The Revolution-Overthrowing of the Mojave *OOC*

Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:51 pm

Still Accepting, Copy the CS, paste it to a PM, and PM me.



The Revolution:Overthrowing of the Mojave

Plot:

In this RP, the Enclave took over the Mojave with full force, killing anyone who opposed them. Their "occupation" can be that the same as of Nazi Germany's in their lands. Streets are quiet, Casinos torn down and turned into houses, stores, and Enclave outposts. Soon, people had it with the Enclave Occupation. They dared oppose them, they were called "Militia". You are a man/woman who lives in Goodsprings, who must choose, Do you join the Militia? Or do you stay? Choose wisely my friend. Do you want to be attacked, beaten, humiliated by the monsters that call themselves "US government"? (Note:You can start out as Militia.)
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2270-NCR and Legion are spotted by House's Robot

2277-First Battle of Hoover Dam, NCR wins by a hair. A Stalemate ensures

2279-The NCR fully mobilizes in the Mojave, NCR troops move into the Mojave, Mountain Pass becomes Mojave Outpost.

2280- The Legion reinforces men at Fortification Hill. Enclave is first sighted in the Northern regions of New Vegas. NCR recruitment rises, training becomes rare, some men get only two weeks of Basic Training, then sent to the front

2281-Second Battle of Hoover Dam. The Congress of The Enclave has declared war on The Legion, the NCR, and New Vegas. Hoover Dam is destroyed by Enclave Airstrikes. Enclave troops mobilize into the Mojave. The NCR pulls back, quickly loosing men in the withdraw.

2282- The Enclave ensures control over the Mojave and all regions outside New Vegas. New Vegas becomes Las Vegas and is turned into a semi Enclave outpost semi City. NCR is pushed back to Shady Sands, and is loosing men rapidly. The Legion is disbanded when the Legate Lanius and Caesar are killed in a Enclave Airstrike. The Utah Legion scatters and joins the Mormons or become nomads. Super Mutants at Black Mountain and Jacobstown are exterminated. Marcus flees Jacobstown and disappears yet again.

2283- Nipton is turned into a Enclave Outpost, The Brotherhood are evicted from Hidden Valley, then killed. Black Mountain is turned into a Radio and Radar base. Taxes increase in New Vegas, riots that take place in the Strip are quickly subdued, anyone who was in the riots are either executed or thrown in prison.

2284-A protest happens in Golftown, former Camp Golf, now a rivermen boat trade area, Enclave troops fire onto a crowd of unarmed protesters. People around the Mojave demand reform. The Enclave sends more men to the Mojave. The NCR looses ground in Shady Sands

2285-Revolution occurs. The Enclave troopers in Novac are brutally killed. The Enclave flag that flew over the Dinosaur is replaced with the 1778 flag.

2286-The Enclave airstrikes Novac, killing most people inside. The revolutionaries withdraw.
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Locations:

Searchlight-Enclave outpost and a City, The Airport is a Enclave base

Goodsprings- (This is where you start) Goodsprings is a town with Farms, is popular with Enclave troops, It is where Militamen commonly come to recruit people

Primm-It is a bustling town full of Traders, stores, and people. The Enclave patrols in and around here

New Vegas-A quiet town, contrary to pre-Hoover Dam, people usually stay in their homes, but will sometimes come out to get things from the Store. It is heavily patrolled by Enclave. The Lucky 38 is the Enclave Province Capital.

GolfTown-Is Camp Golf, It is sort of like Colonial Boston. Enclave PT boats (Military and trading) go into the city. The Golftown Massacre happened here. The Enclave patrol it.

Mojave Outpost-Nothing but ruins. The Ranger Memorial was destroyed in a Enclave Airstrike. Buildings are occasionally picked upon by Scavengers.

Nipton-Is a Enclave outpost. The Mayoral Building has been turned into a Administration/Armory Building. The houses have been turned into Barracks. The Store is now a tavern for the Enclave

Bitter Springs-It is labeled abandoned in Enclave files, but it is the Militia headquarters for its far distance from New Vegas.

Red Rock Canyon-It is a encircled area of the Great Khans. The Enclave continue to attack them, but they cannot airstrike it because they want the area, and choppers cannot get in that far. Tanks sometimes bombard it.

