The Neveragaine, part II

Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:08 pm

Up to chapter 31 now! :P
Haven't posted any screenshots recently...

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Nice shots, especially the third. The imperial templar armour set looks very good. And is that glass weapon of yours glowing?
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 8:31 am

Yep. It's from Solidfire's http://planetelderscrolls.gamespy.com/View.php?view=Mods.Detail&id=7649.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 7:34 am

Chapter 34: An Offer You Can't Refuse

In all the excitement of industrial espionage in Caldera, I'd forgotten to visit Tuls Valen at the Temple. I hadn't noticed it before ? perhaps because there were so few people out in this terrible weather ? but now that I thought about it, people did seem to be looking at me strangely as I walked through the streets. I attracted quite a few suspicious sidelong glances, and heard more than one whispered conversation as I passed by.

I went to see Tuls Valen immediately after my midday meal, but ended up wishing I hadn't. He greeted me politely and asked after my health, but underneath it all, I could see that he was seething. "Cast your mind back a few months, Acolyte," he said, his expression grim. "You may remember that I asked you to chastise a False Incarnate?"

"I remember," I said quietly.

"Quite. And now I am hearing rumours that you are a False Incarnate." His frown deepened. "Would you care to explain this?"

"It's not true," I said, holding his gaze steadily.

"Not true? There is no truth in it at all?"

"Well? partly true, perhaps," I admitted.

"Partly true?"

"Yes," I said. "Exactly one-half true, in fact. You see ?"

Valen's expression had turned distinctly ugly. "So this is a joke to you?" he interrupted, speaking through clenched teeth. "Well, I must tell you that I am not amused. A warning, Acolyte: You belong to the Temple, so we owe you courtesy. But others may not be so polite, and may choose weapons instead of speech."

I opened my mouth to reply. "No, no excuses. I am not yet convinced, but I no longer trust you. Like Elvil Vidron, if your claim is true, you must prove it to Archcanon Saryoni in Vivec."

He turned and stalked off without giving me a chance to respond. Well, that went well.

Something told this might be a good time to get out of Ald'ruhn. Like, now. Going to plead my case with the remaining Telvanni councillors was suddenly starting to look like a really good idea.

Archmagister Gothren's wizard tower was Tel Aruhn, on an island near Sadrith Mora. I'd hoped to get a boat there from the city, but quickly got into an argument with a shipmaster who he said he couldn't take me there. "What do you mean, you can't go there? It's less than a mile away! I can see it from here!"

He was unmoved. "I can take you to Dagon Fel, Ebonheart, Tel Mora or Tel Branora. That's it."

Exasperated, I teleported back to Wolverine Hall and used the Guild Guide to get to Vivec. I wasn't going to waste yet more of my time and magicka on Water Walking, just because the Telvanni couldn't organise transport between two towns right next to each other. After a quick trip to the High Fane to use the levitation shrine ? sorry, Lord Vivec ? I returned to Sadrith Mora and flew over the water to Tel Aruhn.

The Tel Aruhn village was a pretty typical Telvanni settlement. It was rather sad really ? I'd found these places so awe-inspiring at first, and now all I could think was "oh, another mushroom tower". It struck me that by now I'd seen pretty much all Vvardenfell had to offer, and that soon these places would be as familiar to me as the West Weald or the Imperial Isle.

I found Gothren in a 'throne room' similar to Aryon's, flanked by two hefty-looking Dremora bodyguards. Perhaps my meetings with Aryon and Dratha had made me over-optimistic, but I was quite encouraged by how he treated me? at least at first.

"I understand perfectly," he said, once I'd finished explaining about the prophecies. "Your story makes sense. Your proofs are persuasive..."

"Then you'll agree to name me Hortator?"

"But a decision on such a remarkable matter is a grave responsibility," he continued, "and not to be taken in haste. I will need some time to reflect and consider, and to confer with the other Telvanni councillors."

My heart sank. "Archmagister," I said, "Master Aryon warned me that you might promise to do that, and then just put off the decision indefinitely. Please, serjo: if the answer is no, just tell me so right away. I really don't want to waste any more of our time on this."

In a fraction of a second, Gothren's expression had changed from a bland smile to an ugly scowl. "Very well," he said shortly. "I have heard your story. And you are not one of us, so I suppose I'll have to explain ? or you'll just keep annoying me. I have no intention of naming you Hortator of House Telvanni."

"May I ask why not?"

He shrugged. "It is not in Telvanni interests to name an unknown and unreliable outlander and outsider to such an important position. My opinion will not change. If you persist in bothering me, you will regret it."

"I see," I said, swallowing my resentment. "You do realise this means I'll have to try and kill you at some point?"

Gothren laughed derisively. Clearly he didn't consider me enough of a threat to be worth getting angry about. "You're welcome to try, outlander. I shall look forward to it."

I left the tower feeling a bit disheartened. I didn't want to kill Gothren, and for that matter, I had no idea how to. I'd just have to visit the other Telvanni councillors while I tried to come up with something.

My next target was Master Neloth, who lived in the tower of Tel Naga in Sadrith Mora. Aryon had warned me that Neloth had a foul temper, and I didn't want a repeat of the Gothren experience. I wondered if anyone might know of a way to sweeten him up. A Dunmer woman at the Mages' Guild, Uleni Heleran, told me I should speak to his Mouth in the Telvanni Council Hall.

"His mouth?" I said, confused.

"No, his Mouth. A Mouth is a person appointed by a Telvanni Councillor to speak on their behalf, and cast votes in the Council."

I decided to pay a visit to the Council Hall. It was a strange building ? a sort of huge, gelatinous sphere surrounded by mushroom tendrils. Inside I found myself in a large round chamber full of glowing crystals, with five Telvanni mages standing on platforms high above me. I suddenly felt very small.

"Which of you is Master Neloth's Mouth?" I called, and cringed back as my voice echoed around the room.

After a moment, a dark-haired woman stepped forward. "I am Arara Uvulas, the Mouth of Master Neloth. What do you want?"

"I need to ask a favour from him." Gods, this was embarrassing ? wasn't there any way to speak to a Mouth in private? "Can you tell me how I should approach him? Is there anything I should or shouldn't say?"

Uvulas was silent for a minute. "He will probably refuse whatever you ask," she said at last. "The only thing I can tell you for certain is to avoid mentioning Archmagister Gothren. He and Master Neloth are? not on the best of terms."

Really? Hmm. Perhaps I could use that somehow.

There was no way directly into Master Neloth's chambers, so I entered Tel Naga through the lower level and flew up an enormous chute to reach the upper floors. Neloth was sitting alone in a bare, candlelit chamber, and looked as if I were the very last thing he wanted to see right now. As I approached him he slammed down the book he was reading and directed a poisonous glare in my direction. "Whatever you want, the answer is no."

"Master Neloth!" I exclaimed, ignoring him completely, and sweeping a low bow. "I've come here to ask for your help."

"Did you hear what I said?"

"Yes, Master Neloth, but ? "

"Then what are you still doing here? Out!"

"I'm going to kill Gothren," I said.

That got his attention. "Kill Gothren?" he spluttered. "You? A chit of a girl like you? And how do you propose to do that, pray?"

"I have a Plan," I said, lying through my teeth. "But I need the other Councillors' support in order to carry it out. You see, I need to be the Telvanni Hortator."

"Hortator? We need a Hortator? Why doesn't anyone tell me about these things?" He shook his head in exasperation. "If I make you Hortator, will you go away?"

"Of course."

I handed him Aryon's declaration. He scrawled his signature at the bottom without even reading it, and flung it back at me, taking up his book. "Now get out!"

