Damn Francois nice chapter. This is making me possibly start maybe considering making my own Fan Fic

Haha, thank you William! I wouldn't mind it if you made a FanFic, that'd be quite interesting I think! I remember doing The Hold Out RP with you I believe...

Yeah, I'm in America. I had no idea they spelled it like that. It surprises me how many people in Australia play this game, didn't they ban it there?

Hell no! Even apart from that, I should technically be a teensy bit young to play this but I was allowed to and I got stuck into it... I haven't stopped since, if you really want to know my age check my profile and figure it out. I'm young by only a little bit though... If they'd banned this game, I'd die!

Actually Francois it was banned as Med-x was origionally called morphine which gave it an R rating, which we don't have

Ah, I understand now! That gives me an insight as to why he said that now... Thanks for the heads up William! Oh and if anyone wants I'm happy to think about writing up another chapter... I'm thinking about what to do with James, did he live or die? I wonder... I even wonder whether the Lone Wanderer should have his point of view speculated...

Yeah, I heard a bunch of crap about Fallout 3 being banned in India and Australia. India banned it because of the 'Karma System' and the brahmins being 'two-headed cows', and one of their make believe gods is a two-headed cow. But I had no clue why they would ban it in Australia, all I remember was it was something about the rating system being to low for the rating the game would actually be. Oh yea, I saw your age. I'm the same age, but the rating over here is 18+, although nobody gives a crap as long as you have parent's permission.

Dude you way over-stepped the boudrary there.

And @ Francois: No I wasn't in the Hold-Out, The Enclave haven't really interested me to be honest, I don't like having the characters already know each other, way less character development

Ahh, yeah, I get what you mean... Now, William, what do you think I should do for this next piece? I'm low on ideas... Even though I have an idea, .

Well I reckon that the LW would probably 'cleanse' the near-by ghouls so as to keep 'his' tower well.....his. Know do we know of any ghouls in the area whom wish harm upon the populace of Tenpenny tower?

Haha, yes I do... But I'll have something else done soon I guess.

Roy philips!!!! great RP btw. I would love to see the point of view of John. Every action usually has a motive and being raised in the vault and taught the difference from right from wrong shouldnt produce such evil. Maybe if you thought up something that happened during childhood or maybe something personal happened that made him go psychotic

Hey, hey... That sounds great! I think I have an idea for that too... A flashback, but not the Vault, something much more... Flavoursome... BWAHAHAHAHA!

Francois you, my friend are insane, by the way I have a proposition for you

A proposition hey? Please inform me of this proposition... (With a PM perhaps?)

I'll post something else tomorrow I guess... I'm tired and I'm finishing school tomorrow, (Yay!) so I'll see what I can do in two weeks!

looking forward to it

very good!, any idea if or when bethesda is gunna come out with a book?

there is one for TES coming during the fall.

Okay, I'll probably be posting something up today, sorry about my lack of looking at my own story, .

Awesome story! It's the only one which shows the lone wanderer as an evil figure. I think it's really original. If you would accept advices from newbies like me, well first I would like to see a bit inside the chracters especially the lone wanderer. I mean why is he doing this? And don't forget you don't have to rush. Play the game, watch some movies read some fan fics and ideas will come. Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter :goodjob:

Why thank you sir! I think your story is also interesting and thanks for the comments: Don't worry, when I'm finished with this next Chapter I think you may have a bit more insight of the story. I hope you like when I'm finished!

Bit short, but here's the ending of James' story.

Chapter 2 Part 3

As James awoke from his slumber, he looked around him, he looked back to where Megaton had been and he gasped. There was nothing left, just bits of metal and debris floating from the sky. James looked at himself and he shuddered, he looked at his left leg and he saw it mangled behind him. He saw his right leg and bile rose up in his throat, seeing the sight of blood was one thing, but bone?

He then looked at his left arm and he shuddered, his bone was piercing straight through his skin, he shuddered again and he looked at his right arm. He exaled a sigh of relief as he saw the limb intact. He followed it up his arm and then his eyes widened, right at the shoulder point, his whole arm had been cut off, by a flying piece of metal no doubt.

He supressed a shudder and he looked up, he could feel the vibrations of his heart as he tried to keep it working through all the injuries. He saw, standing in front of him, a figure in pure black armor. He looked down upon James and he remembered the very first time they'd both had this exact same moment.

"So, James, tell me, why do you think I should let you live?"
"Well, John, I don't know, but all I know is that you should at least tell me why your doing this to innocent people?
The Lone Wanderer sighed, "James, I'll tell you my story if it'll make you happy. I was a good man for a month, I wandered the Wastes, saving people when I had to, killing people that dared to kill poor innocents. I continued until I found my Father again? We travelled together and we eventually made it back to Project Purity. As we finished what we did, he, he said he was proud of me? The one and only time he did it. I was so happy that day, but it was all brought down again within ten minutes, I went to fix up a pipe, when we were invaded by the Enclave."

The Lone Wanderer shuddered, "They went through and killed everyone, I fought my way through to my Father, he? He killed himself to save the Project, I couldn't believe it, they killed him. I was so furious that day, I killed anyone that moved except for the other Doctor with me? After that I fell into a routine of wandering the Wastes, I ended up in Paradise Falls, as I fell in with their routines I found I liked it? I changed from the Lone Wanderer to the Devil, I'm not proud of it, but it's my story."

James looked up at the Lone Wanderer once again, he opened his mouth, "I know what you've been through John, I understand, I lost my family because of you? You said once, you owe me a favour, I ask for that favour to be upheld this day. Kill me John, so I may join my family once again. Do it John, kill me."

John looked down at the man and he brought up his rifle, he aimed it at James' head and he spoke, "If that is your wish James, goodbye, you were a good friend in that time we shared together," then he pulled the trigger and James' whole world went black.

B-B-B-B-Bump! Reply pleash...

What a gruesome, terrible ending for a character. I like it :goodjob: well written I couldn't find any mistakes and set out perfectly. The only thing I could point out would be the shortness of it but you've already done that for me Good job Francois keep it up!