Freeside-Little has changed other than Casinos being destroyed. The Followers have been "employed" by the Enclave to help troopers and citizens. The Kings were killed immediately.

Novac-It is nothing but rubble after a Enclave airstrike.

Camp Forlorn Hope-A Enclave forward operating base

Nelson-Restored into a Town

Hoover Dam-Nothing, The Enclave destroyed it, blowing a hole into the side of it.

Black Mountain-Enclave Complex, heavily patrolled by Enclave

Hidden Valley- Enclave Complex, Moderately patrolled by Enclave

Sloan-Mining community, it mines for rock and gives it to Enclave.

Area outside New Vegas (Westside, North Vegas, Fiend areas, etc etc)- The fiends were killed by the Enclave, Westside is turned into a small town. North Vegas is exterminated for being Pro-Militia.

Bonnie Springs- A small down located south of the new Spring State Enclave Ranch. The Enclave has forcibly uprooted people from other towns to work the ranch to the north and because a deposit of petroleum was discovered there.

Spring State Enclave Ranch- This town is more of an enforced work camp, where people are forced to ranch bighorners for their meat.

Camp Guardian and Guardian Peak- Once an old NCR base its hidden location up and among the mountains made it nearly impossible to airstrike. It is now a prime militia base and has multiple workshops setup here.

Platform City (formerly Scavenger Platform)- This city is another trading hub built to send supplies to Enclave Camps along the river. Many of the merchants here are Militia Sympathizers and smuggle good up the Lake to Camp Guardian and Bitter Springs

I88 City (formerly I88 Trading post)- The trading post began to flourish into a merchant town a s the Enclave used it to store vehicles and transport good to their more southern encampments.
Camp McCarran- Now large Enclave military base.

Enclave Sharecropper Farms- A large Enclave run farming operation

Gypsum Industries- A large mining operation has now started here and it has become a major train station for transporting of Enclave goods.

Ruby Hill Mine- Now a large Enclave enforced mining operation

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Info:

The Enclave do not have Power Armor, nor laser or plasma weapons/grenades. The Enclave has http://www.imfdb.org/images/thumb/6/69/M16A4M203ACOG.jpg/600px-M16A4M203ACOG.jpg and http://www.usmilitary.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/recall-of-military-us-army-body-armor-ordered1-299x300.jpg. The Militia has http://www.elec-intro.com/EX/05-14-17/m14wood.gif and http://www.thehistorybunker.co.uk/acatalog/KDpackageLarger.jpg. But the Militia usually will use whatever they can wear, fire, throw, or kill with. The Towns are 3x larger and the Mojave is 10x bigger. The Enclave uses http://www.military-today.com/helicopters/sikorsky_uh60_blackhawk.jpg and http://www.fprado.com/armorsite/Abrams_Pics/M1A2-TUSK-upg-2005-1.jpg But the Militia has no vehicles, but the Militia has RPGs, Grenade Launchers, and mines. The Enclave has Mines, RPGs, grenade launchers, and a lot more. In this RP, most of the Vaults have been sealed off by the Enclave, but some vaults haven't been found...yet. Searchlight isn't radiated, but it is now a major Enclave outpost, and Searchlight airport now holds Black Hawk Choppers, F-15 Fighter Bombers, and is also a base. The Enclave is led by President John Evans, and their capital is Seattle. The Legion is nothing more than skeletons in the desert, all were killed by the Enclave, the NCR is holding a "Reichstag" like defense in their capital (Constantly gaining ground, then loosing it). The Courier does not exist in this RP. New Vegas is also more than just Casinos, the Strip also has houses, stores, and other things like that in it. It will mostly focus on the day to day life of the Militia, so don't expect constant fighting. The Enclave also have Riot Police, who patrol the streets of cities and towns. They have Riot Shields, MPk5s, Riot Armor, and smoke grenades. The Militia are not limited to just the weapons and armor above, they will take whatever they can use, like shovels, pitchforks, swords, anything.
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Rules:

1) Don't Uber

2)Don't act all god like, you can get hurt.

3) Act Realistic

4)Don't be a Jerk

5)Act like how you would if you were a Militiaman.

