The King And I - Thread II

Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:12 am

Check me, I'm all organised this time! :twirl:

Previous thread, containing chapters 1-24 along with much miscellaneous gadding about, may be found http://www.gamesas.com/bgsforums/index.php?showtopic=867352&hl=

A complete, more downloadable/reader-friendly version may be at fanfiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/1/The_King_And_I

Copypasta introduction:

This story picks up on a couple of characters who I fell in love with in Daggerfall - the protagonist being Morgiah, daughter of Barenziah, one-time Queen of Wayrest and latterly Queen Mother of Morrowind. Her brother, King Helseth, also features prominently, as does a certain other king who is rather more mysterious. Those of you who have played Daggerfall will remember having to take a note from Morgiah to the leader of the Necromancers, the King of Worms. The contents of these letters were cryptic:

Sire,

I agree to your terms. I will give you my first and you will exert your influence on the King of Firsthold on Sumurset Isle. Only you can let him speak with his dead son. For that, he would even marry Nulfaga!

--M



The King's response:

Princess,

Done.

--King of Worms



This exchange was not explained further, although from the lore it's clear that whatever bargain they made, it was carried out successfuly; Morgiah does become Queen of Firsthold some years later. In the Daggerfall Chronicles, there is a note which reads: "This sets up part of the story for the sequel to Daggerfall. Therefore, no more will be said of it."

Unfortunately, however, this plotline did not end up making it past Daggerfall.

So I decided to do it for them, with a splash of TESIII and IV thrown in for good measure. This story begins in the year 3E 429, two years after the events of Morrowind, and three before Oblivion.


Chapter list:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/2/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/3/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/4/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/5/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/6/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/7/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/8/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/9/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/10/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/11/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/12/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/13/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/14/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/15/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/16/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/17/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/18/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/19/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/20/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/21/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/22/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/23/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/24/The_King_And_I
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/31/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/32/The_King_And_I
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/34/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/35/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/36/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/37/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/38/The_King_And_I
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2426308/39/The_King_And_I

It bears mentioning that I've just finished a massive comb-through/rewrite of all my earlier chapters, updating both the forum thread and the ff.net version. I'm much happier with the new versions of my earlier chapters (smoothed out quite a few inconsistencies and made alterations according to readers' advice), although I'm sure most of the changes won't really be noticeable to anyone but me - nevertheless, if you have previously downloaded this story as a hard copy, there are lots of different bits and for those who don't mind the hassle, it's probably worthwhile updating to the new version.

Also, may I please ask that any comments on the previous chapter be put in spoiler tags until this thread reaches the second page? It would be a shame for people coming in here for the first time to immediately find out what happens!

I would like to thank from the bottom of my heart the readers who have commented, critiqued, helped, encouraged and supported me so far. Thank you burntsierra, D.Foxy, Treydog, Ghostpaw, Mikedzines, mALX1, Peleus, Saber, Elhazan, Radont, Acadian, FC4, The Byzantine, TheForestIsMyThrone, RemkoNL, Beniamus Revas, scampers, Lyness, paw-prints-in-the-mud, Eisoj5, Solidor, Derek Dragonborn, bobg, Nillocjames and redsrock. Damn, what is, this, Gwynneth Paltrow at the Oscars!? Anyway, without your kind comments I would have given up years ago, so thank you. xxx

New chapter to come in the next week :) And I promise, it will be a happier one! :twirl:
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:17 am

Now THAT is organized!
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:03 pm

Oh dearest and most rumpled tease
You sure know how your fans to please!
With legions of them you surely can
200 this thread too without spam
And in doing you'll set records moving
of numbers whom your story's a-grooving
We ache to read more, and more,
of your characters' strengths and flaws
So avoid all danger, don't be a stranger
Visit this thread and post, my Red Ranger!!!
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 8:57 am

Meant to comment earlier- stuff got in the way. First, I am pleased to see this frighteningly well-organized new thread- with links and everything!

As to the most recent post- you provide not one, not two, but at least 3 dramatic scenes. Two of them are almost too intense for even my jaded doggie sensibilities, the third is profound in a much quieter, but equally effective fashion:

"But Nenya had got under her skin, creeping in without her noticing? and now she had gone, there was an uncomfortable empty space left that Bomba had never realised existed."

Yes, and this story has gotten under my skin, giving me a cast of wonderful characters to cheer for, cry for, and mourn. Your creativity and vision have brought them all wonderfully to life.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:00 am

Check me, I'm all organised this time! :twirl:


Who are you, and what have you done with Rumpleteasza?! :P

Also, may I please ask that any comments on the previous chapter be put in spoiler tags until this thread reaches the second page? It would be a shame for people coming in here for the first time to immediately find out what happens!


