The King And I

Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:33 am

I need a bracing beverage and a cigarette after that- and I don't smoke. [Note to self- do not read this at work; people look at you funny when you gasp in surprise and gulp loudly in amazement.]

The scenes of Morgiah in Oblivion were stunning- the terrible thing about a psychotic break is that reality itself is changed for the sufferer. One sees, hears, and experiences things that are not there. But they are just as real as what the rest of the world sees....

Solon and Dren- the power of your writing leaves me breathless. If I try to say more, I will go on for pages.... So, enough.

One other- "and the knee he'd injured in service years ago was sending darts of pain up his leg"

Dr. Watson, I presume?
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:42 pm

The last couple chapters have been utterly heartpounding, fistclenching, nailbiting pieces. I wish I hadn't rushed the read but your amazing writing took hold of me and wouldn't let go! :clap: I agree with Treydog on needing the drink and the smoke and I kicked both habits quite a while ago, lol, too bad I'm at work right now.

Edit: On a side note, I've been thinking very hard about writing some fanfiction myself, but I'm terrified of someone as talented as you reading it, lol. Tried my hand a little at RPing but haven't ever found the shedule to commit to it adequately. I think it seems like having total control of a story myself would be better, but then I come back to my senses and retreat back into my creative shell every time I read some of this story, :embarrass:
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 11:11 am

Sorry so late to join this thread. I am hooked however. I see your reputation and the superlatives already mentioned are well deserved. You somehow force the reader right into the middle of things. Delightful!
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:43 pm

Chapter Sixteen ? Interlude Seven; How An Academic Acquaintance Was Made[/u]


Ah, that was intoxicating. I do love complex dialogues.
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:13 am

Chapter Seventeen ? Exposition On Memory[/u]


The scene with Nenya coming back with Corprus... My god... I'm this close to weeping.
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:43 am

Please, Sir...may I have some more??? *insert pic of big eyed child here*
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:03 am

Wow, can I just say a huge, huge thank you for these repsonses? I've been feeling a lack of confidence in my writing lately - I was not at all sure if this chapter was up to scratch or if it would be received positively - but the comments left here have made me feel so amazing. Thank you so much Treydog, Ghostpaw, Foxy, Malx, Acadian and Peleus - I honestly can't tell you how wonderful you made me feel. Although unfortunately, I feel I must apologise for enforcing smoke cravings on two innocent people.

Edit: On a side note, I've been thinking very hard about writing some fanfiction myself, but I'm terrified of someone as talented as you reading it, lol. Tried my hand a little at RPing but haven't ever found the shedule to commit to it adequately. I think it seems like having total control of a story myself would be better, but then I come back to my senses and retreat back into my creative shell every time I read some of this story, :embarrass:

Don't you dare! Please post - I for one would love to read your work. We're all amateurs here. I would be really interested to see what ideas you come up with. As for RPing - I kind of agree with you, I'm too much of a control freak to enjoy it properly :lol: I think it requires a certain degree of discipline that I simply don't have. I admire people who can do it.

Once again, thank you so much everyone! x
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:20 am

Wow, can I just say a huge, huge thank you for these repsonses? I've been feeling a lack of confidence in my writing lately - I was not at all sure if this chapter was up to scratch or if it would be received positively - but the comments left here have made me feel so amazing. Thank you so much Treydog, Ghostpaw, Foxy, Malx, Acadian and Peleus - I honestly can't tell you how wonderful you made me feel. Although unfortunately, I feel I must apologise for enforcing smoke cravings on two innocent people.


SNIP

Innocent? Innocent? :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

You obviously haven't seen the picture I posted in my thread. As to the "lack of confidence"- no. You do not get to do that to yourself, young lady! (I am almost a certified Old Guy; I get to say stuff like that). Your writing has been a source of inspiration, intimidation, insight and probably some other words that begin with "in-." You write with such grace and imagination and skill that I say again- gamesas should have contracted YOU to write the TES novel.
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 11:13 am

SNIP

Innocent? Innocent? :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

You obviously haven't seen the picture I posted in my thread. As to the "lack of confidence"- no. You do not get to do that to yourself, young lady! (I am almost a certified Old Guy; I get to say stuff like that). Your writing has been a source of inspiration, intimidation, insight and probably some other words that begin with "in-." You write with such grace and imagination and skill that I say again- gamesas should have contracted YOU to write the TES novel.


