OK. The reason that I made this thread is because the other one was well not that great, I have some new rules for posting so here they are.

1. You must wait until two people have posted before you can post again.
2. All your posts must be atleast one paragraph.

OK. Now as for the RP, I am advancing it, we are all outside of Mordecai's House (Josh, Ivan, Dan, Zoey, Jonny, Frank, and Mordecai) they are currentley going to the Springvale Shack but they have to make it past BoS Patrollers and Megaton Citizens searching for the assassin who killed Moriarty, suspects are, Josh, Zoey, and Mark.

Now lets start. Again.

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Joshawa and the group, except for Mark were all outside of Mordecai's house.

"What do we do now, BoS Patrollers are all over the place so what teh hell are we supposed to do!" Josh said with frustrasion.
"Well, Josh maybe you can handle the BoS people I mean you are, were a BoS Lyons Pride Member! Hell you were best friends with THE LONE [censored] WANDERER! God rest his soul. And we all know you are the strongest, toughest person in this whole group! Now remember I said person, not mutant!" Mordecai turned around to see the big Mutant standing there.

"So Josh what do you say! All we do is get the [censored] out of here and kick ass to anyone who interfers!" Mordecai said.
"I'm in!" Josh said confidentley.

((ok second thread with new rules shold help this run alot smother also i kow im not the op and making the rules but EVERYONE needs to read the previous post's before their post otherwis they might say somthing thats out of line with the story and i apolagize if i contributed the the mess in the other thread ))



"Springvale shack? i think i know whre that is. However i dont think its a good idea for us all to travel together if its ok with everyone else i'll slip of myself. Plety of people saw me i moriarty's so im definantley a suspect i dont want anyone to get caught with me if i do get caught and i dont car what. Infact i'd sugest that josh you make your own way too as well as mark but i couldnt care what happens to him. Somone should also go with big guy here the BoS might give him less hassle if he's with somone"

Zoey looked around for approval from the others.

"Springvale shack? i think i know whre that is. However i dont think its a good idea for us all to travel together if its ok with everyone else i'll slip of myself. Plety of people saw me i moriarty's so im definantley a suspect i dont want anyone to get caught with me if i do get caught and i dont car what. Infact i'd sugest that josh you make your own way too as well as mark but i couldnt care what happens to him. Somone should also go with big guy here the BoS might give him less hassle if he's with somone"



"How about me zoey and josh go together that mite sound good:Said jonny


Jonny waited for zoey or josh to agree on a small change to trhe plan, during that time he lit a ciggerete

Mark was zooming in on the scope of his W2000 Silenced Sniper Rifle. He had the dot just on Joshawa's head.

"You're trying to turn them against me, I won't let you."

Mark hesitated to pull the trigger, as he slowly waited for the wind to stop.

"Sure Jonny I'll go with you, I do not know about Zoey though, but I'll come" Josh said.

((I know I broke my own rule but there is nothing to write about!))

"Ok then us three go together and we'll meet the rest at springvale shack deal?" the others nodded.

so Zoey, Josh and jonny set out for the springvale shack

"looks like we've got a bit of luck the winds picking up that means there visuals wil be lower than normal, harder for the brotherhood to spot us because of al th dust an dirt flying around"

Zoey felt uneasy, as they left the door to mordecai's house was still open and mark wasnt inside she feared the worst that somone had a hit on them, she also thought mark just wanted to slot her he'd ever liked her from the word go, and she'd never trusted him as far as she could thow a behomoth...

Mark smirked as he followed the targets, he kept focused on them.

"So which one will I take out? I think I'll have some fun."

Mark grabbed his phone and sent Josh a message.

"Hello Josh, if you move one step your brains will be blown away from your head. I'm giving you a choice, kill Zoe or you'll die. Who is more important to you?"

Price began to chuckle as he awaited a reply.

((oooooooh sneaky Wanderer very sneaky this e'll be a fun one to get out of))

"Zoey run!" Josh yelled.