6)If you are confused on what your armor and weapon are, click on "M-14s" and "Militia Armor", But you DO NOT start out as a Militiaman.

8) Don't do a sloppy job on the CS pleas

9)Have Fun

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CS:

Name:
Age:
six:
Race:
Weapon(Can be Militia Weapon if you just want to start out as Militia):
Armor/Clothing(can be Militia Uniform if you want to start as Militia):
Appearance:
Personality:
Bio( can be Explained in RP):
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Current Characters:


http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-mllJyoITkz8/TVou3RRJ1JI/AAAAAAAAANI/lXRMVqY1Qfw/s1600/hanslanda.jpg-Icouldntthinkofaname

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/1152/33036768.png-DarkZerker

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_hSpIx9LK9_g/TRz34LrltbI/AAAAAAAAAcA/TqXLNLkdTN0/s1600/Maria-Sharapova-photo-1.jpg-Mexican Candy

http://img.xcitefun.net/users/2008/06/5341,xcitefun-alizee-jacotey-2.jpg-Icouldntthinkofaname

http://mature-gaming.com/wp-content/uploads/news/chris-avellone.jpg-Mexican Candy

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20090404203832/fallout/images/thumb/1/15/Max_Madden.jpg/250px-Max_Madden.jpg-Drop_Dead

http://navysealexperience.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/Female-Sniper-300x199.jpg-Yttrium

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a149/Coma--White/insane.jpg-Theb

Will be added on as time goes by
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Icouldntthinkofaname
Spoiler
Name:Alexander Evans
Age:21
six:Male
Weapons:M-14, Sword, and a pitchfork
Armor/Clothing:Militia Uniform stained with blood and mud
Race:Caucasian
Appearance:Clean Cut Black hair, green eyes, tanned skin
Personality:A simple man, he will be nice to you if your nice to him.
Bio(can be Explained in RP): (Explained in RP)


DarkZerker
Spoiler
Name: Aiden Kim
Age: 26
six: Male
Race: Asian
Weapon: Intervention Sniper Rifle w/ Silencer, Uzi 9mm w/ Silencer.
Armor/Clothing:A black helmet like a Veteran Ranger to conceal his face, and a black trench coat with combat armour plating underneath the trench coat.
When off duty, a basic hoodie with an ice pack to keep cool when need be.

Appearance: A kind of rugged and weathered face, however also attractive at the same time. No beard, clean cut black hair, grey eyes, and skin tone isn't tanned but rather a kind of regular tone from being inside his suit the majority of the time. About 6 feet even and has an athletic build.

Personality: Aiden is polite and friendly to his allies and when he's off duty but on duty, he's a totally different person. He's ruthless and even to some extent, evil when it comes to the systematic killings of Enclave soldiers. But in both cases, he's highly intelligent in the arts of warfare and very cunning, out thinking the enemy rather than outfighting them.

Bio( can be Explained in RP): Aiden was trained from 8 years old by his parents and the NCR along with five other children in a program for a special forces unit. For ten years, the six children trained and by 18 years of age, all of them were on par with NCR rangers, some even better than that. Of course, the training wasn't just fighting and killing, it also involved vast amounts of military tactics and strategies. And by the Second Battle of Hoover Dam, Aiden's squad was an infiltration unit on the east side of the Colorado. But then the Enclave Occupation came.

Aiden's squad was massacred and his family ran eastwards. In response to this, Gary joined up with a small resistance band, acting as the leader. With lots of knowledge of military strategy, he lead a seemingly massive campaign against the Enclave occupation. But it was just a pinprick as the Enclave again, slaughtered the resistance. Aiden ran eastwards, moving from place to place.

Thankfully, everybody who knew Aiden was dead, meaning the Enclave couldn't track him. And after stumbling upon one of the supply drops meant for his squad, he picked up an Intervention before heading to small villages and roads to try and stem the tide as much as possible and help any resistance fighter.

Aiden helps as much as possible, but acts as a freelancer, killing an Enclave patrol or if a riot breaks out, kills the commanding officer of the town. But he wishes to make a mark in a better way by joining the Militia as a sniper to try and save more lives of the revolutionaries and stop the Enclave occupation.