Agreed!
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:19 am

Chapter Eighteen ? The Corprusarium And The Courier[/u]

Dear Councillor,

Please forgive me my anonymity; I am afraid that in these troubled, times, revealing either my name or station might lead to the endangerment of my honour or even my life. My lord, I must beg your indulgence. I have heard your name whispered with respect on the lips of those in my service, and I am in need of your aid.

Over the last five years, fuelled by the jealousy, dishonour and greed of those who surround me, I have found myself in the most terrible of situations. Allow me to explain. I am not a native of your current home, although my husband is ? we were married young, and in bad judgement. I am of noble birth, and upon the death of my dear parents last Frostfall, I inherited a considerable sum. I need not tell you that my husband is hardly the man I once thought ? he covets my fortune, and I now fear for my life.

I am alone in this country, too young to engender any air of authority, and ignorant as a child of your laws and customs. As a man of some standing, and also one who is not tied by birth or family to the Dunmer, I chose to contact you out of desperation. I hope that with a man such as you to take my part, I might be guaranteed safety for time. If you will consent, I beg an audience of you this coming Tirdas. I cannot ask any other; I am sure my servants are in my husband's pay. Please, Ser. I have no-one to turn to.

Forgive the false name; even so, I presume to be,

Your friend and supplicant,

Goldenflower

Sounds very much like a trap to me. Don't tell me if I'm right, I want to see it on my own. :hubbahubba:

The atmosphere of the King of Worms' domain was exquisitely described. Excellent work.

"Oh, it's not specifically the helmet I'm showing you," Nenya replied airily. "It's this."

She leaned over the rail, and dropped the ebony unceremoniously into the sea.

Bomba gaped, stretching over the side to watch the splash fall behind in the wake of the boat. Two seconds later and it was gone without a trace. "What ? why?"

"I don't want it," Nenya said, serious for once. "I don't need it and I don't need what it does. I can be the Nerevarine and still be Nenya too, can't I?"

Perhaps the seasickness had made her overemotional, but for whatever reason, Bomba felt tears sting her eyes. She turned to the sunset so Nenya couldn't see.

"Yes," she said emphatically. "Yes, you can."


A very emotional moment. These two are becoming very good friends. The only thing that troubles me is that I don't know the exact nature of that helmet. Was it an artifact or something customly enchanted? Because if it was an artifact, I daresay Nenya might regret getting rid of it.

It's a bit strange to read about Necromancers which I intend to use in my own work. I feel like this story is something I need to include in my own as with the conventional lore.
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:56 am

Chapter Nineteen ? Interlude Eight; The First Of Many
That made her feel distinctly threatened. With no facial expression, she had little way to gauge his tone, and something about the turn of this conversation was alarming her. She had allowed herself to become relaxed in his presence over the last six years, but had that really been such a good idea? Was he simply lulling her into a false sense of security? She suddenly realised how pathetic her previously revelled-in intelligence was compared to his millennia of experience.

She remembered the fear and danger she had felt on her first visit here. She had been strong enough to master it then; she must do the same now. "And what would be the nature of this bargain?"

I like the fact that after six years she still realizes what he is and that it could be dangerous for her to be there.

"I have a letter for the King of Worms," the khajiit announced, looking round rather unnecessarily, as if it was somehow hard to pick him out of the crowd.

I take this is the letter that started it all. :nod:
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 2:23 pm

Please, Miss, I would like some more? I know it has been less than a week, but it seems much longer. I will do the sad puppy-dog eyes- and I used to run (OK- waddle) with bassett hounds, so I can do some really sad puppy-eyes.
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:38 am

Meeeeee tooooooo!!!!

