The Dawn Of Chaos

Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:50 am

Wasteland 2285

THE Paladin ran faster and farther than he ever thought he could, the carnage he now fled from making him too fearful to even turn his head to check if they were chasing him, stalking him like death itself . He doubted it, he would have been caught by now if they had even half heatedly attempted to follow him and what they would do then, he didn't want to think of it, even in the confusion and chaos of their arrival they had been grotesquely inventive in the carnage they caused. They had taken a child like glee in the horror filled screams and bloody tears of the battled brotherhoods hardened veterans. The Paladin put it to the furthest reaches of the back of his mind as he ran, the towering walls of the citadel and salvation the only thought on his mind. he pushed harder through the pain with the thought of his goal clear in his mind

THE Paladin's heavy armored feet kicked up thick clouds of dusts svcked through his ventilator and sticking to his throat like rubber cement or bad peanut butter making it even harder to breath than it usually was in his hot stuffy power armor. The Paladin coughed and hacked like a plague sufferer as he plowed onwards through pain and revulsion at what he had seen. His power armor clanked and banged around him as he ran with the notable exception of his right arm which was now miles behind him, one shell from the attackers weapons had ripped the limb straight from its socket. The pure adrenaline and the Paladins hand the only things stemming the flow of blood from the horrifying open wound. The Paladin's vision was getting cloudy and dim as he lost more and more blood his vision limited by the delirium caused by the huge loss of blood, he had already forgotten how far he had run with the only fear and the wind driving him forward to his only chance of survival.

AS he ran the Paladin began to try and recap the events that had lead to his current situation. They had been on patrol, looking for remnants of a pack of super mutants that had raided a brotherhood outpost. They had tracked the mutants far across the barren wastes to a plateau far in the south they were the best just below the pride. All were skilled veterans, battle hardened to the extreme and ready for the worst that the super mutants could throw at them. They massacred the mutants without a single loss, laughing and singing on their way back to the citadel. They were as prepared for what followed as the average mirelurk hunter when his pray is replaced with a pack of deathclaw.

THEY had come from the sky, it had started as a twinkle noticed in the peripheral vision by few of the squad as a pretty abnormality. Over the next few minutes it had grown to a small but terrible looking gas in the sky, it looked as if the sky had a septic wound festering in the clouds. Finally it became a pulsating mass of ephemeral gas like tendrils of purple and red. The Squad began to worry at this and moved with their guns consistently trained at the rip in the sky, many uttering hail Marys and crossing themselves, declaring the rift to be the work of the devil. Black solid shapes had started to appear in the turbulent sky, they started as mere dots in the center of the anomaly and grew as they descended until they landed. The beings landed a matter of a few meters from the patrol. The screams had started almost instantly, accompanied by horrible guttural, bestial laughs form the new arrivals blood fell like rain as fear, confusion and death ripped through the screaming ranks of the brotherhood. The Paladin shook the memories from his mind as he ran to the citadel, he did not wish to dwell on the previous events.

THE Paladin's heart jumped as the citadel appeared on the horizon, he was nearly safe . He set his story straight in his mind as he reached the gates. His arrival had drawn a small crowd of knights, Paladins and initiates, they were firing questions at him. "Where was the rest of the squad?" "What Happened?" "Were you followed?" eventually the head medic pushed his way through the throng of concerned people before laying the paladin down and pressing a vodka soaked cloth onto the wound, the pain of the alcohol almost maddening, the paladin writhed and screamed like his fallen comrades in their final moments. The paladin had little strength left before succumbing to the growing mist of unconsciousness, he had lost to much blood. The effort of the paladin had failed to save him but it may well save the entirety of the wasteland. As the Paladin breathed his Final breath he drew words in the sand hoping their meaning would be understood by his comrades.

Rift/Black Death/THEY TOOK OUR SKULLS

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Gemma Archer
 
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:20 am

This will by the way be a joint Fan Fiction with Deadly Sin if she is still interested, we discussed it quite a bit a while ago
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:39 am

I have to say one thing. It's good but the last part what the paladin said. "They took our skulls" Are they predators.?
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:37 am

I have to say one thing. It's good but the last part what the paladin said. "They took our skulls" Are they predators.?