Ah, yes, that makes sense. How do I do that? The... erm... covered thingy that you have to highlight to see. Good at these technical terms me. :embarrass:
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 8:38 am

Who are you, and what have you done with Rumpleteasza?! :P

I am... the return of Miss Teasza! The schoolmistress that never was. :P

Ah, yes, that makes sense. How do I do that? The... erm... covered thingy that you have to highlight to see. Good at these technical terms me. :embarrass:

There is a dropdown menu in the reply box titled "insert special item" - if you click it you will see a tag labelled "spoiler". You can then simply add your text to the box provided, and
Spoiler
it will do it all for you! :D


Alternatively, you can just type out "spoiler" and "/spoiler" with square brackets in place of quotation marks. Schoolmistress, indeed!
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I am... the return of Miss Teasza! The schoolmistress that never was. :P

Misstress Teasza.... UPDATE!! :)
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Misstress Teasza.... UPDATE!! :)

I hear and obey!


The King And I

Chapter Twenty-Five - Homecoming



Barenziah came hurriedly through the door, pushing it closed behind her. She seemed agitated.

“What is it?” asked Morgiah.

“Eadwyrd Greenhart’s here,” she announced quietly, glancing towards the door. “He’s got some information from Tel Fyr – very significant information.”

Morgiah sat forward at her desk, the flare of excitement in her eyes barely concealed. “Well, send him in! What are you waiting for?”

“There’s something else,” Barenziah said. “Gwynabyth Yeomham is dead. He won’t say much. They must have broken cover.”

Instantly Morgiah’s spark died, dreadfully, stone cold. “Dead…?”

“Yes.”

A sudden rush of feelings – Bomba ‘Lurrina’s hints that there seemed more between the two than colleagueship, pity for the young man who would now have to learn a very harsh lesson, and guilt… most of all, guilt. Because if not for Morgiah, the girl would be alive.

She’d sent a healthy, happy young woman to her death.

There was no time to dwell on the iron-hard truth before a knock sounded on the door, slow and hesitant. Morgiah composed herself. “Come in.”

She hardly recognised the man who entered. Eadwyrd’s face was as pale as a sheet. Swallowing the guilt that now threatened to consume her, she stood and acknowledged him.

“Mr Greenhart, welcome. I am deeply saddened to hear of your loss.”

It would have sounded pathetic even without the added irony of the condolences coming from the very perpetrator. As Eadwyrd raised his head, for a moment she thought the platitude had been an insult too much to bear and that he would strike her – but he remained still, his eyes dull.

“Thank you, your Highness.”

She would have preferred the response to be barely-veiled hatred; this awful dumb blankness was somehow far worse. Still, she had to ask. Without the information they had gathered, Gwynabyth’s death would be worthless.

“You have some information for me?”

“Yes, your Highness,” he intoned emotionlessly. “Tel Fyr is overrun by cultists, formerly Dreamers, remnants of the Sixth House. There is an overseer who commands them, but their orders come from his Majesty the King. From what Gw–” he halted, swallowing, his eyes suddenly showing a flash of what was behind them – “what… we… were told by Dralasa, Divyath Fyr has been killed, and a Dwemer who lived in his Corprusarium has been taken captive somewhere in Red Mountain. The Master Dreamer took a strength-fortifying elixir Fyr was creating, but it was unfinished and will probably poison him. The Corprus victims are also gone, but alive – they are being put to some use on a greater project. That is all we learnt. ”

She did not patronise him any further.

“Thank you, Mr Greenhart. Forgive me the wrong I have done you. You may go. I release you from my service.”

He left at once, ghosting out the door as if even the slightest movement caused him pain. Morgiah sank into a chair.

“I shouldn’t have sent them,” she reflected. “I should never have sent either of them. They aren’t spies. I should have saved the job for Solon Gothren.”

“Indeed you should have,” Barenziah said, compassionless.

A stab of anger erupted from Morgiah; Barenziah, watching, saw Helseth’s petulance rise in her in one of those rare occurrences. “Then pray, why did you not counsel me so at the time?”

“I am not your keeper, heaven forbid. I am merely your mother. I have had my own affairs to deal with. I think perhaps you have learnt a lesson; a hard one, of course, but at least one at another’s expense rather than your own.”

Her daughter practically spat. “That is no comfort! You think it should have been Gothren? He was miles away undercover at Dren’s Estate; it would have been impossible! Have you forgotten how vital it is to keep the number of those knowledgeable of this investigation to a minimum?”

“I have forgotten nothing. I merely thought you would be competent enough not to need your hand held at every turn.”

Morgiah’s hands were shaking. “Get out.”

Barenziah did so, bowing at the door.

When she had gone, Morgiah threw a crumpled page of her notes into the fire, and flung herself into the grateside chair. She stared into the flames for a long time.