And if you do not post soon I shall rhyme and versify you, so beware!!!
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:42 am

Chapter twenty

So dazzled was the chaptermaster, he forgot for a moment that the identity of the target would surely be proportionate. "And what of your contract?"

The smile spread slowly across her lips. "King Hlaalu Helseth."

Well now! This is a surprise. I imagine this blue eyed beauty must be
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, then.

What I love most about this story is that there is no distinct evil or good side. Everyone does stuff that are not exactly decent.

I couldn't help noticing your use of the word concoction. I used it as well in my own fan fic. Coincidence? Or perhaps not? ;)

Keep up the good work, Rumple, and drop by anytime. :clap:
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SNIP

Innocent? Innocent? :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

You obviously haven't seen the picture I posted in my thread. As to the "lack of confidence"- no. You do not get to do that to yourself, young lady! (I am almost a certified Old Guy; I get to say stuff like that). Your writing has been a source of inspiration, intimidation, insight and probably some other words that begin with "in-." You write with such grace and imagination and skill that I say again- gamesas should have contracted YOU to write the TES novel.

I've seen your picture now... why, you're a little angel! :P
Again, thank you so much... I honestly don't know how to answer these kinds of comments because I feel like I'm just saying thank you over and over again! But it always bears repeating. As for the TES novel, I'm getting more and more excited about it. We've waited so long to have books as a part of this series; I just can't wait to see what they've come up with!

Peleus, what can I say - all these comments are completely amazing! I'm slowly working through the rest of the stories in this section, including yours of course - I can't stare at screens too long at the moment which is why I haven't been posting much, either - and I can assure you that the generosity will be repaid in kind. I'm so pleased you're enjoying this and I'm really looking forward to delving deeper into your take on the Necromancers.
I couldn't help noticing your use of the word concoction. I used it as well in my own fan fic. Coincidence? Or perhaps not? ;)

I'm afraid so! I haven't seen you use it yet; maybe I haven't got that far? But it's a pretty common word, and I wrote that particular section more than a year ago now. Great minds think alike, I suppose!

As I said, I can't spend too long at a screen right now so updates will be a little delayed (I've actually nearly finished the whole story, I just hit 100,000 words including my writing-ahead! But I need to read through the entire thing and pace it properly before I can post the new chapters), but that gives me a chance to catch up with other people. I'm printing a fair few stories off for bedtime reading. Much comfier than sitting at a desk! I may have a new chapter out in the next week or so, but I'll probably be reviewing more than writing until then :) Again, everyone, thank you a thousand thousand times! xx
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:21 pm

Oh, cr...ap. I think I caught up with your writing. Now I will have to wait just like everyone else. :facepalm:

The last chapter was intense. The fire scene was thrilling. And the fact that I just imagined two men (well, elves, anyway) kissing, well...

Keep up the good work, Rumple. I will be here. :tops:
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:19 am

Rumpleteasza......Rumpleteasza........(echo, echo) Your fan base is calling you ......
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Thanks guys! Peleus, I'm glad I didn't scare you off :lol: I was aware the Solon/Dren interaction might not go down well with everyone, so it's nice to see positive responses.

Onwards!



The King And I

Chapter Twenty-Four – The Gathering Dark



The fire at the Dren Estate raged on and on. The water-chain from the docks had been abandoned; the workers fled, slaves slipping through the chaos to freedom. There was no hope now. There could be no-one living in that hideous inferno.

In the gathering dark, the gods play dice. They play dice with people’s lives, and this time, two deaths become two narrow misses. This time, someone wins.

Caius found himself hanging in mid-air, blinded with pain but alive. He’d fallen with the floor – a piece of it was sticking into his leg – and the rest of him was caught on a broken length of banister and on Solon respectively, both of whom were clinging to the only remaining portion of the corridor. With the floor gone, the full force of the fire leapt up around them at once, and Caius’ legs and back were scorched and smarting. His clothes would catch at any moment.