He turned to the left and dived off the railing, he went diving to the roof of a shack, he hurt himself from the fall but got up and ran, he sprinted across the rooftop and jumped off the edge. He landed right next to three BoS Patrollers.

"What the hell are you doing?" One of the BoS asked.

Josh ignored them and sprinted across Megaton looking for a place to high, but could not find any. He turned around and stood there, he collapsed to the ground, the drugs effects had worn off, the pain came back.

Mark held a firm grasp the trigger, as he had Zoe's head right on the dot.

BANG!

Mark had pulled the trigger as a bullet plunged into Zoe's back. She lay on the floor alive but in pain. Mark didn't want to kill her yet, as he had something special instore. He had Josh tracked on a device, he grabbed his Sniper Rifle and went on the hunt for him.

((guys we need to be careful with this shooting each other/ being persued by a hitman it could really slow things up unless this is how josh wants th RP to go but hey i'll just go with it))

Zoey hit the metal grate hard

"Oh [censored] somone help" zoey managed to half call out as she coughed up blood, dragging herslf behind a house she just hoped the others had heard her

(We were supposed to be a team, but now two of the members are with severe injuries that will not go away for a while, :facepalm: oh well, lets just continue lol )

((I'm sorry if I'm causing problems, but it's my characters instinct. I'm not going to kill anyone. Since this is fiction, you could make anything you want to be a non canon cure for the pain. It would seem fitting that we could use our weapons, and not have to kill anyone with them. Just a thought.))

((OOC: EVERYONE CALM DOWN. I got this. But seriously, Ivan's ending this small set back, haha. Sorry for the slight Character control, Lone :[))

The chauvinist - now the traitor - was running from his perch in the sky. As he turned a corner to leave, and presumably hunt down his remaining prey, Ivan was waiting with the butt of his Remington. He struck Mark in the face, letting him fall on his back.

Flipping the Remington around, Ivan pumped it, and said, "Their blood may not be that of the innocent, but it shan't be blood that is shed."

Mark felt dizzy as he saw the streaks of burned flesh in Ivan's face.

"If you're going to kill me atleast let me die with some dignity. I'd appreciate it. One shot to the brain and I'm finished. Let me just say this what would killing me possible do for you? An alliance on the other hand would seem very profitable."

Mark coughed as his life was in Ivan's hand.

((It's alright, Comedian ended it. LOL. and ermm yah that is a good idea, and I know it is instinct, thats fine))

Josh lied on the ground screaming in pain, Zoey was doing the same. Chances are both of them were going to die, die a painful death. Blood filled Josh's mouth and he coughed it up while he screamed, BoS members circled around him, and two went over to him to heal him, they pulled out Stimpacks and Med X, they also took out this stange Syringe filled with a Orange Liquid, they emptied the liquid into Joshawa's mouth, and his wounds seemed to heal instantly, and his pain was gone.

"What the [censored]! What the [censored] just happened!" Josh said shocked.
"It's a new substance the BoS Scientests created, it will heal you instantly, now you gotta tell me what happened!" The Man said.

((still dying lol, somone help meeeeeeeeee))

Zoey coughed up more blood, the pain was more excruciating than anything she'd felt before because in fact she'd never been shot

"i can.. cant go out like this, i nor..norm...normally do the sniping" she laughed slightly to herself but that caused even more pain her eyes felt heavy and there was nothing she could do about it no on seemed to of heard her feeble call for help...

Mark was now on the ground, clearly in pain from the blow of the Remington. Ivan tongued his teeth and cheek, as he raised the Remington; a shot to the head, or a shot to the chest, stomach? Let him die swiftly, or let him feel the pain he caused others.

"If you're going to kill, me at least let me die with some dignity. I'd appreciate it. One shot to the brain and I'm finished. Let me just say this: what would killing me possible do for you? An alliance on the other hand would seem very profitable."