I didn't wait to be told twice. I was half expecting him to hurl the book at my head as I scuttled out of the room.

As I was leaving through the Great Hall on the bottom floor, I noticed something for the first time. On one side of the room was a large cage-like structure carved out of the wall, and there was someone inside it ? a young Dunmer woman in ragged and dirty clothing, presumably a slave. As I paused to look at her, her eyes widened and she grasped at the bars with an imploring look. I ached to help her, but with three other people in the room there was no way I could do it without starting a fight.

The only Councillor left now was Therana. Unfortunately her tower, Tel Branora, was several days' travel away from both Vivec and Sadrith Mora. The only other settlement anywhere nearby was Molag Mar ? which, luckily, happened to have a Temple. By casting Almsivi Intervention from Sadrith Mora and then flying south, I managed to reach Tel Branora by late evening.

I'd been here once before, after I helped that silly Breton girl ? what was her name again? ? who'd fallen in love with a highwayman. Flying over the spires of Tel Branora, I saw that Mistress Therana's Telvanni challenger was still camped out on the outskirts of the village. I wondered how long it would take before she finally gave up and went home.

The minute I entered the tower, I could see there was something a little different about this place. For a start, the entrance chamber was full of kwama eggs. Hanging from the walls and ceilings, lying around the floor, arranged in a circular pattern around the edge of a table? even fixed to the wall as decorative candle holders. There were more of them scattered around on the next floor up, along with overturned furniture and dirty eating utensils.

None of the Telvanni retainers standing around the tower had made any attempt to clean up. I was too polite to ask them about it, but I couldn't help wondering what the heck was going on here. When I reached Therana's chambers, I soon realised.

The first thing I noticed when I entered the room was a naked male Khajiit standing on a bedroll. I was still staring in astonishment when Therana herself, an ancient-looking woman dressed in an exquisite golden robe, strode up and grabbed me by the arm. "What are you here for?" she demanded. "Are you here to feed the spiders?"

"N-no, Mistress," I stammered. Were those books burning in the fire behind her? "I've come here because I want to be Hortator of House Telvanni."

Therana nodded. "It's a funny sort of house," she said reflectively, "with all those glowing blue crystals all over it. Did I ever tell you about when I was a little girl? I always liked going to the house. That's where everyone keeps their toys. I'd offer you something, but I'm all out of kwama eggs."

Sweet Mara. Even by the standards of other Telvanni nobles, this woman was completely round the twist. "I could get you some more if you make me Hortator," I suggested, privately wondering if she was even capable of signing the declaration.

"Hortator? It's a steel box. You keep things like bittergreen roots in it, keeps 'em fresh, with a little netch blood." She paused. "Or is that a hormador? Yes. Or spiders. When I was much younger, we grew our own spiders..."

"Absolutely, Mistress Therana," I said, forcing a smile. "But now I need you to vote for me as Hortator. I'm the Nerevarine, you see."

Her eyes lit up. "Nerevarine? Is that a new play? I like plays."

"No, Mistress, not a play. I'm the Nerevarine. Look, here's my special Nerevarine ring." I removed my gauntlet and slipped the Moon-and-Star off my finger. Using a simple sleight-of-hand trick I'd learned as a child, I pretended to pull it out of her ear.

Mistress Therana, one of the most powerful mages in all Vvardenfell, let out a squeal of delight and clapped her hands. "Goodness! Where did you learn how to do that? Can you do it again?"

I did it again. "Ooooh! Very pretty! Do it again, please?"

I did it again. And several more times, before asking yet again if she'd make me Hortator. "Oh, certainly," she said gaily. "I have a hormador around here somewhere, if you'll just ? "

"Not a hormador, Mistress. Hortator." I was getting desperate now. "Look, if you just write your name here on this piece of paper, I'll show you the trick again."

"Oh. You want to be a Hortator?" She glanced down at the paper. "Certainly. Go right ahead. Right after you do that thing again."

Grinding my teeth, I repeated the trick. "That's amazing! Oh, goody, goody..." She seized up a quill and scribbled the name 'Therana' in wobbly writing, down the side of the paper. "There! Now you can go and be a hormador if you want to."

"I'm deeply grateful to you, Mistress Therana," I told her, and quickly cast Divine Intervention before she could change her mind. How on Nirn could anyone stand to work for that woman? I found myself pitying her Khajiit slave even more than the one I'd seen earlier in Neloth's tower.

I didn't sleep too well that night ? my head was filled with jumbled-up images of slaves and spiders and kwama eggs. Still, at least I'd managed to get most of the Telvanni councillors on side ? and surprisingly easily, all things considered. I could only hope the Hlaalu would be as easy to persuade.

The next morning I returned to Vivec from Wolverine Hall. Most of the Hlaalu Councillors lived in or around the city, though I wasn't sure exactly where. Since I'd met Crassius Curio before, I decided it would be best to go to him first; at least he didn't work for the Camonna Tong.

I emerged from the plaza in the Foreign Quarter to find a fierce storm raging. Somehow it seemed to fit in with the general atmosphere of the city. People seemed tense and on edge, and I noticed that some of the Ordinators were looking at me very hard. Or perhaps I was just overwrought and imagining things?

Anyway, I wasn't under any illusions that Crassius would be pleased to see me after what happened last time we met. I was fully prepared to have to do something humiliating to gain his support, but there were limits. If he asked me to 'polish his spear', he was going to get the business end of a glass longsword shoved up his backside.

Before entering Curio's mansion in the Hlaalu canton, I had to decide how best to approach him. Talking him round would be difficult after the vase-throwing incident, and I doubted he'd let me get near enough to cast a Charm spell. There was only one thing to do: break out the Telvanni Bug Musk.

I bought a flask from an alchemist, and splashed it over my wrists and face before entering Curio Manor. Unfortunately, one of Curio's retainers instantly recognised me as the woman who'd thrown a vase at his employer. "What do you want, outlander?" he said sharply.

I lowered my eyes, trying to look as meek as possible. "Please, sera, I've come to see Ser Curio on a matter of business. I'm very sorry about what happened last time I was here, and I promise I'll behave myself this time."

"Hmph." The perfume was beginning to have its effect. "Well?"

"Please?" I begged, opening my eyes very wide. "It's very important."

"I? oh, very well. Just give me your sword, please." I meekly handed it over. "I'll go and inform Ser Curio that you are here."

I found Curio writing at his bedroom table, looking as oily as ever. I'd been dreading the meeting, but to my amazement, he greeted me with a beaming smile. I had to give him credit for not bearing a grudge.

"Ah, Ada, my little sweetroll! You're back!" he cried, throwing down his quill. "I just knew you couldn't stay away for long. Have you come to pay old Uncle Crassius a visit?"

"Er, yes," I said, astonished at his friendliness. "It's nice to see you again? 'Uncle Crassius'. How are you getting on with your writing?"

"Wonderfully! Crellius and Nerena is already more than half-finished."

"Er? Crellius and Nerena?"

"The play, dumpling, the play!" he exclaimed. "Surely you haven't forgotten? The feuding Houses? The passionate, sweeping saga of forbidden love and false moustaches?"

"Ah, that play." That had been my idea, hadn't it? I cringed to think what Crassius' twisted mind might have done to it. "It's coming along well, then?"

"See for yourself." He scooped up a messy pile of paper from the table and dropped it into my hands. I shuffled the pages together and began to read from the top sheet:

Two Houses, both alike in dignity,
In fair Balmora, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean.


"Crassius," I said slowly, "did you write this yourself?"