*


Caius was at home with a bottle of Cyrodiil’s Best, getting well and truly smashed. When in doubt, there are few things that make more sense than getting pissed as a lord.

The fire had shaken him more than he liked to admit. When he’d woken, half-slumped in one of the Ascadian Isles’ most picturesque lakes, Solon had already cast preliminary healing magic on his leg. He was glad one of them seemed to have retained some presence of mind, at least. The fracture barely even hurt any more. Solon was good.

He’d been very odd on the journey back, though. Caius had had to point out three times that he’d forgotten to tend to his own bloodied, skinned shoulder before the mer even seemed to notice. He had been quiet; moody, even – which for Solon, was uncompromisingly odd. He had never been moody before. He gave the impression that he couldn’t be anything other than Mildly And Disconnectedly Interested.

That it had something to do with Dren’s death was crystal clear, but Caius had been wise enough not to inquire, and Solon did not seem in the mood to divulge. Exactly what had transpired to produce the little scene in the manor’s top floor was a mystery, but the effects were undeniable. Dren’s death would send a shockwave not only through the legitimate channels of House Hlaalu, but through Morrowind’s entire criminal underworld. It was already happening. He’d seen groups of people whispering in taverns, meeting on street corners, chasing rumours. News travels fast.

Solon had gone on to Mournhold to deliver their report to Morgiah. Caius had felt a strange twist in his stomach as he took his leave; some nagging feeling made him suspect that Solon was traumatised – what a peculiar notion! – and needed company.

But he was useless at supplying comforting shoulders, he thought wretchedly. Caius was one of those people who, when their arms are filled with some tear-stricken seeker of sympathy, revert to panicked autopilot and find themselves awkwardly patting the unfortunate supplicant’s head like a pet dog. Unsurprisingly, people did not tend to seek solace in his arms.

He took another swig, reflecting briefly on how sad it was to be a Blade, a paragon of the Empire’s valour and virtue, sitting at home getting sozzled and wishing he was better at giving his co-workers hugs. Just as well he was alone, really.

There was a loud knock on the door.

There was no time for composure. Someone banged the door open without even waiting for a reply, and then there was a tall body silhouetted against the night, the thump of a discarded pack, a tumble of yellow hair…

“Shit,” Caius managed.

Nenya surveyed the sea of empty bottles with one eyebrow raised. “Cai. Are you drunk?”

“I always said you were clever.”

She laughed at that – a pure, joyful sound – and oh, it was better than music, better than churchbells, better than anything… he realised he was beaming like a fool.

She threw her cloak by the door. “Got enough to share? Can’t remember the last time I got drunk.”

“Grab a pew,” Caius said, giddy as a schoolboy. “What’s the lady’s poison?”

“Mead. I love mead. Got any Winterhold’s Finest?”

“Tastes like honey,” Caius murmured, seemingly transfixed by her mouth.

She looked highly amused. “You’re blatted, aren’t you? Yes, mead tastes like honey.”

“Oh yeah, and the mead as well,” Caius mumbled obliviously, selecting the correct bottle after knocking several of its fellows over. “Let’s see that famous Nord constitution, eh? You’ve got a lot of catching up to do.”

“Don’t you want to hear about my journey?”

He poured her a pewter cupful, miraculously without spillage. “Regale me, Nenya. I am agog.”

“Well… killed some goblins, talked to an orc, killed some zombies, talked to a lich. Oh, yes – and didn’t talk to a mad old woman.”

“But talked to a Khajiit. And hopefully didn’t kill her.”

Nenya’s face cracked into a smile; she threw back her first cup of mead with practised ease. “Bomba? Oh, Caius, she’s… I can’t even explain. She’s wonderful. A real lady, you know. All elegant and graceful.” The mead suddenly hit her. “Hoarfather’s Beard. What is this stuff, chainmail-cleaner?”

Caius was frowning blearily. “You’re a real lady.”

Nenya snorted, pouring another. “Oh no, not like her. She could flirt with Gortwog and everything. You should have seen it, no wonder they send her for negotiations.” She pondered, sipping rather than downing this time. “She’s… sensual.”

Caius sniggered. Somehow that word just sounded wrong coming out of Nenya’s mouth. She swiped at him. “See? Doesn’t work with me.”

“It works,” he said. “It works.”

Nenya shook her head, grinning. “And you? What did you make of my mate Solon?”

“Bloody annoying.”

Nenya tipped her head back and laughed. “You say that about everyone you like.”

“Yeah. By the way, have I told you lately you’re bloody annoying?”

She snickered. “Oh, I’m blushing, I’m blushing.”

“It becomes you,” he said recklessly, refilling her glass. He lifted his own in rather unsteady celebration. “Toast?”

She lifted hers, too. “Aye. What to?”

“Homecoming,” he said, clinking them together.

She smiled.