Stvalley:
Spoiler
Name: Rion Felsa

Age: 19

six: Male

Race: Caucasian

Weapon: Mini-14

Armor/Clothing: Torn and dirty blue t-shirt. Tan cargo's, and raggity dark blue tennis shoes, and black backpack.

Appearance:6'0, Dirty blonde short cut hair, Hazel eyes, and sunburned.

Personality: Before the occupation he was usually a nice young kid, who could be a bit of a nuisance when he felt devious. But when his older brother was killed during the protests he lost his childish innocence, and now he is a angry, vengeful man.

Bio: His mother died during the birth of him, and his dad left his mother, and sons, so his older brother Jaq was given the responsibility of raising him. Being a caravan family the Felsa's traveled alot around the Mojave, and meet many people. During the occupation the taxes took a hard toll on the Felsa family, and nearly put them out of bussiness. Jaq Felsa (Rion's older brother) decided to go protests to protest the unfair taxes, and was beaten, and killed by Enclave riot police. Left alone, and angry Rion left the caravan bussiness to join the Militia in Goodsprings.


Drop_Dead:
Spoiler
Name: Jacob Anderson

Age: 19

six: Male

Race: Caucasian

Weapon: 9mm Pistol

Apparel: Slightly damaged and dirty Grunt Merc outfit.

Appearance: 6'3, Slicked Back black hair, Brown eyes, Goatee, and Tanned skin. He also has a slightly scarred left leg from a bullet wound (Will be explained in RP.).

Personality: He was (and still is) an intelligent young man, who once had a bright future. He is tough, and cared for his family and friends very much. He used to be open and thoughtful, but after the Enclave showed up, he has become heartless and cold. Sees almost nothing in the world anymore. He talks to almost no one, and sits alone in his house every day, staring onto darkness, a shell of a once great man.

Bio: Born and raised on a farm in the outskirts of Goodsprings, taught how to shoot and hunt by father, learned how to cook and read from mother. Had two sisters. (The rest will be explained in RP.)


MouseKing:
Spoiler
Name:Aron Erlichman

Age:17

six: M

Race: Caucasian

Weapon: Rustly Knife, RPG-7, Benelli M1014,

Apparel: Jeans, Black Blazer, and a Dirty T-Shirt, Kevlar Body Armor, Combat Helmet

Misc: 300$ ,Water Skin, Two Water Bottles, Aluminum Carrying Case, Backpack, 3 Rockets, 30x 12 Gauge Rounds, Spade,

Appearance: 5'9, so he is on the short side, clean shaven, blue eyes, black hair. He is dirty from having traveled through the Mojave

Personality: Aron was a nice person until the Enclave occupation, now he is even kinder to those who dont support the occupation, but has become ruthless towards any and all people who support the occupation. He tries to be charitable adn kind to all, but in these dire times it becomes hard adn he finds he is becoming colder, adn colder, by the day. He finds some peoples lack of will to fight back sad at times, but even eh himself fears the fight and does not know if he is fighting for a good cause.

Bio: Born in Westside, he was quickly orphaned by continual Fiend attacks on the settlement. Quickly he was taken in by (who is the guy who owns the Pawn SHop). He learned a knack for fixing things and quickly learned as much as he could about terminals. Living in Westside he became proficient with fire arms and gained a knack for fighting. He always has been tryign to help people but the reign of the Enclave has brought out teh worst in people and himself.


Mexican Candy
Spoiler
Name: Mary Nyden (the legend lives!)
Age: When does this RP take place?
six: Woman
Race: Human, Caucasian
Weapon: M-14
Armor/Clothing: See appearance.
Appearance: A regular wastelander outfit.
Personality: Kind, but tough. She's attractive and doesn't take no for an answer.
Bio: (explained in RP)


Yttrium
Spoiler
Name: Rosamond Blackwood

Age: 33

six: Female

Race: Human, Caucasian

Weapons: Barrett M82, M1911

Armor: NCR Bandoleer Armor

Appearance: 5'9 with shoulder length hair the color of ravens feathers tied in a ponytail. Azure eyes and ivory-white teeth. Dark circles under the eyes and all-around haggard appearance from exhaustion. Right leg is crooked, set at unnatural angle.