"What? Oh, certainly not. That silly nonsense was written by my young assistant." He snatched back the papers and flung them carelessly down on a chair. "I'll go through it later and trim out all that turgid prose? but ah, the greatest scenes will be mine! The custard-pie fight, for example. And the part where Crellius sneaks into Nerena's bedchamber by disguising himself as Listens-At-Doors, her naughty Argonian maidservant."

"I'm sure it'll be wonderful," I said, doing my best to sound sincere. "But actually, Crassius, that's not what I came to talk to you about."

"Isn't it, pudding? Then what can your favourite Uncle do for you today?"

I took a deep breath. "I need House Hlaalu to declare me their Hortator. You see, I believe that I'm the Nerevarine."

"Really, sweetcheeks?" His eyes lit up. "Why don't you take off all that lumpy armour, then come sit here on Uncle Crassius' lap and tell me all about it."

Ugh. Gritting my teeth, I removed my cuirass, greaves and pauldrons and went to sit on Crassius' lap. He was soft and flabby ? well, most of him at least ? and smelled strongly of perfume and hair oil. Judging by the look on his face when I sat down, I was a little heavier than he'd expected.

"What a fine strapping lass you are, sweetie," he grunted, trying to shift position a little. "Now, tell me all about these fascinating prophecies that have got our Dunmer friends so excited."

I told him my story, doing my best to ignore the feel of ? well, I'd rather not describe it, but I'm sure you can imagine. I couldn't help wondering if the original Nerevar had had to do anything like this in order to become Hortator. Something told me the answer was probably 'no'.

"So you want to be Hortator?" he said at last. "A pity. Orvas Dren does not want you to be Hortator, and very few councillors would be willing to risk Ser Dren's disapproval. But your eloquent passion, your exquisite vulnerability, moves me to risk all ? and defy him!"

"Oh good," I said, forcing myself to smile. "You'll support me, then?"

"Yes, sweetie, I will name you Hortator. But first I have something to ask of you..."

"Yes?"

He pulled me a little closer and tilted my head back, leering down into my face. "Will you give me? a kiss?"

Oh gods. Well, I guess it could have been a lot worse.

"All right, Crassius," I said with a sigh. "As long as it stays between us, you understand. I wouldn't want the others to think I'm playing favourites."

As I closed my eyes, preferring not to see the expression on Crassius' face, he smacked his lips against mine and gave me a big, wet, sloppy kiss. With tongue. It was all I could do not to shudder.

"How tender and thoughtful!" he exclaimed, finally releasing me after what seemed like forever. "You've made me the happiest fellow in Vivec. And now, pumpkin, it's time for your gift: In my formal capacity as Councillor of House Hlaalu, I give you my vote for the title of Hortator."

"Thank you very much, Uncle Crassius," I said, slipping off his lap. "Just one thing? please could you put it in writing? Not that I don't trust you, of course, but?"

"I quite understand, pumpkin." His eyes twinkled. "Perhaps we'll make a Hlaalu of you yet. Now, just you wait a minute and Uncle Crassius will write you the most beautiful letter."

I put my armour back on while Crassius wrote his 'beautiful letter'. As before, I made sure to read the declaration once he'd finished it. I'd have preferred him not to refer to me as 'this sweet little dumpling, Ada Ventura', but otherwise I couldn't see any loopholes.

"Now just go and use your charms on the other Hlaalu councillors. I'm sure you can get them to give you anything your precious little heart desires." He winked at me. "And don't forget to come back here when you have all the votes, sugar-plum. I have a nice little present all ready and waiting."

I was in such a hurry to get out of there that I forgot to ask him where the other Councillors lived. However, asking around, I soon found out that one of them ? Yngling Half-Troll ? lived in a manor in the St. Olms canton. His colleague Dram Bero was apparently in hiding for fear of assassins, but people seemed to think he was somewhere in St. Olms as well.

I took a gondola to St. Olms and found Yngling Half-Troll in the appropriately named Yngling Manor (I guess 'Half-Troll Manor' would have sounded a bit stupid). And I must say his name suited him. Try as I might, I couldn't work out how this totally charmless Nord had managed to get onto the Hlaalu council. I could only imagine that large amounts of money were involved.

"That's a touching story," he said, when I'd finished explaining what I wanted. "But if you don't have 2,000 drakes, you won't get my vote."

Well, at least he didn't beat around the bush. I showed him my letter of credit from the bank and wrote him a cheque for 2,000 septims ? yet another large chunk of my money down the drain.

"A pleasure doing business with you, Ada Ventura," he said, shaking my hand. "And I'm a man of my word. You got my vote for the office of Hortator of House Hlaalu."

I got him to sign the declaration, and then asked him if he knew where Dram Bero lived. "Well, now," he sniggered. "That's a secret, that is. But since you're so free with your gold? I hear there's a 'haunted mansion' right here in the St. Olms Plaza. Maybe you should try poking around a bit."

Making a mental note never to tell Yngling any of my own secrets, I thanked him and went out to look for the 'haunted mansion'. It was just across the plaza ? so easily found that if this was where Dram Bero lived, I wondered how he could possibly have kept it secret for so long.

I found out as soon as I stepped through the door. The place was creepy as hell, dark and gloomy and draqed in cobwebs, echoing with the whispers of long-dead spirits. If I hadn't had protective clothing and a good enchanted weapon, I'd have thought twice about going in there myself. I nearly jumped out of my skin when a ghost appeared out of nowhere, right in front of my face ? luckily it went down with a single blow from my frostsword.

But I wasn't going to be put off my search by one measly ghost and a few spiders' webs. At the bottom of a narrow staircase I discovered a locked door which was free of dust and cobwebs, indicating that it had been used recently. The lock was too tough to pick, but a spell did the trick, and moments later I found myself in a well-lit, richly furnished apartment.

I found Dram Bero in one of the bedrooms, along with a female bodyguard. "So you have found me," he said, as soon as I entered. "I take precautions to ensure that I am not found easily... I see I will have to take more in future. But what can I do for you?"

As usual, it took quite a bit of time to explain exactly what I wanted. I was beginning to wish I'd eaten before coming to the manor. Still, at least Bero seemed sympathetic.

"You have found me," he said eventually, "and that means you are resourceful. Yes, I will vote for you as Hortator. But my vote alone means nothing."

"No?"

"You still need the votes of the last two Councillors, Nevena Ules and Velanda Omani. They are Orvas Dren's creatures, and they will do nothing without his approval."

Damn. It seemed Athyn Sarethi had been right about that. "Where can I find Orvas Dren?" I asked. "And the other two, for that matter?"

He showed me the locations on my map. All three of them lived on separate estates outside of Vivec, dotted around the Ascadian Isles. I'd have to fly there if I wanted to have any chance of getting back before sunset.

Following my midday meal, I teleported to the High Fane and used Vivec's shrine yet again. Flying through a raging storm while covered in sheet metal was a wee bit nerve-racking, but I managed to reach Orvas Dren's plantation without being struck by lightning.

Now I must admit, I was surprised how easy I'd had it with the Hlaalu and Telvanni so far. With the exception of Gothren, they were practically falling over each other to grant me this incredible honour. "Wow, you found my house? Go ahead, be Hortator." "You're a woman? Be my guest!" Possibly they just assumed I'd end up dead in any case, but either way, I'd been extremely lucky.

I might have known it wouldn't last. I hadn't imagined it would be easy to sweet-talk the head of the Camonna Tong, but I never expected that things would go so wrong, so quickly. I met Dren in the topmost room of his lavish villa, where he'd gathered together all kinds of exotic armour and weaponry. For a moment I was surprised by how young and handsome he looked ? in my mind I'd seen him as some kind of bloated stage villain, growing fat and greasy off his ill-gotten gains.