*


The evening wore on, and Morgiah brooded. A tall Imperial chambermaid came to stoke the fire, displaying curiosity verging on impertinence when she sensed her Highness’s foul mood.

The argument with Barenziah had left Morgiah restless and uneasy. Of course, she knew better than to blame her mother for lack of counsel – she was far past the age of needing constant guidance. But Barenziah’s cool put-down, as well as her dismissal of the importance of the death, rankled at her.

And there was the guilt; of course, always the guilt. It was obvious that Eadwyrd had been in love with the girl. She might as well have killed him, too. It had been a mistake to place them in such danger, a mistake that she was responsible for.

And then there was the information…

Despite the anger and remorse flowing through her, the thought of the news Eadwyrd had brought prompted a little flicker of anticipation. Sixth House Cultists? Taking orders from Helseth? What could he possibly be using them for…? And Divyath Fyr dead… it almost took her breath away. Accounts of his age swung wildly in span from mere hundreds to impossible thousands of years. Had Helseth really managed to kill him? And if so, how and why? Alas, if he truly was dead, there was no easy way to answer those questions.

Or was there?

Her heart clenched, and the blackness seized her again – images, flick-flick-flick – there was that other place, the waterfall of dusky dead, but it was different – a different time – it was not Tellanaco’s lantern she was reaching out to, but something, someone else…

The present came back to her like a battleaxe – she was leaning over the desk, breath ragged, herself again.

There was someone who could get the answers she needed from Divyath. Bomba ‘Lurrina and Nenya would be back very soon now, and her message and gift would have been safely conveyed.

Hopefully, they would bring a different message back with them. One that might hold the key to the answers hanging tantalisingly before her.


*


Caius surfaced groggily, his head making insistent complaints to the rest of his body, which was protesting just as vividly in return.

It was full daylight – nearly noon, judging by the ferocity of the glare that beamed through his window. Not being unfamiliar with this situation, Caius sighed and began the process of remembering exactly what the hell he did last night, where he was now, and whether he might have any fines to fork out for.

He was in his own house, at least. That was something. Not always a given. He’d settled down for the evening, he remembered, with that Cyrodiilic brandy that had been burning a hole in his cupboard for the last month, and then…

His eyes widened; he shot up, ignoring the pain in his head. Nenya.

He groaned aloud. Oh, Talos. He’d been drunk before she even arrived, never mind the state he must have been in as the evening progressed. The comments he’d made returned to his memory with sadistic clarity; had he really had to be so obvious?

He looked around cautiously. He wasn’t in his bedroom; he appeared to have fashioned some sort of makeshift nest out of a toppled-over drinks cabinet and half a blanket. He inspected it for a minute, then shrugged. It was a lot better than the memorable morning he had woken up in the Temple prayer garden to find three novices conspicuously trying to ignore him as they got on with their morning piety.

Rising slowly to his feet, registering with relief that the headache wasn’t quite as bad as he’d thought, he tiptoed to the door of his bedroom and peered through the gap.

Nenya was tangled in the bedsheets, sound asleep, her hair fanning across the pillow like a sunburst.

He drew back, suddenly hyperventilating. He didn’t – he couldn’t have – surely he wouldn’t…

No, he thought, calming down, different memories mercifully returning. I just gave her the bed, that’s all. At least he’d managed to act the gentleman. He certainly didn’t feel very gentlemanly right now – the sight of Nenya in his own bed, her armour and clothes thrown haphazardly into the corner, was more than he could deal with at the moment.

He withdrew to the other room instead, making a valiant start on clearing up the mess. It wasn’t too bad; a few displaced pieces of furniture, a cracked goblet. Oh, and the bottles, of course. He was amazed at how many there were, even for him. As he worked, the memories continued to return – after half the mead was gone they’d moved outside, onto the roof under the stars. He seemed to remember commenting that her eyes were pretty. He cringed.

He had managed to make the room presentable, and even fetched back some new bread from the bakers before she emerged sleepily from the bedroom. When she saw his state of relative respectability she stopped short, looking down at her own blanket-robe and tousled hair with faint embarrassment.

“I’ve had a lot of practice”, he said by way of reassurance.

She snorted with amusemant, flumping down at the table and reaching for the bread. He poured her a cup of water and passed it over, feeling uncomfortably tongue-tied at the thought of his ridiculous proclamations. Would she remember? And if she did, would she pretend she had forgotten, just to make things easier?

He sat hesitantly on the bench as she found a pot of honey – he didn’t even know he’d had one, trust her to find it – and spread it liberally over her bread. She chewed silently.

He groaned internally. If she didn’t say something in the next five seconds, Sheogorath would have another mind to add to his collection.