Personality: Has a strong of justice, is not afraid of doing what is “right”. Usually has a calm demeanor, but recent developments have caused her to be “high-strung”

Bio: Born into the NCR, lived and fought for it most of her life. Her parents both died of pneumonia when she was nine, this hardened, and was perhaps the main reason she fought for the NCR. Leading to a blind and unwavering patriotism for them.

Becoming a ranger was not easy, she trained as hard as she could, then trained harder. She believed becoming a ranger and protecting the Wasteland for the innocents was the best thing a person could do. She failed the first time.

It didn't discourage, in fact it drove her, harder still to becoming a ranger. The second time, she passed. She was a sniper, and a damn good one she thought, yet her career would soon becoming to an end. A riot broke out shortly after the Battle of Hoover Dam a riot broke out at freeside. They were order to kill all rioters on site, but she did not feel that this was the kind of justice they should be delivering, she deserted her post.

She was dishonorable discharged. The next couple of years changed her thinking and views on justice, she watched the violent acts of the wasteland, saw her leg twist from arthritis. Saw many things and her patriotism began to die, but then she was called back to arms.

The Enclave were attacking and the NCR needed every man and woman who knew how to hold gun to help them.


Theb
Spoiler
Name: James Beneteau
Age: 25
six: m
Race: Caucasian
Weapon: primary weapon, secondary weapon, m9 combat knife is tertiary weapon
Armor/Clothing:armor variant
Appearance:blond hair blue eyes clean shaven face
Personality: calm, always level headed, enjoys himself in a fight, wont back down to anyone, Slightly insane
Bio: a wandering soldier who enjoys killing he never stays any place too long because its not in his nature, Which also makes people think he is not a very reliable person its hard for people to trust him they don't know weather if hes going to shoot them or help them.

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willow
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:35 am

Have to paste this here, thought the other thread was going to be OOC.

Just so no one accidently does it, please don't have your character intertwine with mine unless you discuss it with me in a PM.

I don't want to be an ass, but I'm just stating it so no one messes with the story. I think everyone else should do this as well, just so we can all know whats going on, and act accordingly.
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Naomi Lastname
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:48 am

Got that, I understand, just don't kill him.
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Josh Trembly
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:22 pm

Ha, would never dream of it.. :whistling:
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Lyd
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:38 pm

New Locations people, thanks to MouseKing, give him a big hug! :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs:
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:32 pm

New Locations people, thanks to MouseKing, give him a big hug! :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs: :hugs:


What locations? :mellow:
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BethanyRhain
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:44 pm

Look at the locations, i added some.
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Charleigh Anderson
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:34 pm

Bump up.
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Elisabete Gaspar
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:40 pm

Anyone up for a Alamo like battle at Goodsprings?
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Kelly John
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:21 pm

Are you asking if we should have a phrase we yell in battle saying "Remember Goodsprings!"?

If so, no. It was a small victory for the militia, and most likely won't mean much in the long run.

Besides, Jacob did all the hard stuff. :P
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Nathan Risch
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 3:16 pm

I've Chosen two "Battle cries" or just morale boosters

1) REMEMBER NOVAC!

2)DEATH TO TYRANTS!
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Post » Wed Apr 20, 2011 12:24 am

Good, we just need a war hymn! :tongue:
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:00 pm

Sorry for not saying this earlier guys.

New Vegas is the size of modern day Las Vegas. Go to google maps, type in 'Las Vegas' and look at it. Thats how big New Vegas is in the RP.
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:47 pm

And Here I Am

Name: Rosamond Blackwood

Age: 33

six: Female

Race: Human, Caucasian

Weapons: Barrett M82, M1911

Armor: NCR Bandoleer Armor

Appearance: 5'9 with shoulder length hair the color of ravens feathers tied in a ponytail. Azure eyes and ivory-white teeth. Dark circles under the eyes and all-around haggard appearance from exhaustion. Right leg is crooked, set at unnatural angle.

Personality: Has a strong of justice, is not afraid of doing what is “right”. Usually has a calm demeanor, but recent developments have caused her to be “high-strung”

Bio: Born into the NCR, lived and fought for it most of her life. Her parents both died of pneumonia when she was nine, this hardened, and was perhaps the main reason she fought for the NCR. Leading to a blind and unwavering patriotism for them.

