the faithful

Post » Sat May 28, 2011 1:39 am

(WARNING) you can make fun of my mother, my religion my life, but for the love of god don't correct my spelling ill get better over time now eat cheese.


"Welcome all! to cyrodils first insane asylum located in the wonderful town of Kvatch!". "Now I'm sure you all will enjoy your selves and our staff during your stay here". the white haired Dunmer could only giggle as she said this with an uplifting pleasant voice. The crowd of people could only stand there and stare at the mythic dragons riding unicorns way to small for there own good,and while the flying kittens was a bit unsettling the crowd seemed strangely comforted by the shipment of cheese passing by.
"Now for the tour of your new home and location of salvation!". the white haired elf giggled again at the fact that she was rhyming, failing to noticed that her words fell upon absent minded ears. "Excuse me mam?. but when do we get to feed that pretty dress your wearing? i couldn't help but notice it looks awfully hungry." A rather small and dirty looking bosmer said in great anticipation to the answer. the white haired elf gave a nod to one of the many guards posted around the medium sized crowd. He in response took the but of his over sized spear and thwacked the bosmer in the stomach.
"ENJOY YOUR STAY AT ILSUTRAN ASYLUM!!!"

as you can see this is based in a insane asylum so generally have an insane character. sane chars are cool. but make it work. I'm very open with rping but no char mind control, or killing of chars with out players permission. OH and pm chars to me and my lie..generally me.


Name:Dunken Ilsutran
Nicknames:god, mccheese, pain, WHY!!!?
Gender:male....ish
Race:dunmer
Age:???
Birthdate:blah
Birthplace:some where in morrowind

Class:spell sword
Class Focus:combat/magic
Major Skills:destruction, alteration, blade, block, restoration, heavy armor, Illusion

Birthsign:the mage

Eyes:blood red
Hair:snow white
Skin/Fur Color:blue black
Height:5'11"
Weight:177 kuricks
Build:athletic slim

General Clothing Description:same as armor

Tattoo/Scars/Piercings:lots of scar. one mini mud crab nipble ring

Clothing & Armor:steel cuirass, dwarven greaves, dwarven boots, and leather gauntlets .

Inventory:stone mug, spoon, 3 pounds of cheese, and a stuffed kitten

Weapons:amber long swords "Dunkens wrath"


History:unknown



Personality:Although homicidally insane, Dunken is, in essence and theory, good at heart. Remnants of his shattered persona still remain intact and he hates to see people taken advantage of or tortured, shows great chivalry towards women, tries to help those in need and usually fights for the 'good' side of a battle. Despite his efforts though, he is invariably insane and often acts violently and/or criminally without thought or regard for the consequences.

When dealing with people verbally, Dunken's voice raises and lowers in pitch in semi-accordance to what he is saying and often expresses opinion and gives advice in what can best be described as an epic, proclamatory manner; his voice deepens and he announces whatever he has to say in a booming voice, often with some accompanying heroic gesture. Vocabulary-wise, Dunken speaks in simple, often surrealistic terms punctuated with intellectual words or phrases at total random. When addressing people he doesn't know the names of, he almost always calls them 'mortal.' His voice, physical mannerisms and facial expression all convey a feeling of deeply rooted mania, but as dangerous as he is he can prove a loyal and powerful ally if one can win him over.
In combat, Dunken is just as erratic as he is in all other parts of his existence and often uses a combination of Paralysis and elemental magicks in tandem with the sword on his back.

Misc Skills [non-combat]:
-river dancing, and is a fabulous cook.
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Sweets Sweets
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 8:12 am

Ok I know you said not to "correct" your spelling and grammar but bad spelling n grammar is a turn off.. Also.. There isn't really a story to your RP.. Just a bunch of old shambling nutcases walking in circles. Try and have a plot that changes and progresses.. And have a goal at the end of it. Check out my RP for ideas if you want. If you need any help ask anyone or me I'm sure we'll be glad to help :)
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 7:42 am

Correction, please check out other RPs as well. Also, saying that right at the beginning that you have bad spelling is not a good idea. Never put jokes or question marks in your character sheet. Dunmers' skin is gray, not black. And dwemer armor and amber swords are always a bad idea. The intro looked funny though, and I saw no reason why it wouldn't have a plot, but it would be a good idea to give us a good idea of what it might be or what it is. Mystery belongs in Fan Fics ;)

One last note, please be careful when judging character sheets. Don't accept any more than you have to, and go by skill, not chronological order. Thanks, and good luck with your RP. I'll consider throwing a cs together, if you tell us a bit of the plot ^_^

EDIT: Thanks for confirming that with a swear word, any way you might be able to tell us what it is ;)

Thanks for the confirmation Aulakauss, now if only we could be informed a bit of what it is...

By the way, I meant no disrespect in anything I said, I simply wanted to be sure this RP would be good before I joined it. I think I'll create a new insane character just for this :ahhh:
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Emma Louise Adams
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 7:26 pm

lol but thats the point and i do have a long a$$ plot and it is just a bunch of loons going in circles its not ment to be a professionals rp
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Trevi
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 8:24 am

I don't know if it makes any difference to y'all, but Pale's a personal friend of mine and I know he does have a plot for it all, which if I am not mistaken in his plans/intent here, I helped a wee bit with. And assuming that I'm correct, it's a rather interesting plot, to say the least. Dunken Ilsutran is a very.. interesting character that I'm sure you'll all love if you give this a chance. ^_^

P.S.: You can say ass all you want here, Prince Cheesy. It doesn't censor it. ;)

EDIT: I have to admit, though, they do have a point about putting question marks and jokes in a character sheet, but.. :shrug:

Oh, and you misspelled 'meant.' I refuse to be denied my right to poke at your spelling. :evil:
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Johanna Van Drunick
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 8:35 am

Well. I apologize if I misjudged the RP..
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TOYA toys
 
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Post » Fri May 27, 2011 11:37 pm

wells you noobxors can joins me in friends ship other than that just me and some peeps will do this so have cheese
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Jade Payton
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 10:09 am

*takes cheese*

Wilco. Working on my character right now. He shall be the craziest thing since barbecued tomatoes.
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Melanie
 
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Post » Sat May 28, 2011 10:29 am

*takes cheese*

Wilco. Working on my character right now. He shall be the craziest thing since barbecued tomatoes.



good now your move to the dark side is complete with dilated mushrooms
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