It was four and a half seconds, as it turned out. “I was thinking,” Nenya said slowly, “I mean, I was wondering, whether you still wanted to come to Skyrim. I mean,” she continued hurriedly, “I kind of sprung it on you before I left. I didn’t want you to feel like you had to come if you didn’t want to. Just. You know. To make sure.”

Caius frowned. What was she getting at? Was she regretting asking him, or did she really just want to make sure?

“Do you want me to come?” He asked haltingly, resolutely examining the cup before him. Damn it, this was really, really not his forte.

“Um,” Nenya said, putting down her plate and looking at the table just as awkwardly. “Yes. I do. I mean, I really do. Quite a lot.” She took a deep breath. “Caius, what you said last night…”

Oh, Stendarr.

Man up, old boy, he told himself, and looked her in the eye.

What he saw sent a jolt like a strike of lightning through him. She was blushing bright pink, and smiling. Not a pitying smile, or a mocking smile – a shy, glowing, happy smile.

He had known he was in love with her for a long time now. He wasn’t a green boy; he knew the signs. But his thoughts on the matter had always been to the tune of how he might hide it from her, how he must be careful never to take advantage of what was merely friendship on her part…

He had never in a thousand years allowed himself to imagine that she might love him back.

“I’ll come. Whatever you want, anything for you. Anything you want…” he was babbling, but somehow he didn’t care.

She cut the babbling off with a clumsy, tentative kiss.

She tasted like honey and fresh bread. He kissed her back, and it was like the sun rising on his life.


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And there. It's there, at last
The words you sent me when last
I told you I was down and dizzy
and to cheer me up with eyes misty
That you sent to me...Ahhhh. I still see
and feel, the freshness of a love fulfilled
and the tremor of worried heart stilled

Sing we now of birds in chorus
of flowers in bloom, of songs in tune
Dream we now of wrongs put right
Even as we know of coming darkness' plight
Oh, but let's stop for a while to sniff -
See? This rose was what we all whiffed -

Come, tarry a while. Before we move on to Kings
And the Terrible engine of Destiny's run
Stay in this garden. Laugh in the light of love
Come to this sweetness, this innocence

of two hands softly clasping

of two hearts jointly clapping

For All's clear. No fear. We laugh and sing
And make silly jokes that take flight and wing
high above the level our feeble intellect bred
For all's wisdom when poured through the nectar love brings.

Close your eyes.

Inhale.

And...

And remember.

And remember.


And remember this,
to hold against a day where no bliss
No life, no love darkens and comes
Remember this then. Remember.

Remember with love.
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:43 pm

:clap: I loved the Nenya/Caius scene. Awkward yet nice.

I feel sorry for Morgiah. But not half so much as for Eadwyrd.

Am I sensing a calm before the storm or is it just my imagination? :lol:
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:47 am

Ooohhhhh, beautiful ending!!!
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:27 pm

I love the pace of this new installment- some doors have closed, others are opening, plots are spinning- but who knows in what direction?

The scenes with Morgiah were up to your usual brilliant standards- and the wonderful, slow dance of Caius and Nenya was...

Yes- smooth and golden, filled with the light of summer days- just like honey.

And how skilled you are to use the metaphor casually, as if it is an afterthought.
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:28 pm

Amazing throughout. Each scene was fascinating.

I will agree that the ending was simply beautiful. :)
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:52 am

You know how I feel, Red Riter.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 3:04 am

Thank you so much, everyone! I felt an enormous sense of smugness writing that scene, like a kid with their hand in the lollipop jar. It really is pure fluff and although I usually try to rein my romantic side in, I couldn't resist giving in for once. In the beginning, I never actually meant the Caius and Nenya plotline to be anything more than hints, but as all character seem to do, they took their own lead and overruled me. I guess it was just meant to be!

You know how I feel, Red Riter.

And you I, Foxy.

Am I sensing a calm before the storm or is it just my imagination? :lol:

I can see thunderclouds on the horizon...



The King And I

Chapter Twenty-Six – Interlude Ten; By The Light Of A Cherry Red Fire



Firsthold, Summurset Isle, Sun’s Dusk 3E 408. It is twenty-one years before the present day. Morgiah is 32.

Sunset on Firsthold was one of the wonders of the world.

The city was stunning any light, of course. The lofty pinnacles of the Palace – a miracle of latticed glasswork, pale gem-like colours and peculiar insect-wing iridescence – reached towards the sky like some angelic behemoth. Smooth, delicately twisted tree trunks entwined with intricate dove-grey pillar-work, creating an effect that blended nature and artifice with breathtaking elegance.

As the red sun sank over the sea, the city lit up like a jewel on fire.

The fire was reflected in the eyes of the figure who stood at the fragile wrought-silver rail of the library balcony, three hundred feet above the ground. No Altmer had eyes like this. Only the Dunmer, with the ash and flame in their soul, could mirror the sinking sun.