Becoming a ranger was not easy, she trained as hard as she could, then trained harder. She believed becoming a ranger and protecting the Wasteland for the innocents was the best thing a person could do. She failed the first time.

It didn't discourage, in fact it drove her, harder still to becoming a ranger. The second time, she passed. She was a sniper, and a damn good one she thought, yet her career would soon becoming to an end. A riot broke out shortly after the Battle of Hoover Dam a riot broke out at freeside. They were order to kill all rioters on site, but she did not feel that this was the kind of justice they should be delivering, she deserted her post.

She was dishonorable discharged. The next couple of years changed her thinking and views on justice, she watched the violent acts of the wasteland, saw her leg twist from arthritis. Saw many things and her patriotism began to die, but then she was called back to arms.

The Enclave were attacking and the NCR needed every man and woman who knew how to hold gun to help them.
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 7:41 pm

Accepted Via PM

Post her up.
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Minako
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 2:04 pm

Finally someone new.

How do you plan on entering the story Yttrium?
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Daniel Holgate
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:13 pm

A Siege Like Battle of Shady Sands

I usually post about three page long posts and I'll try making it as epic/realistic as possible, and since those are contradictions to each other, we'll see how it goes ;)
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:47 pm

A Siege Like Battle of Shady Sands

I usually post about three page long posts and I'll try making it as epic/realistic as possible, and since those are contradictions to each other, we'll see how it goes ;)


Three pages damn your going to put even the good people to shame.
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 7:25 pm

We'll I look forward to it.

I'm sure it'll be super epic/super realistic. :thumbsup:
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Post » Wed Apr 20, 2011 12:05 am

Well, four pages now, but it's mostly one liners, nothing impressive. Actually, a pretty short read. Though I got to admit, I svck with battle scenes, anyone got some pointers? How did you like my sound effects, I first I thought it would childish, and then I was like, why not? Well anyway, tried for some epicness mixed in with some realism.
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:47 pm

@Yttrium

Your post was epic.
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Nick Jase Mason
 
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:47 pm

Well, four pages now, but it's mostly one liners, nothing impressive. Actually, a pretty short read. Though I got to admit, I svck with battle scenes, anyone got some pointers? How did you like my sound effects, I first I thought it would childish, and then I was like, why not? Well anyway, tried for some epicness mixed in with some realism.


You brilliantly described everything going on throughout the post, and it painted a crystal clear image in my head. Like reading in HD. :happy:

However, like you said, the sound effects threw me off a little, not something I recommend using in future posts.

Your great at battle scenes, keep it up. :thumbsup:
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 2:27 pm

I liked the sound affects. He'll be posting with the character as a NCR solider until the fall of Shady Sands.
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:04 pm

@Yttrium

Your post was epic.


Many thanks.


You brilliantly described everything going on throughout the post, and it painted a crystal clear image in my head. Like reading in HD. :happy:

However, like you said, the sound effects threw me off a little, not something I recommend using in future posts.

Your great at battle scenes, keep it up. :thumbsup:


Gratzi. You are too kind, the sound effects are a kind of hit or miss. Some people like them, think they really add to effect and impact of the story and others just think their plain distracting. I'll try to limit them.

I liked the sound affects. He'll be posting with the character as a NCR solider until the fall of Shady Sands.


Gracias. And there's one vote for sound effects.

I want to wait for Dead to reply before posting. My post are kind of long and I don't want them some close to each other. Though me posting would have no real effect towards him...

Anyway, to get this straight, correct me if I'm wrong.

Name and Candy or in South Vegas, Empire Hotel...And Dead and Mouse are trying to run from an Enclave patrol? Near Red Rock Canyon.

At any rate, the NCR will far very quickly in my next couple posts, it'll be fast paced.
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Post » Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:38 pm

That is correct, but so far I'm not enjoying it.

Mouse is a good writer, don't get me wrong, but waiting for someone else to reply to your character is a pain in the ass. It also shortens up the post, and I enjoy writing long posts.

Ah well, I'll deal with it.
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