Solon was a better off, although he was currently the only thing between Caius and certain death, and he was dizzy from shock and smoke inhalation. But Dunmer have lived for centuries in the ash storms of Red Mountain, so with his free hand he wrapped his cloak around his mouth, and with his other he began to pull hand over hand, shoulders cracking and legs weak, dragging Caius to safety. The remaining floorboards groaned and protested, but they held. Caius clung to them and inched himself up, splinters driving themselves into the palms of his hands.

After a minute that seemed like an hour, they were both crouched on the ledge. The Imperial was fighting to stay conscious – neither him nor the ledge would last long. Solon looked around swiftly and saw something behind them that made his heart leap.

He grabbed Caius’ shoulder. “There’s a way out!” he gasped hoarsely. “The floor’s taken part of the wall with it – I can see the ground. But we’ll have to jump.”

Caius nodded grimly, too spent to answer. Slowly, they shuffled into the place closest to the wall.

“Ready?” Solon rasped. Before they lost their nerve, he grasped his companion’s arm and tugged. They jumped.

Caius’ knee finally gave way with a sickening crack; Solon landed on a piece of fallen masonry and took most of the skin off the side of his shoulder. Together, they managed to crawl, limp and drag themselves away from the wreckage. At all costs they mustn’t be found, or the fire suspected to be anything other than a terrible accident.

It seemed to take years, but drawing on reserves of strength they hadn’t known they possessed, the orange glow from the manor finally dwindled and disappeared behind the hill. Caius fell to the ground and passed out.

Solon stumbled next to him, not even noticing their chosen resting-place was half in the edge of the lake, and followed suit.


*


Gwynabyth cried out in alarm and dropped her ounce-measure as Dralasa barrelled into the disused living-room of Tel Fyr’s Corprusarium.

“Pack up,” the spy hissed. “Empty the stills; you’ll have to leave the equipment. Throw the dust-sheet over them. Be ready to leave in ten minutes, do you hear?”

“What’s going on?” demanded Eadwyrd, shaken by her urgency.

“We’re going back to Mournhold,” Dralasa ordered. “I’ve finally heard the Master talking, and if I’m not mistaken, Fyr is dead. This is worse than I’d ever dreamt. Fyr didn’t move the Corprus victims, the black robes did; they’re following with King’s order’s – and to top it off, they’re Dreamers. Sixth House cultists.”

The alchemists were gaping, silent, unable to process this shocking barrage of information.

“They’re sealing the entire estate and moving to Red Mountain,” Dralasa said, already throwing random belongings of Gwynabyth’s into a satchel. “I’m going for a last check round the building, then we’ll use Morgiah’s scrolls. I don’t need to tell you how important this is, so get a move on.”

She tossed the now-bulging satchel to Gwynabyth, who fumbled and nearly dropped it. “I’ll be back in less than quarter of an hour. Get your stuff and meet me near the Corprusarium entrance, understand?”

She threw the remaining satchel at an astonished Eadwyrd, and was gone before they even had time to speak.


*


Bomba ‘Lurrina was feeling strange.

Almalexia was coming into view, the great fortified wall of the city encroached by sepia-coloured slums that clung, limpet-like, to the outer fa?ade. These mini-provinces of poverty stretched near five miles into the surrounding countryside, lining the roadways with shabby stalls and mazte-sinks. The poor had refuge here; Almalexia was the mother-goddess, the merciful one. While in Blacklight or Necrom the hovels might be razed to the ground when the squalor began to offend the nobles, no home, however fetid, would be destroyed here.

As she walked, Bomba ‘Lurrina’s vision seemed to blur until she was not only approaching the gates of Almalexia, but of Orsinium, Daggerfall, Wayrest, Sentinel, the Imperial City… the many journeys of her life swam before her eyes like the hazy visions of a skooma-dream. She had arrived at a hundred and one city gates in her life, but had she had not once felt as if she were coming home.

Why did she have this gnawing emptiness in the pit of her stomach?

It was not as if she minded being a nomad; she had been born in the Noquin-Al desert of Elsweyr, where migration was a way of life. She had not returned to her homeland for many years now, of course, but the wanderlust was in her blood. So what could it be?

