never changes, Since when our ancestors learnt the killing power of rock and bone, conflict has gone on through the ages, from God, to War to simple psychotic rage... But war... War never changes. This is the end. (this last bit makes no sence it should be "Blood have been spilled in the name of everything From god, for justice, to simple psychotic rage..." If you are going to rip off a Fallout introduction dont just take some and patch it together, you might aswell just steal all of it, atleast it would make sence)

Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Vault-Tec sells (places in) underground bunkers known as Vaults to the public in case of a nuclear war. They were correct what the public of north Florida don't know is that Vault- Tec is correct.

"Hey how come I can't get an application?" Says a citizen "Sir, were not allowed to give forms out because umm..." Says a Vault-Sec guard "Because it's classified. Tell you what I'll ask you some questions and I'll see if you can have an application form" Interrupts' Sergeant Bill Howard "Okay then." Says the citizen "Okay Question 1. Do you have a wife and children?" "No" "Then I'm sorry that is the main requirement to enter vault 17 as a resident" "What else can I join as?" "You can join as either security or an engineer." "Can I join as a Vault-sec?" "Not here, go to town. Then head to the Vault-Tec building. And go sign up." Says Sergeant Howard "Okay see you later Sarge."(far too formal, does he know this sergeat?) Says the citizen. Bill is age 23 and built like a marine.


Bill walks inside the vault into the atrium where the final parts were being done, he then headed to the living quarters where he lived next to the females quarters just one corridor away. He then went to his hidden safe underneath his bed and entered the code (14, 9, 31, 8) and pulled out the M16 assault rifle and put 3 magazines into his assault vest. He walked back out to the vault entrance which was a long cave that had a wooden door at the end letting light in through the medium sized gaps, Bill thought of it as the escape from the real world as once the vault door closed there's no outside world left to him any more. With the stars still out and Bill missing his wife and kids. Bill looked at his watch "0:23... Going to be a long day. Said Bill
(How does he already have a Safe with Items in if he only just got into the vault? Why is there no explanation asto how he got into the vault??)

"War... War never changes"

I'm going to quote OXM on this one "War....War never changes, the term used by misguided game developers who seek to add phylisophical depth to their new shoot em' up."