I've never played Morrowind so I don't know what a bloody Nix-Hound is . Also, have Chapters. You don;t have to give each chapter a name, but it helps the reader her he/she is up too. Such as:

Chapter 7: Schmuty is your awesome king.

. . . Or not . . . But yes, chapters. I've read this all now, when they are no updates, so it is no problem for me.

Good work, btw.

thanks, I didn't know what a nix-hound was ever I had to search it up, as I haven't played Morrowind either

No worries. Keep it up, and if you ever get stuck or anything, feel free to ask (then pay afterwards).

Okay, I have edited bits of the story.

I've posted a new thread which has all the post of this one but together into chapters so moderators you can shut down this thread.

Closed by request.