His face darkened as I walked up the stairs towards him, and I saw him glance at an ebony spear which leaned against the wall beside him. "Well?" he demanded. "Who are you, and what do you want?"

"My name is Ada Ventura, sera, and I want to be the Hortator of House Hlaalu. I was told I should come to you if I wanted the votes of the other Councillors."

He snorted. "You show unusual wisdom for an outlander. But tell me, what's the title of Hortator worth to you? Why do you want to be Hortator?"

"To fight Dagoth Ur, of course," I said, taken aback.

"Oh? So that your precious Empire will be safe, Cyrodiil?" He took a step towards me, forcing me to retreat a little way down the stairs. "Tell me one thing. What have you Imperials ever done for us?"

I really hadn't been expecting a question like that. "Brought peace?" I suggested, saying the first thing that came to mind.

Without warning, Dren's face contorted with rage. "Peace?" he snarled. "Like the peace of the grave we've had since the Tribunal betrayed us and signed the Armistice? Dagoth Ur has made me a better offer. The Sixth House will rise again and crush the Empire, and those smug hypocrites in the Tribunal. And as for you, you will die with the rest of the foreign devils!"

Before I could recover from my surprise, he grabbed hold of the ebony spear and thrust the point viciously into my stomach. To this day I'm grateful that I'd chosen to use the levitation shrine to reach the villa. If I hadn't, I'd have tumbled backwards down the stairs and probably broken my neck. As it was, the force of the blow sent me flying backwards into the opposite wall.

Pure instinct took over. Recovering my breath, I grabbed my sword and launched myself through the air at the shocked-looking Dren. He made another wild thrust with his spear, but it glanced off my cuirass and smacked me into the ceiling. I lashed out at his unprotected head with my sword, driving the glass blade half-way through his skull.

The sound of Dren's body clattering to the ground brought his servants running to see what was going on. Bruised and shaken, I turned to see two male retainers staring at me with open-mouthed horror.

Something inside me snapped. "Well?" I snarled. "Well?" I flung down my shield and seized up Dren's spear with my left hand, jabbing it in their direction. "Think you're hard enough, do you? Anyone else want to take on the Nerevarine?"

The men cowered back in undisguised terror. "N-no, s-sera."

"Good." I hovered a little closer. "Now, if you've finished snivelling, go and have messages sent to Nevena Ules and Velanda Omani. Tell them I'll be paying them a visit within the next few hours, and that I want to be Hlaalu Hortator. Got it?"

The men nodded, bowed hastily and then ran for their lives. I stayed in Dren's villa to await their return, still fuming quietly. For the first time since becoming Nerevarine, I actually felt like someone powerful and dangerous. Maybe a bit of Nerevar Indoril's spirit was finally starting to show through.

My armour was covered in dried blood, but I didn't bother to clean it off before going to visit the Councillors. I wanted to make an impression ? and it worked. When I arrived at Nevena Ules' manor approximately an hour later, the poor woman was practically wetting herself with terror.

"Oh. Yes. Yes," she stammered. "You want to be Hortator. Sure. I think that's a very good idea. You'll be a very special Hortator. Is that okay?"

I nodded, trying to keep a straight face. "Do I need to say anything official?" she continued. "How about... 'In the name of House Hlaalu, I hereby say you are a Hortator. Of this house... House Hlaalu.'"

"That's fine," I said. "If you'll just sign here?" She took up the quill in a shaking hand and scrawled her name under Crassius' declaration. "Excellent. It's been a pleasure doing business with you, Sera Ules."

Velanda Omani was a little calmer, possibly because she'd had more time to digest the news. "Yes, Sera Ventura," she said, when I confronted her in her manor. "I've just heard of Orvas Dren's unfortunate? death. You have my vote as Hortator of House Hlaalu."

With all the votes collected, I flew back to Vivec to see Crassius, wondering what sort of a 'present' he had for me. I don't know how it happened, but it seemed he'd got wind of Orvas Dren's 'unfortunate death' as well. On the surface he was as cheery as ever, but I could see the signs of strain around his eyes.

"All the councillors agree?" he said. "Splendid! I'm so happy for you! And now, I have a little treat for you: a belt given to the Hortator of House Hlaalu. Just snug it around that supple little waist ? " He broke off under the withering look I gave him. "Now, I know you have important things to do, but don't be a stranger. Don't neglect poor, lonely Uncle Crassius, your devoted admirer."

"Of course not," I said, taking the belt. "Thank you for all your help, Crassius. I'll be sure to come and see the play when it's finished."

And so it was that the first House to declare me Hortator was Hlaalu, not Redoran. Funny how these things turn out, isn't it?
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:13 am

I'm not sure if I've posted before here.

I've been reading this thread, and enjoying it. I really like Ada's sense of irony and pragmatism. I can not read a single chapter without smiling, chuckling, or even laughing outright -
I told him my story, doing my best to ignore the feel of ? well, I'd rather not describe it, but I'm sure you can imagine.


There are a lot to like in this story and I intend to keep reading!
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:09 am

By casting Almsivi Intervention from Sadrith Mora and then flying south, I managed to reach Tel Branora by late evening.

I’d been here once before, after I helped that silly Breton girl – what was her name again? – who’d fallen in love with a highwayman.

Wasn't that at Pelagiad?

edit: Oh right, the reward was at Tel Branora. Nevermind. Anyway, it's nice to be up to date with the story now!
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:40 pm

He was soft and flabby – well, most of him at least

most of him at least

:ooo:


most of him at least


:blink:

:hubbahubba:

to ignore the feel of – well, I’d rather not describe it, but I’m sure you can imagine. I


you can imagine

:hubbahubba:


And by the way

“Oh good,” I said, forcing myself to smile. “You’ll support me, then?”

Huh? Couldn't she feel his support underneath??? Hmmm...I think the shock must have driven her nether extremeties numb...

:whistling:


So!!!

Our Ada, in order to become the Neverarine, does first a striptease, then a lap dance for Crassius Curio...

Thus causing him to become a politician, and have an election.

And we even get a Slobbery Flench Keeees scene thrown in later!!!


... DANG. I NEVER knew you could get away with writing THAT on these forums! Helena, my pants off to you!!!

...er...


...er....Freudian Slip....I meant my hat's off, of course. AND I mean the hat on the head I think with, just to be perfectly precise.

:whistling:

With that as foreplay (ARRRGH Freudian Slip Again) - I meant to say foreshadowing - is it any wonder that when I read

he grabbed hold of the ebony spear and thrust the point viciously into my s

I at first suffered from a lapse of the olde eyesight, and saw anything but the word 'stomach' afterwards...


Helena, Helena, you are such a wickedly witty, outrageous girl, and all this under the straightest of deadpan faces!

I really think you should do stand up comedy...those male members (arrgh, my imagination again) of the audience you don't make helpless with laughter, you will make - er -

- alas, I am not as clever as Helena -

- er -

- er.... 'stand up'!!! Yes - a whole new meaning of stand up comedy!!!!


:rofl: :drool: :rofl:
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 8:04 am

I thought you might like that part, Foxy ;)

As for stand-up comedy, it takes me an average of about two weeks to write each of these chapters. I don't think even I could hold an audience for that long...
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 10:21 pm

I don't think even I could hold an audience for that long...


/Channels D.Foxy - I would be willing to let you try.... :whistling:
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:29 am

You see?

Now I have corrupted even the staid, eminently respectable Trey!!!