Two years on, and Firsthold was starting to feel more familiar to Morgiah. She would never have called it home, but where was home these days? Wayrest was lost to her. Morrowind, the country of her birth, was a stranger. It seemed that wherever she went, whatever she did, she would be a foreign princess.

The breeze from the ether lifted her hair, like a long-lost lover’s hand.

The physical transition had been relatively easy. Her belongings had arrived less than a week after herself, and to her surprise and pleasure, Barenziah had accompanied them. The awkward anticlimix of their parting had been preying on Morgiah’s mind; the idea of hurting her mother’s feelings was on one hand too absurd to contemplate, but terribly painful on the other. In the short weeks before her departure from Wayrest, Barenziah had made no attempt to ask how her daughter had snared one of the most powerful kings in Tamriel. Perhaps, against all odds, she thought Reman had genuinely fallen in love. Morgiah found the idea of such normality comforting, and was not inclined to make corrections.

The wedding of a King is an affair of state, and Reman’s was no exception. The Altmer were lavish by nature – even Morgiah, used to the finery of the upper classes, had been taken aback by the decadence of the expense. The Royal Court was naturally scandalised by their King’s hasty betrothal; the commons were even worse. She had a long way to go to win their love.

Helseth had not attended the ceremony.

He had not even written, though almost two years had passed since she had left their childhood home. She tried to tell herself he was caught up in the ever-increasing battle with Elysana, but in reality she was hurt by his silence. His initial reaction to the news of her betrothal had been one of bemused indifference, but he had grown cold in her final weeks at Wayrest, almost as if with her engagement she had done something cruel, something traitorous… It troubled her deeply, but she did not know how to make it right.

Reman, however, had been the biggest surprise of all.

Most unexpectedly, she found that she liked him. Even more astonishing was the fact that he seemed to like her. The Firsthold King was a kind soul, curiously devoid of the elitist snobbery so characteristic of his people. Though she had expressed no anxiety at the prospect, he had nevertheless been inordinately tender on their wedding night. He was a great deal older than her, it was true, but she found a quiet serenity in his presence that made – for a time – the world seem simple and good.

What he thought of her involvement with the King of Worms she had no idea. She suspected he believed her to be a hapless pawn, and his gentleness towards her was an according product. As with Barenziah, she felt it was better to leave him to his assumptions.

Behind her, the library stretched up like an icicle, a soaring spike of glass and silver. Hearing footsteps, she turned, her shadow stretching long and dark through the doorway.

“Your Highness.” The newcomer bowed, his golden skin aglow in the pre-dusk light.

Morgiah smiled.

It had taken many months to arrange this meeting. On arriving in Firsthold, she had not wasted a single moment. The library was everything she had ever dreamed of, and it would take all her years as Queen to penetrate its secrets – but this person, this mer, was an even greater prize. Even in his own city, he had been slippery as an eel to locate and even worse to pin down.

“So kind of you to consent to this meeting,” she said lightly, sweeping off the balcony and into the cool darkness of the library interior. “You are a difficult man to find.”

“I try to stay out of the public eye, your Highness. I find it is… easier that way.”

“The commons are quite voracious for you, it’s true. They call you ‘The Eternal Champion’ in the city, did you know that?”

Jagar Tharn’s vanquisher, Ria Silmane’s chosen, smiled with faint pleasure. “A charming affectation. They seem reluctant to use my name, as if it holds some unknown power.”

“Forgive me, but I’m afraid I shall go against the flow, Ocato,” Morgiah said smoothly. “Birth-given names are so important, don’t you think?”

“As you wish, your Highness,” Ocato deferred with equal panache. He was being careful to show respect, she could see – after all, she was Queen – but it was clear that his sufferance would not stretch indefinitely. In his eyes, like so many of the Altmer nobility, she was little more than a trophy.

“May I offer you some wine?” She asked politely, retrieving a decanter from a jewelled cabinet. “It is quite delicious; we had a new shipment from Rosefield only yesterday.”

“How kind. Thank you.”

He accepted a glass of deep golden liquid from her outstretched hand and lifted it up, silently toasting her health. His eyes, she noticed, were the exact same shade as the wine, and curiously piercing.

“To what do I owe this honour, your Highness?” Ocato asked, waiting for her to settle in the deep green leather of the reading-chair before taking his own seat.

“A whim, in truth,” Morgiah said innocently. “I have a mind to know of your extraordinary adventures, particularly those near my own Province of High Rock. Perhaps you would care to indulge me.”

“What her Highness desires, her Highness must be given,” Ocato said inscrutably. She couldn’t tell whether he was playing along or if he truly believed her. “I assume you are familiar with the history of the period? Although I confess, I have little knowledge what rumour or speculation may have made of the tale.”