Nenya had disembarked at Old Ebonheart, citing a desire to return to Balmora. The Nord girl had been quiet for the remainder of their voyage from Omayni; uncharacteristically pensive, Bomba ‘Lurrina thought. She hadn’t stated her reasons for this sudden desire to return to Vvardenfell, but the Khajiit could make a good enough guess. She suspected Nenya would make a beeline for a certain Spymaster’s dilapidated house.

It had been odd to watch her leave. Having spent the better part of three weeks entirely in eachothers’ company, Bomba ‘Lurrina had not noticed how quickly she had become used to the girl’s presence. She had always been a loner; it was part of the reason the Emperor had chosen her as his agent. Secrecy demands isolation. But Nenya had got under her skin, creeping in without her noticing… and now she had gone, there was an uncomfortable empty space left that Bomba had never realised existed.

The gates of Almalexia loomed above. She passed under them along with the usual crush of merchants, tourists, pilgrims and homecomers, musing on how one could be surrounded by people and still feel so totally alone.


*


The mood in the Corprusarium had taken a distinct turn for the worse.

Gwynabyth and Eadwyrd were huddled under an alcove of rock in the tunnel leading to the main house, waiting for Dralasa. It was wetter here, and colder. A pool of dark water filled the hollow in the floor of the cave.

“Do you think…” Gwynabyth began, her voice cracked and strained. “…Do you think Dralasa could be right? Divyath Fyr, dead?”

“I don’t know,” Eadwyrd whispered. His face was pale in the darkness. “It seems mad… they say he’s nearly four thousand years old. How could he die?”

They were silent for a long time, with only the drip-drip-drip of water to keep them company. There was no sign of Dralasa yet.

“But these black-robes,” Eadwyrd continued. “Surely Fyr would never have let this happen if he could prevent it? Dreamers? Relict Sixth House cultists? And they took the Corprus victims to Red Mountain… what can they be doing?”

“I want to get out of here,” Gwynabyth shivered miserably, pulling her hands into the sleeves of her robe. “This is too big, Eadwyrd. We’re don’t belong here. We haven’t seen the sun in more than a fortnight; I feel like I’m forgetting what it looks like. I want to get out.” Her voice broke.

Eadwyrd couldn’t say where he suddenly got the courage from. He wound his arms around her, his heart thumping at her closeness, hand buried in her hair.

“We’ll go,” he said softly. “As soon as we get out of here, we’ll go back to Glenumbra. We’ve done enough. We can work on the tonic again. Your cottage, and the kitchen-garden…”

He felt a thrill as she sank into him. “I’d like that,” she whispered. “I’d like that more than anything.”

You have to do it now, he thought. You have to tell her. Do it now, do it now.

“Gwyn,” he began hoarsely. He had to stop and swallow, his throat was so dry. “Gwyn, I…”

She took his hand shyly and wound their fingers together, and he thought his heart might burst. “Gw–”

There was a splash from the other side of the pool.

“Dralasa,” Gwynabyth breathed, turning away and looking out into the tunnel. “At last! Is it safe?” She called across. Throwing an excited smile at Eadwyrd, she grabbed her satchel and stepped into the light.

So did the figure on the other side of the pool. And with a jolt of horror that struck him like a kick in the chest, Eadwyrd saw what was wrong in one terrible moment of clarity. The newcomer had red hair. Dralasa’s was black.

A Cultist.

Before he knew what he was doing, he was out of the alcove and splashing across the shallows of the pool, the whole world shrinking until it was nothing but the knife that had appeared in the newcomer’s hand. A moment later, he slammed into the woman’s body and they were on the ground.

Then it was all teeth and eyes and hair and the knife, the black-robed Dunmer squirming in his grasp like a demonic snake. Something seared across his forearm; in desperation he tried to hold her wrists, but she was kicking and biting, and his hands were slippery – with water? Blood? He couldn’t tell. He thought he heard someone scream his name – Gwynabyth?

With an unnatural burst of strength, the attacker threw him sideways and he lost balance, stumbling over the lip of the pool. A second later he felt the water close over him. The sudden silence pounded in his ears, and fear washed over him, so thick and awful that he thought it might rip him in two: Gwynabyth was up there, alone.

