The Unbecoming

Post » Sat May 29, 2010 8:12 am

I'm still working out the kinks in the plot but I'd like for everyone to post a general character sheet based off these credentials.

Character Sheet:


Name:
Nickname:
Ethnicity:
Gender:
Age:

Mental Description:(Along with the character sheet, I expect you to use detail throughout the whole of this story)
Pet Peeves:
Hobbies:

General build:
Eye color:
Hair color:
Other: (Scars, tattoos, piercings, etc...)

Armor:
Weapon(s):
Skills:(In-game or out of game)

Location of Residence:
Occupation:
Rank:(For military personnel only)

Short Bio:


After I get everyone's general character sheet I'll explain the plot and gather input on any adjustments you'd like to see.
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Minako
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 1:22 am

military, like prewar?
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Genocidal Cry
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 12:04 pm

military, like prewar?

We'll say military like Enclave or BoS.
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Jessica Colville
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 12:42 pm

Looks like I'll be redoing Rachael's character sheet since you have different entries for stuff (which I actually kind of like..)

EDIT: Oh, and I better make sure this is fine right now. She's half Super Mutant, which is described in her bio (and I'll probably rewrite that bit to make it more clear), but she has plenty of flaws and isn't an ubercharacter by any means.
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Taylor Bakos
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 12:42 am

Well, I'd have much interest in co-writing this, *being one of the three writers*... It looks very interesting.

So we just make any random char with any background and throw em in? Does it have to be in the Capital Wasteland? Is there a certain part of the CW we should have our char's bio in?
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Michelle Chau
 
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Post » Fri May 28, 2010 10:24 pm

So we just make any random char with any background and throw em in? Does it have to be in the Capital Wasteland? Is there a certain part of the CW we should have our char's bio in?


My question too, I can't think of a bio with some sort of location or story...
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Kari Depp
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 3:15 am

Ehhhhhhxcellent. >D
Finally, an opportunity to actually use Sforza in something. *glee*
I'll have my character sheet up as soon as I can.
Although I do agree, a small amount of plot or setting, at least, would be helpful.
(For example, what year is it?)
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 4:18 am

Well, I'd have much interest in co-writing this, *being one of the three writers*... It looks very interesting.

So we just make any random char with any background and throw em in? Does it have to be in the Capital Wasteland? Is there a certain part of the CW we should have our char's bio in?

Um. Yea. The three members who'll be participating in the story have already been picked. I tell you what though, since your story inspired this new idea of mine, I'll take you on board.

To all others wishing to join, follow the storyline and you'll find there'll be more openings along the way. I'll inform you via this discussion thread.

To the 4:

Make a general character sheet. Base them off whatever you like. We'll have to edit them once I post the plot but until then I'd like a general idea of how descriptive you're all going to be.
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Joe Bonney
 
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Post » Fri May 28, 2010 10:55 pm

Ah yeah, that'd be nice to know, since Rachael's lifetime is around the span of the MQ of FO3 and she's in the CW..
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Elisha KIng
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 9:31 am

Heh. Just think; this idea would've never happened without doom222's fanfiction. *gags from just remembering it*

Edit: Woo I'm on board! I'm so excited! :D
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 12:11 am

To the 4:

Make a general character sheet. Base them off whatever you like. We'll have to edit them once I post the plot but until then I'd like a general idea of how descriptive you're all going to be.


Ah, I see what your doing...
Bio in a bit.
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Isabel Ruiz
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 9:57 am

Ok, honestly, I don't know what the year is in-game. But it'd be the same as that for the rp/fanfic. Starting with the year you escape from the Vault.
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 2:54 am

Ok, honestly, I don't know what the year is in-game. But it'd be the same as that for the rp/fanfic. Starting with the year you escape from the Vault.


2277!
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Kelly Osbourne Kelly
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 1:26 am

So...2277?

EDIT: K beat me to it.
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Paula Rose
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 2:54 am

Ok people!
Character Sheets!

Papa dren's gettin angry...
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 1:03 pm

Name: Guy 'Beard-Face' Greensfield
Nickname: Beard-Face
Ethnicity: Caucasian 1/2, Irish 1/2
Gender: Male
Age: 32

Mental Description: Guy is a very friendly man, and will always help out if someone needs a hand. He has found living in the wasteland just right for him, for he can be quite furious if provoked. If you stay on his good side, he'll stay on yours.
Pet Peeves: Guy looks down on general evil, and considers it one of his pet peeves. He also hates having guns pointed at him, even if it isn't a threat.
Hobbies: Drinking alcohol and talking to people.

General build: Very large/muscular [weighs 270, stands at 6'3 and a half]
Eye color: Blue
Hair color: Orange
Other: Has a couple scars from over the years, but hasn't cared to remember what they got there from. Has a blue sapphire ear ring on his left ear. Has a full orange and black beard that covers his jaw, hence his nickname.(Scars, tattoos, piercings, etc...)

Armor: Usually just wears whatever he can get his hands on, casual clothes usually. Wears a full black leather outfit when he's out in the Wastes.
Weapon(s): An age-old assault rifle which he has lugged around his whole life is what he prefers to use, but has a pistol strapped to his side along with a sturdy police baton and a switchblade.
Skills: Small Guns, Cooking, Mechanics/Gun Repair, Reading, Melee Weapons

Location of Residence: Canterburry Commons
Occupation: Works as a guard for Canterburry, scaring off the radscorpions when they come near. Doesn't have to worry about raiders, because they usually don't go around there.
Rank:

Short Bio: Guy was born in Megaton, where he lived with his parents for twenty years. After growing bored of that life, he took his rifle and ventured out into the Wastes along with ten other men. By the time they made it to Rivet City, only four men remained. The three men stayed in Rivet City, probably to this day, but Guy had an undeniable love for the Capital Wasteland, and wanted to live closer to it. So the next chance he got, he went with one of the Brotherhood contingents who were headed to Canterburry, where he has lived until today.