Ivan considered the possibilities, said, "Chauvinist, you've caused nothing but trouble to this group of soon-to-be adventurers." He lifted the Remington to Mark's head, "Nothing put pain to anyone around you." Ivan clenched the handle tight in his hand, "Wiping you from the face of the planet would prevent so much pain."

Shaking his head now, Ivan loosened his grip. He flipped the Remington around, and set it against his shoulder. He reached his other hand out, offering to help Mark up. "No more screwing with Roamers. Can we agree on that? We all came for the same goal. Can we agree on that? You do your business however you please. Just leave us alone, or become one of us." Ivan paused, "Now, an alliance with one like you must prevent the murder of my friends, eh? Talk to me, Mark." It was the first time Ivan used his name.

((OOC: Corny ))

Mark got up as he shook his head in dismay.

"You don't understand, Zoey has a bad past she's killed innocent people. My sources have sent me to kill her for a huge some of money in which I'll split with you if you assist. Think about it Ivan? We could lead the Roamers, overthrow Mordecai and establish our rules. I've learned to become tolerant of Ghouls, and I realize we're all just the same. But Josh has to die, he's a witness to a kill I have to get rid of him or else my contract with the Enclave will be terminated."

Mark had his hand ready, for if Ivan decided to go against the Hitman he would pay with his life. Mark awaited Ivan's answer.

Jonny ran over to zoey picking her up and takeing her outside megaton and pulling out a stimpack and loging it into her thigh and releveing the pain but still she was going to black out unless she hade a docter. Jonny could see ajosh being revived by a BoS grunt with a orange liquid witch jonnny needed he ran over took some and injected it into zoey.

"Zoey damnit can you hear me"jonny yelled

Joshawa got up and ran to were Jonny and Zoey were.

"Is she okay, please tell me she is okay!" Josh asked.

He awaited an answer, he was more worried then he had ever been, he really liked Zoey.

Joshawa got up and ran to were Jonny and Zoey were.

"Is she okay, please tell me she is okay!" Josh asked.

He awaited an answer, he was more worried then he had ever been, he really liked Zoey.

Dan had hesitated to leave the house as everyone else had been in quite a rush, as he was, he did want to get stuck in a crowd and attract attention. He frantically paced around trying to decide on his own plan to stay clear of the Brotherhood. A loud crack sounded, like someone had slammed a hammer against the home's metal door. He shot up in an instant and made for the door at last, but turning to the silent mutant," You coming? I really don't want to wait any more but if you can catch up I'll cover you or you can stay here and leave by dark." The door slammed shut behind him and trotted off to the gate. People around town were ducking into their homes, large, small, and nearly non-existent. On his way to the gate, he could see Johnny helping Zoey limp away. Helping them would cost time and possibly put him harm's way so he continued on.

When he reached the gate, one of the posted guards grabbed his shoulder and asked," What the hell is going on in there?"

"I'm...uh...not sure. I just came in for a quick stop and people started shooting guns so I bailed," he stammered.

"What's in the bag?"

"Food. I needed supplies to get me to Rivet City and see my brother," Dan explained. The guard motioned with his hand to hand over the bag and he obliged.

"That's quite a lot of food."

"Return trip."

"Alright, move"

Dan almost broke into a sprint but kept to a trot as he made his way down the hill. He broke to his right so he would at least look honest and made a long trip around the small hill.

((it seems Price has been misinformed about Zoey she's never killed an innocent in her lif :ahhh: on the karma scale sh's up there on the very good part, again Wanderer makes it intresting for my character))


Zoey could feel the liquid coursing round her body she grunted, her body jerked as the pain rose and then soothed, but this was an incredibly deep wound the bullet had not only gone in but it hadnt fully vome out the other side, the tip of the bullet was just poking out just above hr stomach this was going to be a painfull ride for zoey

"I... I feel a bit beter but god this [censored] hurts!"