:rofl:


Soon he will not be Trey, but 3Dogg!!! (hint: Fallout )
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:07 am

Back from holiday and a new story to read :D

:goodjob: Helena
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 3:54 am

This story is just fantastic! Loved the part when Uncle Crassius actually was denied something! Im still at page 3 but I just wanted to say that this is fantastic, wonderful, even extrodinary! But to actually write it down... Mara preserve us!
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:08 pm

U can say that agin!! :D
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:08 am

Darn... I have read it all and then the terror struck me! I am going to have to wait a week for the next chapter!!!
Well, really good chapters! You should become an author so that you can get some money while writing this!
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:33 am

Glad you like it, Haresus!

Completely off-topic: I felt a sudden urge to create pictures of Ada as I really imagine her, rather than using her Morrowind face (which was the closest I could find). So I messed around with Oblivion's horrible face-gen system for a while and finally came up with something half-way decent. Here is Ada at 22, shortly before the incident which landed her in jail:
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f332/ecucej/Adac.jpg?t=1270904760

And here she is in her Fighter's Guild gear:
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f332/ecucej/Ada1.jpg?t=1270905213
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:02 pm

Now I will be (somewhat) serious, for once.

Those two pictures of Ada give her much more character than the previous, pretty and sixy but somewhat vapid pictures you made before (see your avatar which, for some reason, you have not changed yet) - yes, yes, I know, you blamed the better bodies mod for that...

...and yet...


In a way, Ada DOES look more ... how shall I say it? ... quietly, and smoulderingly, sixy than before. It's the combination of the wide and generous lips, the large and beautiful eyes, and the grim determination in the second pic (now how did you get THAT I wonder!)

ps CHANGE YOUR AVATAR TO THE NEW LOOK!!!
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:33 pm

Okay, 'tis done.

It is easier to give screenshots 'character' in Oblivion, as there's a much wider range of poses and facial expressions. Even so, setting up that second shot was quite a challenge! I had to get into combat with a bandit, then use 'tai' to freeze them, and find a spot where the light fell just right to set up Ada in that pose.
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:06 pm

If they ever make a movie about Ada, http://www.tncp.net/Portals/21/2005/Gina_Torres_01.jpg has got to play her.
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 11:38 pm

Holy Seperated at Bathtime, Badman! The two could be Twin Sisters!!!

:ooo:
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Chapter 35: The Perfect Crime

My ‘bring it on’ mood lasted throughout the evening. It was only once I’d cleaned myself up, eaten, and taken a nice long hot bath that panic finally set in. Well, not ‘panic’ as such – more a sudden realisation of “Oh dear Gods, I’ve just killed the head of the CAMONNA TONG.” Not to mention following it up by very publicly declaring myself the Nerevarine.

Something told me there would be a lot more people out to kill me by the time I woke up the next morning. I spent the night in Ebonheart, hoping I’d be a bit safer from gangsters and religious zealots in Imperial territory. After that, though, I didn’t have much choice but to go back to Ald’ruhn.

I still couldn’t think how to deal with Gothren, but I hoped Athyn Sarethi would be willing to overlook that for the moment. Luckily I was right. “So the Hlaalu have already named you Hortator?” he asked in surprise. “I am impressed. I hope you did not have to do anything dishonourable to get the title.”

“Well… not dishonourable as such,” I said, trying not to shudder as I remembered Crassius’ little ‘favour’. “I had to kill Orvas Dren, though – he attacked me without warning. I’m sorry, Athyn.”

He shook his head. “I fear you have made more enemies, but I suppose it cannot be helped. Besides, from what I knew of Dren, I believe that Vvardenfell will be better off without him.” He glanced down at the Hlaalu declaration. “‘This sweet little dumpling’…? Ah, I see: Crassius Curio. Well done, Ada.”

At this point I had to make a rather embarrassing confession: I still didn’t really know what a Hortator was supposed to do. I’d led a few very small operations during my time in the Guild, but my skills as a General were… well, ‘untested’ was the politest way of putting it. I had about as much knowledge of large-scale military strategy as I did of advanced Conjuration magic. The Hlaalu and Telvanni didn’t seem to care, for whatever reason, but I had an uncomfortable feeling that the Redorans would.

But Athyn’s answer surprised me. “A Hortator is not really a general,” he told me, when I explained my concerns. “More of a chief hero. It’s the Councils who plan and approve strategy.”

“Really?”

He nodded. “A Hortator is a champion who leads by inspiration. He – or she, in this case – challenges opposing heroes in single combat.” Well, I’d done that… sort of. “She goes on long, desperate quests.” Check. “She goes alone into the citadels of the enemy.” Uh-oh.

“Athyn,” I said quietly. “Are you saying I’m going to have to confront Dagoth Ur alone?”

“That remains to be seen. Once you have the support of the Houses and tribes, and have convinced the Temple authorities that you are the Nerevarine, there will be time to discuss a strategy.”

“But…” Frustration bubbled up inside me. “This all seems completely backwards. When all those Hlaalu and Telvanni agreed to make me Hortator – the ones who care at all, that is – they did it because they thought I had some sort of plan to defeat Dagoth Ur. What am I going to do when they realise I don’t? What happens if the Temple finally agrees to recognise me as Nerevarine, and I have to admit that I don’t have the faintest idea what to do next?”

“I know it must seem foolish, but you must understand: there is no chance that the Temple will even consider your claims until the prophecies are fulfilled. You are challenging centuries of deeply-held belief.” He laid a hand on mine. “You must trust in the Gods to show you the way, as they have always done in the past.”

I said nothing. “Ada,” he went on, “I am not going to force you to be our Hortator if you don’t wish to. If you prefer to give up your claim, that is your choice.”

Easy for him to say, I thought. He wasn’t the one who had Azura breathing down his neck. “I can’t back out now, Athyn. I’ve already told half of Vvardenfell that I’m the Nerevarine.”

“Then you wish me to declare you Hortator, in spite of your own doubts?”

I couldn’t really see any way out. “Yes, I suppose I do.”

“So be it. I owe you a personal debt, and would be glad to repay you… but truly, Ada, I believe in you. I think you have the strength to undertake this quest, and the courage and passion to see it through.” If only I could believe that. “I name you, Ada Ventura, Hero and Hortator of House Redoran. I am sure the other councillors will agree.”

“What about Archmaster Venim?”

“Come back to me when you have convinced the other Councillors, and I will tell you a way that we might deal with Venim.”

I decided to visit Miner Arobar first, just to get the worst over with. He looked even worse than he had when I’d last seen him, and even less pleased to see me. His eyes were puffy and bloodshot – in fact, I could almost have sworn that he’d been crying recently. What the heck was going on there?

“Why have you come back here, House Father?” he asked, before I had the chance to speak. “If this is about the Council, I have already told you – ”

“It’s not about that, serjo. Something else entirely, in fact.”

His face relaxed ever so slightly. “Then I trust you will explain this reason for interrupting me yet again?”

I launched into my story, trying to keep it as short and direct as possible. Arobar listened, stroking his chin, and as I went on his expression became increasingly skeptical. “So,” he said at last, “you come to tell me that you are the reincarnation of Indoril Nerevar.”

“Yes.”

“Azura spoke with you,” he continued. “In a cave. And told you that because you are the reincarnation of Nerevar, you must become the Hortator of all three Great Houses. And that is why you are standing here now, telling me this story of the Tribunal stealing power from a god’s heart with Dwemer tools. And that Dagoth Ur is not dead, but even now plots to conquer Morrowind with the power of this alleged… heart. Is that correct?”

Put like that, it did sound a little unlikely.

“That’s correct,” I said, rather apologetically. “Look, here’s the Moon-and-Star ring I was telling you about.”

