Name: Kalin
six: male
Race: imperial
Birthsign: thief
Age: 18

Physical Description: average height and build for an imperial but has fairly strong arms from working in the blacksmiths. He has Green eyes, short white hair that often sticks up at odd angles and is often covered in dirt and grime. he is fairly agile but not that fast.

Mental Description: prefers to be on his own and doesn't rely on anyone but himself. he is always grateful for what he has or is given. he is usually calm and collected but dislikes talking about his time on the streets and can get agressive if anyone brings it up.

Special Power Description: can predict, mimic and memorise the movements of a person, creature or object simply by seeing it and can track fast moving objects. Can't reliably mimic movements or track fast objects yet and is often not fast enough to react to what he can see.

Brief History: he lived on the streets of Chorrol and as such had to fend for himself and was always very observant. he often watched members of the fighters guild train. He was taken in by a blacksmith as an apprentice when he was 12. When he tried using a sword he found that he had a 'natural' skill with the blade but when he tried again his skill was gone. He was arrested on trumped up charges and was taken to the door.

Clothing: leather sandals, black shirt and black smith leather pants.
Preferred Weapon: short swords and daggers (has one of each)

If you can improve on the Mental and Physical description, then I'll approve you.

put more detail in the description, tell me if I need more

Approved.

Name: Ja'Khadar
Nickname: Moon
six: Female
Race: Khajiit (Suthay)
Birthsign: The Ritual
Age: 15

Physical Description: Small (about 4"0) and skinny. Short amber fur and one green and one yellow eye.

Mental Description: Conferential. Very instinctive. Streetwise

Special Power Description: Can get her claws to grow twice their normal length

Brief History: Moon's mother worked at Desele's House of Earthly Delights. Her father is unknown. As a kit she lived with her mother, and developed a skooma addiction. When she became adolescent her mother sold her to Desele. Soon after she escaped to Vivec where she lived on the streets, until she was captured by the imperials.

Clothing: A robe that is obviously the cheapest available to buy
Preferred Weapon: Her claws
Misc.: None

It's good, but can you stretch out both descriptions?
If you do that, I'll approve you.

Did some major refleshing, posting it in a new post. Meaning that this one will be locked.