Nope, a far bigger threat, but you are right that it is a cross-over, I'm not gonna say what of though.
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:59 am

Chaos, hmm is it from Warhammer 40k? So far this is pretty good, I'll keep a close eye on this one.
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:19 am

Maybe it's eldar. Hehehe. Actully the most reasonable thing I can think of is flying death claws that have a chairmelion ability like the origanl ones"
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:22 am

CHAPTER 1

" You will be assigned to tackle this mysterious threat. The expectation and faith of the brotherhood rests firmly upon you and your squad, do us proud." The worlds of Elder Lyons were still ringing as Stylian walked from the meeting chambers back to his barracks. His big break was finally here, his squad had braved deathclaw infested sewers, vaults filled to bursting with horrors unspeakable yet they were still overlooked for the high profile assignments in favor of the Redline squad, god rest there souls. Stylian was filled with a cautious optimism for the mission ahead, a chance to finally show Elder Lyon's that his squad was ready for the higher profile missions.

His squad crowded him as he entered the room, they bombarded him with questions, their voices filled with excitement like a child at Christmas, " What happened in the meeting, are we going to the show?" this question came from Stylain's second in command Percy, he was quite possibly the most eager to prove himself in the squad having been in Stylian's shadow for his entire tenure with the brotherhood. " Ok, we all saw what happened with Eric and Redline yesterday. We have been assigned to investigate what happened and put down whoever was responsible. We earned this let's make it count" Stylians voice was filled with excitement and optimism at tackling the challenge ahead. His entire squad broke into hysterical celebration, cheering, pumping the air with their fists and jubilantly hugging each other. Not everyone was celebrating though.

In the corner Stylian's brother and the team's medic Dymitar was silently praying and crossing himself. Stylian walked over to his brother and put a power armor encased arm around his shoulders, he sighed before asking his brother " Why do you not celebrate with the others? this is what we have been working towards for years." Dymitar removed his helmet and looked up to meet his brothers gaze his eyes glazed with the same fear that permeated his voice. " No this is what you have been working towards, I sought to heal and protect, recognition never came into it. I was the first medic on the scene yesterday with Eric, Redline were the best soldiers in the army and you know it, even the pride would be unable to match them in the arena of combat and Eric himself. He was the very apex of soldiers, unafraid to march headfirst into the bowls of hell for his brothers, yet he was killed and his mind broken with fear. Be warned Stylian this is a new threat, one we may not be able to overcome." Dymitar got up a walked over to the rest of the squad and pretended to celebrate the news along with his comrades for the purpose of team morale.
The preparations lasted for days and were notable only through how mundane they were in the face of the sheer excitement of the unknown ahead of them. Laser rifles were calibrated, armor was tested and polished and the soldiers were put through their paces and mentally equipped for what stood ahead.

The squad gathered at the gate of the citadel resplendent in their painted gold amour that gave the squad its name, The golden hammer was ready to swing into battle. The squad had been hand picked by Stylian when he had attained his rank, the new rank of baron introduced three years after the battle of the purifier. They were as well balanced as any squad in the brotherhood, excluding Dymitar the medic they had two super-sledge wielding giants for the messy business of close combat, they had two snipers accurate to a pinpoint from great distances and four of the most hardy, skilled and cohesive commandos in the brotherhood all lead by Stylian.

The sun beat hotter than usual and the soldiers sweated and squirmed in their armor as Stylian went through what his vision of how the squad should tackle the challenge ahead. He had to shout over the ambient noise of training initiates and the usual cacophony of wasteland noise.

" Remember, remember Eric bleeding to death on the floor of the citadel, remember and believe, believe that you can avenge him, that you can stop it happening again. Redline fell so the hammer rises ready to beat down and destroy anything in its wake, we will find these murders, we will find them and we will destroy them."

They began their march through the unforgiving territory, they planned to stop at every major settlement to build a picture of Redline's final days and where they fell and who might have been responsible.

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not so much action but it introduces the main characters.

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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:58 am

I like it.
I'm glad that you actully put some faith/religion in this to seem more real.
Probaly the most I've seen is when a guy yells "holy !@#$". Either way its good.
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Post » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:36 am

it appears that the person I was going to write this with has become incontactable. So anyone who would like to co-write this with me PM me for details, Cheers
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