“I heard whispers in my time at Wayrest. It was said that you were seen in Evermore. Obviously, the Bjoulsae basin is well-placed to receive such rumours.”

“Well-placed indeed; you are correct. I was briefly in Evermore. You may also have heard the name Crypt of Hearts? It is the infested ruin in which the sixth piece of Tharn’s Staff was concealed.”

Morgiah’s eyebrow lifted. “Only in myth.”

“So thought I, but alas, it exists.” Ocato sighed. “A most disagreeable place. At that time, the Staff of Chaos was close to completion, and Tharn had finally worked out Ria Silmane’s plan. His pursuit of me was… unpleasant.”

“So you decided to even the odds.”

Ocato narrowed his eyes, not immediately understanding. “Your Highness?”

Morgiah leaned forward, betraying a little of her eagerness. Careful, careful. “As I said before, Wayrest is well-placed to hear rumours. And I have many eyes and ears. The word was that you had sought… artefacts.”

Ocato was silent for quite a while, regarding her with his placid amber eyes. “‘Sought’ is not quite the right word,” he said finally. “The opportunity came across me, as it were. At the time, I was journeying towards the western tip of the Iliac peninsula, hoping to elude Tharn by water. I happened to come across a coven in the woodlands of the Glenumbra Moors. You know what a coven is, I presume?”

“Freelance magic, outside Guild confines,” Morgiah said, tapping her fingers against the polished mahogany armrest. “Of course, there are nomad bands all over Tamriel, but I understand the term coven is peculiar to High Rock.”

“Just so. The witches differ from place to place, but they all embody the same philosophy. Their matriarch is usually gifted with some form of second sight. In this case, it was unusually strong; apt, considering their area of summoning.”

“So it was you,” Morgiah said softly, unable to keep the curiosity out of her voice. She sat up. “I am sorry to have misled you, Ocato. The rumours did not, in fact, concern you in particular – but I had little reason to doubt my suspicions. I hope you will forgive my deception.”

Ocato smirked, the first smile to cross his lips since their introduction. “My dear Queen, had you really suspected my possession of the Ogmha Infinium – yes, let us not dance around the topic, I know the Tome is the artefact of which you speak – surely you would never have expected me to fall for such a contrived ruse?”

Morgiah stared, for a moment jolted off-course. “You knew this was the reason I summoned you?”

“There are many things I perceive plain as day now that the Tome has passed through my hands. Perhaps, given my foresight, I should have been more reticent… but in truth, your Highness, you intrigue me.” Ocato folded his immaculately manicured hands over his lap, leaning back with almost lazy abandon. “Reman may think you a shy maid, but I have seen the way you work this court. Even I do not fully understand your motives. You will forgive me, then, if I feed the alchemy-rat to further the experiment.”

It took all of Morgiah’s restraint not to let her jaw drop. She felt as if he had pulled the rug out from under her. Quite apart from being referred to as rat, the idea of Ocato observing her as some sort of social experiment revolted her to the core.

“I am not a piece of alchemy equipment, Ocato. You out-manoeuvred me, and I’ll grant you that, but I doubt you know as much as you allude to.”

Ocato nodded, good-natured now the truth was out. “You are correct. There are many circumstances surrounding your presence in Firsthold that are elusive to me. How did you come to marry Reman, for instance, with no prior connections and no friendship between your families? And why does he treat you like a fragile foundling that needs to be shielded from the vulgarities of the world? Elusive, indeed… I am content, however, to watch the unfolding from afar.”

It took Morgiah a moment to realise what he meant. “Afar –? You are leaving? How unfortunate; we have only just begun to know eachother.”

“I am afraid it is quite impossible to stay; in fact, if you will excuse me, these scant minutes in your company are all I can afford. News has reached me today that his Majesty the Emperor has offered me the position of Imperial Battlemage. I shall be returning at first light to accept.” He smirked, looking directly into her eyes with a gaze that reminded her, for a moment, of blue sparks under a red hood. “The irony is delicious, is it not?”

Morgiah laughed; she couldn’t help herself. “I’m sure Tharn would be the first to appreciate it,” she agreed, getting to her feet. “I won’t detain you, then, although I am sorry our audience needs be so fleeting. Do visit, won’t you?”

Ocato followed suit, rising and kissing her hand with casual deference. “But of course, your Highness.”

They left the room in the dwindling glow of the setting sun.


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On the 20th of Sun’s Dawn 3E 409, Queen Morgiah of Firsthold begged leave of King Reman to visit her family in High Rock. Eager to please, he gave her a swift galley, five extravagantly expensive dresses for the occasion, a twenty-carat emerald as a gift for Queen Barenziah and a fond farewell at the docks.