He took my hand and peered at it closely. “You see, sera,” he said, “my problem is that your story is a little… unbelievable. And, well, there are also these rumours about you being an Imperial spy…”

“What?” I gasped, outraged. “But that’s ridiculous! That’s – ”

I paused. I was an Imperial spy, wasn’t I? So much had happened since I’d last seen Caius Cosades that I’d almost forgotten.

“Very well,” he said with a sigh. “I will speak to Athyn Sarethi, your sponsor, and ask for his counsel. Please, wait here until I return.”

I sat down on a bench in the hallway and waited, hoping that he really was going to speak with Sarethi and not just fetching guards to haul away the dangerous lunatic. I wouldn’t entirely have blamed him, to be honest. Just two or three months ago, I’d have laughed my head off if someone came to me with a story like that.

It took quite a while for Arobar to get back, but whatever Athyn had told him seemed to have done the trick, as he looked deeply contrite. “I have spoken with Athyn Sarethi,” he said, as I stood up to greet him. “He believes your story, and I have absolute faith in his judgement. Please accept my apologies for not accepting you at once… and for believing these rumours about you being a spy.” He grasped my hand. “You have my vote. Tell the other councillors that I have given you my blessings.”

Wow. I didn’t know what Athyn had been saying to bring about this transformation, but I sure as hell owed him for this. “That’s quite alright,” I said graciously. “Er… while we’re on the subject, I don’t suppose…?”

But he was already shaking his head. “No, my friend. I am sorry, but I still cannot support you as a Councillor. Please don’t ask me again.” Oh, well.

I visited the other councillors one by one, and rattled off my story: Nerevarine cult, Dissident Priests, Lost Prophecies, Seven Trials, visions of Azura, Moon-and-Star. And each time it played out the same way: they listened to me with varying degrees of skepticism and disbelief, before going off to speak to Athyn Sarethi, who somehow managed to convince them that I was both sane and trustworthy. By the time I reached the last one, Hlaren Ramoran, I was tempted just to send him straight off to Athyn and get him to tell the story.

At last, with everyone’s vote in the bag except Venim’s, I went back to Sarethi Manor. I hadn’t asked any of the councillors to put their vows in writing – I knew the Redorans well enough by now to realise they would see this as a grave insult. But as Athyn had just spoken to them himself, he knew perfectly well that they’d all given their consent.

“Well done, my friend,” he said, as soon as I entered his study. “And now we must turn to the matter of Bolvyn Venim. I fear he will never agree to name an outlander Hortator – in fact, I would not advise you even to try. But now that you have the full support of the council, he may agree to an honourable duel.”

I sank down into a chair. “Another duel, Athyn?”

“I know it isn’t what either of us would wish, but I fear there is no other way. Venim was a great leader once, but he has grown tyrannical and unjust, and he loathes outlanders – and of course, he knows the part you played in freeing my son. Still, it is your decision.”

Both of us were silent for quite a while. “I’ll tell him my story first, and see what he says,” I said at last. “You never know. Miracles might happen. Oh, by the way: do you know what’s up with Miner Arobar? He refused me outright when I asked for his support on the Council.”

“Miner did not even consider your case? This is troubling.” He thought for a moment, frowning. “I believe from this and from his recent votes on the Council that he may be under Telvanni influence.”

“Damn. Do you have any idea who might be influencing him?”

He shook his head. “If you are not too busy, perhaps you could go to Sadrith Mora and find out? I hate to ask this of you at such a time, but it is an urgent matter.”

I’d have to go back there anyway in order to deal with Gothren, so I agreed to look into it. In the meantime, though, I had to prepare myself for my first meeting with the Archmaster.

As I was walking down the entrance hall, the door opened and Varvur Sarethi entered the room. “Varvur!” I exclaimed, briefly forgetting about Venim in my pleasure at seeing him again.

“Ada!” He stopped dead, hovering a few feet away from me. “I didn’t realise you were in Ald’ruhn. Are you… well?”

“Fine, thanks. Where’ve you been this last week?”

“I have been on a mission in the Ashlands. Helping to destroy an illegal Telvanni base.” He was still hanging back a bit, keeping his distance.

“Is everything all right, Varvur?” I asked.

“I – yes. Why?”

“Well, I’m just getting the impression that you’re trying to avoid me,” I said. “I don’t have corprus any more, if that’s the problem. Really.”

He hurried forward immediately. “No! Forgive me, Ada. I didn’t mean to offend you. It’s just that, well…” He shook his head. “I still can’t believe you are the Nerevarine.”

Uh-oh. “Literally can’t believe it, or just can’t take it in?”

“The second.” Phew. “I… suppose I did avoid you, for a little while. I just wasn’t sure how to behave around you. I mean… you are the Nerevarine.”

“You know I’m still the same person, right?” I said quietly. “Nothing’s changed. I have a fancy ring now, that’s all.”

“I know.” He laid his hands on the tops of my arms, as if trying to reassure himself. We stood there awkwardly for a few moments.

“Anyway, wish me luck,” I said at last. “I’m about to go and ask Bolvyn Venim to declare me Redoran Hortator.”

He frowned. “You are going to Venim Manor? You shouldn’t go alone, Ada. What if he sets his guards on you? ”

“What? There’s no way he’d attack me in broad daylight for no reason.” I paused. “…Would he?”

“I don’t know, but I know I would not trust him.” His grip on my arms tightened. “I’ll come with you.”

“Varvur, no! What if he tries to kidnap you again?”

He shook his head. “I’ve been cleared of Bralen’s murder. He would not dare to arrest me now.”

I wasn’t willing to bet on that, to be honest. “Your father’s not going to like this,” I warned.

“I don’t care,” he said bluntly. “Am I a baby, to be ordered around by my father? He may be willing to let you face Venim alone, but I am not.”

What could I say? I didn’t really want to take Varvur with me, but I could hardly order him around like a child – even if I was technically his superior. This wasn’t the time to pull rank. Besides, I was secretly rather grateful for the moral support.

We walked together to Venim Manor and entered the manor cautiously, making sure our weapons were clearly on display. Several of the guards and servants glared at us as we passed, but they didn’t attack us… yet. Varvur, who’d been inside the manor many times before, led me on into Venim’s private quarters.

I’d never met Bolvyn Venim before, and I was interested to see what kind of man could inspire such conflicting feelings in the other Councillors. Venim was tall and powerfully built, dressed in a full set of ebony armour. He was surrounded by a group of guards and assorted hangers-on, including several women who all looked far too young to be his wife. One of the perks of being Archmaster, I suppose, but not exactly what I’d have expected from the ultra-stuffy Redorans.

He looked up sharply as we approached, and his face darkened as he recognised Varvur Sarethi. He shot the young man a filthy glance – which, to Varvur’s credit, he returned unflinchingly – and directed an almost equally unpleasant scowl at me. “What is it, outlander? Unless you have some important business to discuss, I suggest that you leave.”

I bowed low, ignoring his sneering tone. Varvur followed suit. “I do have some rather important business, serjo. Might it be possible for us to talk in private?”

“Certainly not! If you have something to say, outlander, say it here – and be quick about it.”

The guy was already pissing me off, but I was determined to keep my cool this time. “All right,” I said. “I’ve come to ask you to support me as Redoran Hortator.”

There was a ripple of incredulous laughter. Venim stared at me in disbelief. “What?”

“Hortator,” I repeated. “It’s a kind of war leader – ”

“Of course I know what a Hortator is!” he thundered, making me jump. “Why in all Oblivion should I make you our Hortator?”

“Because I’m the Nerevarine.”