He surfaced with a scream bubbling up in his throat, staggering back through the shallows in time to see the two women grappling like cats in the flickering light of the tunnel.

The knife had skittered away across the other side of the pool. Gwynabyth had had the presence of mind to rake up a loose stone from the floor; the attacker’s temple was bloody. But the newcomer was stronger, and Gwynabyth was weak with fear and shock… Eadwyrd lunged towards them, his heart in his mouth…

It happened so quickly he didn’t even have time to move. The Dunmer knocked Gwyn’s arm aside with savage strength, wrapped a hand around her throat, lifted her clean into the air and shook her like a ragdoll. There was an awful snapping noise.

The next moment, her own knife punched into her back – the knife that Dralasa, now running full pelt down the tunnel, had picked up and thrown with deadly accuracy. And then everything was still: the Dunmer choked out her last breath, and Gwynabyth was sprawled awkwardly on the floor, her neck twisted at an angle that he knew was very wrong.

He couldn’t seem to find air in his lungs; silver pricked the edge of his vision, an icy hand was clamped around his chest, there was a distant roaring in his ears…

In the gathering dark, the gods play dice. They play dice with people’s lives, and this time, someone loses.

Hardly aware, he stumbled across the tunnel and was clumsily dragging her away from the pool, her body so deadweight and different to the time he had laughingly picked her up in the apothecary. Her face was covered by her hair, but he didn’t brush it away. If he didn’t see, it might not be true.

Dralasa kicked the attacker’s body out of the way and knelt over Gwynabyth, fingers searching her neck. There was no need for the compassionate look she gave a moment later, the unfamiliar pity in her eyes.

“The scrolls,” she whispered in disbelief. “Why didn’t you use the scrolls?”

Eadwyrd only looked at her dumbly. His face was a blank sea of horror.

“Please,” he said. “Please.”

The words were detached and meaningless. He didn’t seem aware he had spoken. She cringed.

“Use them now,” she said quietly. “Take her back to the Palace. I’ll get rid of this.” She indicated the Dreamer.

Afterwards, Eadwyrd found he could never remember returning to Mournhold, or the weight of the nightmare thing in his arms. The images were a blur – a haze of dark and cold; a terrible cocoon of pain, kept only inches away by shocked denial.


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:nope: I have no words...

I know they are just characters but sometimes things get me you anyway.
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 1:56 pm

:o

Oh, bloody hell! I did NOT see that coming.

Will add more to this when I've regained the ability to speak. Sorry, but I'm in a bit of shock here...

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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:56 am

Gasp.....ARGH!
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:09 pm

My goodness. Beautiful, dramatic, Wow!
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:01 pm

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGH!!!!!!


you can't DOOOOOO THIS....


Ahhhh...


Yes, I know....now I see it was necessary for the drama, the balance of this chapter, and the beauty and terrible irony of the story, reflecting life..


but for a brief mad moment I felt like charging to whereever you were typing out the story and demanding that you resurrect Gwynabyth.

Like Sierra said, I am still in partial shock. Will post more later!!

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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:07 pm

The madness of not-King-George having not passed, but abated slightly, (damn you, I still have a moist eye) I will now begin part one of my praisecritiquerant.

First, in place of the absent BSparrow, I shall begin with a small mechanic nitpick:

and the rest of him was caught on a broken length of banister and on Solon respectively, both of which were clinging to the only remaining portion of the corridor

You mean either whom - in a grammar conflict with one inanimate and animate noun, the animate wins - or you can just write ' and both were clinging...'

Again, I will give a full and deatiled critique later by expanding this post with an edit , but for now before Beth software cuts me off I will say this:

Her face was covered by her hair, but he didn't brush it away. If he didn't see, it might not be true.

Sometimes you can write three thousand words and one sentence can punch harder than all the rest of those words...
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Post » Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:48 am

I... I am at a losfer words.... the drama... :shakehead:
awesome, just awesome.
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