What her lord husband did not know was that once they had disappeared past the Cape of the Blue Divide, her Highness bribed the captain an obscene amount of money (not to mention the emerald) to dock not in Wayrest, but the Iliac peninsula of the Glenumbra Moors.


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A/N: Forgive my namedropping, but I thought Ocato was a fun choice for the Eternal Champion. After all, we know he holds the title of Imperial Battlemage by Oblivion, so how did he get it? By defeating the previous Battlemage in Arena, of course. Just my little bit of fun.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 9:48 am

Riveting! The plot thickens, and your writing is Awesome as ever!!
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:47 am

I love the idea of Ocato being the Arena Champion. I always felt there was more to him than it seemed. Excellent chapter as always, Rumple, but my knowledge of Oghma Infinium is contained only to Oblivion lore. Since I played only TES 3 and 4 and not 1 and 2, the storylines of those two are indeed legend to me.
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Flawless, brilliant, more superlatives fail me...
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:06 am

I love the idea of Ocato being the Arena Champion. I always felt there was more to him than it seemed. Excellent chapter as always, Rumple, but my knowledge of Oghma Infinium is contained only to Oblivion lore. Since I played only TES 3 and 4 and not 1 and 2, the storylines of those two are indeed legend to me.



I love the idea of Ocato being a schemer, fits right in with him being behind the murder of Uriel and his family
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:53 am

Rumpleteasza, Your writing is beautiful and I learn much from it. :)
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:10 pm

Not that I'm against your method, but I wonder if it's appropriate for the Imperial Battlemage to be a position you challenge people for instead of being appointed by the emperor. If you have a new mage challenging you for your position every day, you're probably not going to get enough work done. And what if a lazy jerk wins? What if they have magic skills but not leadership? What if Mannimarco decides to challenge Ocato?
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 11:21 pm

Thank you very much everyone!

I love the idea of Ocato being a schemer, fits right in with him being behind the murder of Uriel and his family

Really!? I haven't actually played all the way through the main Oblivion quest yet (although obviously I've been spoiled for the biggest surprises ages ago); is this something that explicitly happens or is it your personal take on the situation?

Rumpleteasza, Your writing is beautiful and I learn much from it. :)

What can I say to that? High praise indeed! :foodndrink:

Not that I'm against your method, but I wonder if it's appropriate for the Imperial Battlemage to be a position you challenge people for instead of being appointed by the emperor. If you have a new mage challenging you for your position every day, you're probably not going to get enough work done. And what if a lazy jerk wins? What if they have magic skills but not leadership? What if Mannimarco decides to challenge Ocato?

I think I may have misrepresented myself. I didn't at all mean to imply that Imperial Battlemages challenge eachother out - like you, I assumed they were appointed by the Emperor. My writing must be ambiguous in that last part - Ocato was simply musing on the irony of being picked for Battlemage because he is the Eternal Champion, and the Eternal Champion's main job was to get rid of Jagar Tharn. The fact that Tharn happened to be the previous Battlemage was more coincidence than anything, it just adds to the irony.

Edit: I just glanced over that section and I did actually say in the text that the Emperor offered Ocato the position himself. Am I getting the wrong end of the stick or are you talking about something else?
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:11 pm

Thank you very much everyone!


Really!? I haven't actually played all the way through the main Oblivion quest yet (although obviously I've been spoiled for the biggest surprises ages ago); is this something that explicitly happens or is it your personal take on the situation?


My personal viewpoint. The tunnels through the prison were secret, only someone really high up and close to the Emperor would have that info. Then of course, Ocato has power once Uriel and all his heirs are gone. I have played 18 games on the 360 and two games on the PC, and he has yet to be pleasant to my character, lol. - that was the clincher! Lol.
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:21 pm

My personal viewpoint. The tunnels through the prison were secret, only someone really high up and close to the Emperor would have that info. Then of course, Ocato has power once Uriel and all his heirs are gone. I have played 18 games on the 360 and two games on the PC, and he has yet to be pleasant to my character, lol. - that was the clincher! Lol.

Conspiracy!! You, mALX1, are a shrewd person. I never thought of it that way.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:57 am

Conspiracy!! You, mALX1, are a shrewd person. I never thought of it that way.



It is possible the game had originally planned to include that theory, because there are options to ask about Ocato early on in the game, but when you select that option you get a more or less useless response. Later in the game those options don't come up any more, so it may have been a part of the main questline that they cut.

I searched out the Mythic Dawn headquarters looking for something that would implicate Ocato, but only found a mysterious note that leads you into Skyrim and talks about being careful of "were-bears"

So next I searched Ocato's room (while doing the Ultimate Heist quest in the Thieves Guild) - I didn't find anything other than a skill book, but I could not reach some of the shelves to scan my hand over them. You know how Bethesda is always hiding things to see who will find them, lol. (like the secret stash in Glathier's house, etc.).
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