Again the other Dunmer burst out laughing, but Bolvyn himself looked distinctly unamused. “Outlander, if this is some kind of joke – ”

“It isn’t a joke, Archmaster,” I said quietly. “Won’t you let me at least try to explain? I am a member of your House.”

He glowered at me for a couple of seconds, but said nothing, which I took as a cue to launch into my story. I tried my very best to make it sound convincing this time, but it clearly wasn’t having the desired effect on Venim; the further I got, the angrier he looked. By the time I reached the part with Azura and the Moon-and-Star he looked downright furious, and when I finally removed my gauntlet to show him the ring, he practically exploded with wrath.

“Do you take me for a fool, outlander? Do you think I can be so easily won over? You are a fraud. Cunning, for an outlander, but a complete fraud.” He was breathing heavily. “No, you will never be Hortator. I will not permit it!”

“Why not?”

“Why not? Why not?” He was spluttering with anger. “Apart from the fact that you are a fraud and a liar?”

“Suppose I could prove to you that I wasn’t lying,” I said. “Would there still be a reason not to declare me Hortator?”

“There are a thousand reasons!”

“Such as?”

“You are an outlander. A Cyrodiil!” He practically spat out the last word. “How could we trust you with the leadership of our House?”

“All the prophecies state that the Nerevarine will be an outlander,” I said mildly. “Read them, if you don’t believe me. And as for the House, I’ll be a Councillor myself soon enough, so I don’t see why that should be a problem.”

He brushed this aside with an irritated gesture. “How old are you, outlander?”

“Twenty-three.”

Twenty-three?” He snorted derisively. “By the standards of our race you are an infant. We Dunmer have seen centuries of warfare, and now you ask us to declare you our champion?”

…Okay, so he kind of had a point. “Well, we humans develop more quickly,” I pointed out, standing my ground. “I’ve proven myself in your House, and I’ve persuaded the other Councillors to support me. I think that ought to count for something.”

“What? I do not – ”

“It is true, serjo,” Varvur said quietly, speaking up for the first time. “She has their support.”

Just for a moment, the older man looked slightly rattled. He rallied quickly, however. “Well, you may have played your tricks on the others, but they will not work on me. If you dare face me in a duel to the death – ”

“There’s no need for a duel, serjo.” I slipped the Moon-and-Star off my finger, and held it out to him. “There’s a very simple way to prove I’m telling the truth. Here, try it on for yourself.”

A sudden hush descended. Bolvyn’s eyes seemed to bulge out as he stared at the ring lying there in my palm, his face rigid, not moving a muscle. The assembled Dunmer were watching with raised eyebrows, and as the seconds passed I saw some of them exchange meaningful glances.

“Well, Archmaster?” I said at last, hoping to goad him into taking the ring. “If you think this is all a trick, why not try it on? Are you afraid, perhaps?”

There was dead silence, and I realised I’d gone too far. Much too far. Bolvyn took a step towards me, his fists clenched and his face pale with fury. “You must be a coward to even suggest such a thing,” he hissed. “Knights and gentlemen do not yield to animals. I despise you.”

I felt the blood rush to my face. For a moment I was too angry and humiliated to speak, but Varvur sprang forward with a cry of rage. “How dare you! She is a House kinsman, and you have no right to say such things to her!” He reached instinctively for his scabbard, and I hastily caught his arm before he could do anything really stupid.

Venim waved a hand dismissively, as if swatting a fly. “Run away, stupid child.”

“Leave it, Varvur.” I gave his arm a squeeze and then turned back to Venim, trying to keep my voice steady. “Well, Bolvyn, I’m a Knight of the Imperial Dragon. Is that knightly enough for you? I’m not a gentleman,” I added, “but hey, I guess that makes two of us.”

Another tense silence followed. Venim drew in breath with a sharp hiss. “This has gone far enough, outlander. If you are not a coward as well as a fraud, I will put a stop to your ambitions at the Arena in Vivec.”

“Fine. Whatever.” I heaved a sigh. “I hereby honourably challenge you to an honourable duel in the honourable traditions of House Redoran. Is that all right? Only you’ll have to give me a week or so, ’cos I’ve got stuff to do first.”

He laughed scornfully. “Very well, outlander. I will meet you in the Arena in a week’s time.”

I was still smarting from the ‘animals’ insult as we left the Venim manor. So, by the looks of it, was Varvur. “Thanks for sticking up for me back there,” I said, with genuine gratitude. “Though I guess I kind of had it coming.”

He shrugged. “You spoke the truth. He was afraid, and everyone could see it!”

“Hmph.” To tell the truth, I was already wondering if I might have bitten off more than I could chew. OK, so I’d faced tough opponents before, but the guy I’d just challenged to a duel to the death was the head of Morrowind’s ancient warrior House. Not to mention bigger, stronger, better-armed and several centuries more experienced than I was.

Back in Sarethi Manor, I told Athyn what had happened. He greeted the news with a resigned shake of his head. “So be it. You must fight him, Ada.”

“Great,” I muttered. “Yet another pointless death.” I just hoped it was going to be Venim’s, not mine.

I had dinner with the Sarethis again that evening, but I couldn’t eat very much – I was too busy worrying about the upcoming duel with Bolvyn. I’d got further than any of the other would-be Nerevarines, but was this going to be the test that finally proved too much for me? Was I doomed to spend the rest of eternity in the Cavern of the Incarnate, telling newcomers “I was not the Nerevarine, because I was stupid enough to challenge the Redoran Archmaster to a duel”?

“Maybe you could give me some advice about fighting Venim,” I suggested hopefully to Athyn. “For instance, what sort of weapons does he prefer to use?”

Athyn chewed thoughtfully on a mouthful of kwama egg before answering. “For duels, he generally uses a Daedric dai-katana.”

I nearly dropped my fork. “Oh, crap!”

“Do not worry, muthsera,” he said calmly. “I have faith in you.” Well, at least one of us did.

I stayed at Buckmoth fort that night, and set off for Sadrith Mora the next morning. I wasn’t sure who to talk to about Miner Arobar, so I started by asking around the Mages’ Guild in Wolverine Hall, trying to be as discreet as possible. Luckily I found an ally in Uleni Heleran, the mage who’d told me all about Telvanni Mouths. It turned out that she was an outlander, and didn’t get on very well with the Morrowind Dunmer – especially the Telvanni.

“Well,” she said cautiously, “I have heard rumours that Master Neloth is holding Nartise Arobar hostage.”

“Nartise Arobar?”

“Miner Arobar’s daughter. Just a rumour, of course,” she added. “You didn’t hear it from me.”

Miner Arobar’s daughter? Well, that would certainly explain how weirdly he was acting. What the hell was it with all these Councillors’ children getting themselves kidnapped? It seemed to be practically a rite of passage for Redoran noble kids.

All of a sudden I remembered the woman I’d seen in a cage in Tel Naga – the one I’d assumed was a slave. Was that Nartise? If so, no wonder she’d looked at me so strangely – she must have recognised me as a fellow Redoran. And I’d just walked out and left her there…

It didn’t take me too long to think of a plan to rescue her, but I decided it would be best to tackle Gothren first. I got the feeling I’d need to get out of town pretty quickly after messing up Neloth’s little kidnap-and-blackmail scheme. Good thing I already had his vote…

Dealing with the Archmagister was something I’d quite happily have put off as long as possible. There was no getting round it: for the first time ever, I was going to have to cold-bloodedly murder a (relatively) innocent person. At least I’d given him fair warning, I suppose. But in any case, I still needed to come up with a way to do it.

I wasn’t fool enough to think I could actually fight Gothren. A guy who’d survived for centuries in House Telvanni could probably kill me just by waggling his eyebrows. But my talk with Venim, useless though it had been in most respects, had given me the beginnings of an idea.

While visiting various apothecaries and alchemists, I’d sometimes seen small bottles of ‘Fortify Luck’ potion on their shelves. I’d never bought one before now – after all, how are you supposed to tell if they even work? Especially when your luck is as unpredictable as mine? But the scheme I had in mind was going to need a lot of luck, so perhaps I ought to give them a try.

It wasn’t too difficult to find Fortify Luck potions in Sadrith Mora, the magic-and-alchemy capital of Vvardenfell. Afterwards I made my way to Tel Aruhn – no flying this time, I preferred to stay out of Vivec right now – and used my Chameleon amulet to scout out Gothren’s quarters without being seen. A plan was slowly forming, but I’d definitely need that Luck potion.

I went back to Wolverine Hall for the rest of the day and returned to Tel Aruhn after dark, wearing Caius’ black clothes and making sure to avoid the guards. Using the Amulet of Shadows, I levitated up to Gothren’s quarters without being seen and entered the tower. Gothren was sleeping, but his two Dremora guards were watching over him – and he probably had all sorts of magical protections as well. I ignored him, wanting to complete my task before the spell wore off.

Some of Gothren’s clothing was laid out on a chair. I slipped off the Moon-and-Star and hid it in the folds of his robe, then crawled underneath one of the wardrobes, where there was just enough space for me to hide out of sight. Clutching my luck potion, I settled down for a long, uncomfortable night.

At long last I heard Gothren’s footsteps approaching, and quickly gulped down the potion. I heard an exclamation of annoyance as he picked up the robe and the ring clattered to the floor. From underneath the wardrobe I could just see his hands scrabbling around to pick it up. Moments later there was a terrible scream, then a loud thump.

I dragged myself out from under the wardrobe. Gothren was lying stiff and motionless on the floor, his face frozen in an expression of utter horror. He was undoubtedly dead. The Dremora guards seemed to have vanished – they must have been released back into Oblivion by his death.

I bent down to remove the ring from Gothren’s finger and slipped it back onto my own. As I straightened up, I heard footsteps rushing down the stairs, and a robed Telvanni woman entered the room. She spotted the body and raised her hands instinctively to cast a spell – then lowered them as she realised that probably wasn’t a good idea.

“I didn’t kill him,” I said. It was true, sort of.

The woman stared at me for a few seconds. Finally she turned away and knelt down by Gothren’s body, searching for marks that would indicate how he died. There weren’t any.

“Well, outlander,” she said at last, rather shakily. “I don’t know how you did this, but I congratulate you. You would make a good Telvanni.”

Well, I assume she meant it as a compliment.

So I’d finally committed the crime I was once accused of, more than a year after being thrown in jail for it. Had that all been part of Azura’s Grand Plan, I wondered? Had some unpleasant-but-harmless noble brat had to die just so that I could become Nerevarine? The thought made me feel slightly sick.

Luckily I didn’t have time to brood on it for too long – there was a damsel-in-distress to be rescued. Maybe I should have brought along another Luck potion, because this plan didn’t go quite as smoothly.

My idea was to enter Tel Naga under a Chameleon spell, slip past the guard into Nartise’s cell, and hand her a Divine Intervention scroll without being seen. The slight flaw in the plan was that I had no way to warn her I was there. I hoped she’d have the sense to realise what was going on, but when I cautiously tapped her on the arm, she let out a sharp gasp.

The guard swung round. “What’s going on?” His eyes darted back and forth before focussing on me, and I realised he’d seen through the Chameleon spell. Abandoning my original plan, I leapt forward and used the Star of the West spell to drop him just as he raised his weapon.

An armoured battlemage cast Dispel at me from the other side of the room, and suddenly I was fully visible again. Damn. Nartise flung herself to the floor with a shriek as the battlemage rushed at me, axe raised. The other mage in the room cast some kind of Shock spell at me, but I ducked behind the battlemage and it hit him right in the back.

Instantly the second mage cast another spell, but this time Marara’s Ring reflected it right back at him. As the two of them collapsed to the ground in agony, I dragged the screaming Nartise to her feet and hauled her up the stairs, bundling her out through the door into the open air. “RUN!” I roared, shoving her in the direction of Wolverine Hall.

She didn’t have to be told twice. We raced down the streets towards Wolverine Hall, past the astonished-looking Telvanni guards, as sounds of pursuit gathered behind us. They seemed to die down once we got close to the fort, but I wasn’t taking any chances. We didn’t even stop for breath until we reached the hall and I pulled Nartise into the Imperial shrine, slamming the door behind us.

“It’s you!” she gasped, seeing my face for the first time. “I knew you’d come back for me! I saw your Redoran shield and – ”

“Yes, fine, but save it for later! We have to get out of here!” I dragged her out of the shrine, snarling “Out of my way!” at a bewildered priest, and led her up to the Mages’ Guild, where I yelled at the long-suffering Guild Guide Iniel to get us to Ald’ruhn. Luckily I’d had the sense to pay her in advance, and she was too flustered to do anything but obey.

Even when we reached Ald’ruhn, we kept running. We didn’t stop until we were under Skar and at the door of Arobar Manor. By now poor Nartise was sobbing and trembling like a leaf, gulping for air as if she’d been half-drowned. She looked very young and frightened, and I suddenly felt very sorry for her.

“It’s okay, sweetheart,” I said gruffly, giving her a hug. “Go on, go to your father. I’m sure he’ll be glad to see you.”

She nodded tearfully and hurried off into the manor, while I headed back to Buckmoth to clean myself up. I didn’t want to pester Miner Arobar until he’d had some time alone with his daughter, but that evening he sent me a message asking me to visit him in his manor. When I saw him again, the change was amazing: he looked like he’d just had a hundred-pound weight lifted off his shoulders.

“You have rescued my daughter.” His voice was choked. “I must apologise for the way I treated you, sera. I will gladly offer my support to make you a Councilman. Please take this amulet as a sign of my support.”

“Thank you,” I said, wondering what I was going to do with yet another amulet. “But you really don’t need to –” Hang on, was that an enchantment giving near-total resistance to fire? Hot damn.

“I mean, I don’t deserve it,” I finished hastily. “But it’s really really kind of you and thankyousoverymuchCouncillor.” Well, I had saved his daughter. And frankly, with a duel against Bolvyn Venim coming up, I was going to need all the help I could get.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:38 am

Fantastic that you posted another chapter! I was afraid that you had stopped writing in this story!

Time for a celebration! Cheese/Cookies/Icecream for everyone! :celebration: :celebration: :icecream: :cookie:
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:02 am

Sorry about the delay. I'm busy rehearsing for a show which will take place in under a month's time, so things will probably slow down quite a bit until then.
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 2:22 am

As long as you don't stop it's all good :D
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:35 pm

Interesting way of killing Gothren. Too bad it isn't available in the game. Did your in-game Ada deal with him by more conventional means? Is she more powerful in your game than depicted in your story?
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Post » Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:41 pm

I've been reading this story since its conception but not commenting. Its time for me to speak up now; this fanfic is the only one which has drawn me in, following ever post of the way and eagerly awaiting new updates (i've even subscribed to this thread!). Just want to say, as i think it would have been rude of me to enjoy this work without giving credit. Keep up the very, very good work. :)
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Post » Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:17 am

Thank you, Dres. :)

Rex Little: Yes, I killed him more conventionally in the game. I think it's not so much that Ada is more powerful in-game as that Gothren is less powerful. To be honest, I think most of the supposedly 'powerful' enemies are ridiculously weak unless you turn the difficulty right up.
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