*Sorry for the short bio, I'm not in my most creative mood atm*
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 12:37 pm

Two and a half page single-spaced character sheet go go!

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Name: Rachael Yogere
Nickname: Rachael
Ethnicity: Asian/Super Mutant
Gender: Female
Age: 37

Mental Description:(Along with the character sheet, I expect you to use detail throughout the whole of this story)

Mostly, Rachael is grim and unapproachable. It keeps her sane and keeps people from asking her ridiculous questions. She doesn't feel much comfortable around normal humans anymore, learning to be suspicious of everyone the hard way. She doesn't mind much of anybody as long as they leave her alone, stay out of her way, and don't endanger her job. In fact, while working, she is a force to be reckoned with because she takes it very seriously.

While she has a good, solid wrap on her emotions most of the time, if pushed too far, she will flip into a mindless bloodlust just like any regular mutant would (and she does wish she hadn't inherited that specific trait). While in a rage, she knows allies and friends, but everyone and everything else becomes fair game to unleash her fury upon. Normally, even in day-to-day battle, she holds most of her strength back, only using what is required. During a berserk rage though, she has absolutely no restraint at all.

She does have a softer side to her, though. Hidden under the gruff attitude and distrust is a woman who, by her own standards, is still quite young mentally. She's had so little social interaction through her life that didn't include caps or guns or using guns in order to get caps, that when it comes to interpersonal communication, she can be quite uncomfortable. If provoked, she can be just as loving and protective as she can be rageful, just with different targets in mind. Due to her own history, she will seek out and aid those she feels kinship with. Sometimes, it's just nice to be around people who understand. Thus, she is very kind to Ghouls and other humans who have obvious mutations.

Pet Peeves: Bigots. Anyone or anything associated with the Enclave. People asking her about her physical oddities, or just generally annoying her about them. When working with others on a job, she hates it when people fool around. Mistreatment of Ghouls. She's not terribly fond of a few genetic traits she inherited from her father.

Hobbies: Helping those shunned by humanity. She doesn't really do anything for fun outside of work, really, but since helping people isn't work, you could call it a hobby.

General build: A tall, intimidating woman who never looks happy and tends to frown or just generally be unpleasant company (granted, a lot of her scowl is just how her facial structure is). Her physique is quite impressive when one could see it, but she does her best to keep her body mostly hidden, partially due to the fact that her muscle build is somewhat unnatural.

Eye color: Her eyes are all together not dissimilar from a Super Mutant's: A pale green with slit-pupils like a cat.

Hair color: Her hair is is black and done up in neat, tight braids with all kinds of beads throughout. Many of the braids in front are falling over and partially obscuring the woman's face.

Other: (Scars, tattoos, piercings, etc...) Her ears are pierced in several places, some with chains dangling from piercing to piercing. She has plenty scars from this and that, but nothing especially noteworthy.

Armor:

Dark brown leather Duster that comes down to her ankles. Under the coat is a shirt that looks to be some kind of T-shirt, a dirty black colour and her pants are also leather, tanned a dark brown to match her coat. Black, steel-toed boots. A heavy belt around her waist carrying supplies in various pouches. Dark tinted sunglasses. Fingerless black leather gloves that cover her arms to just the elbow with protective armor over her elbows and straps running around the gloves at the wrist and several more further up. The only skin visible besides her head is her upper arm from where the sleeves of the Duster end and where the odd gloves begin, showing off the rather impressive muscles there. Rachael likes to keep her clothing simple and durable.

Weapon(s):

Longsword hanging at her left from her belt, M107 sniper rifle strapped across her back, Hunting rifle always either at the ready, or dangling from it's strap on her right arm, prepared to be ready at a moment's notice. She has also taken up study of a mish-mash of martial arts and other forms of hand to hand combat.

Skills:(In-game or out of game) Melee, Small Guns, Repair. She's also good with animals (Animal Friend perk? :P ) and knows far too much about guns, ammunition, and usage of such.

Location of Residence: N/A. She doesn't really live anywhere, just goes from job to job.
Occupation: Mercenary
Rank:(For military personnel only)

Short Bio:

Rachael had never known her father, and her mother never told her about him until she was eighteen. Even though some things had obviously been edited out of the story to make it even able to be spoken of in the first place, it was more than enough for her to know full well what had actually happened and it made her spine shiver in a chill. Not once had her mother ever considered her a burden, nor had she ever wanted to terminate the pregnancy and Rachael was glad for her mother being so accepting and still caring for her after the horrors she had faced.

It was also around that time that Rachael's body started to change. Once Puberty hit the young woman, it had hit like a freight train and she would sometimes gain a couple pounds of what appeared to be solid muscle over the course of a night. Some of these "growth spurts" could be horrifically painful, but she made it through somehow. After all the pain of growing, she started noticing other things--senses more keen than they'd ever been, immunity to Radiation and disease, and the more obvious ones of her muscle structure and her eyes. Her facial structure was always a bit off, heavy browed and angry-appearing.

Years later, her mother passed away from acute Radiation Poisoning. They had been an exceptionally poor family and simply couldn't afford better water to drink. Though she was more or less immune to the Radiation, her mother hadn't been and it had been hell on her to watch the woman, the only person she had in the entire blasted world, slowly fade away. Her mother's dying breath had triggered her first true rage and she practically tore the small shack they lived in apart before she got herself under control.

Learning and using that control had been very difficult at first and she had tended to shy away from people as she worked hard on acting like a normal person. It took her years to get something like control over it, though it was this time, both being alone for so long, and the somewhat tenuous control, that made her surly and antisocial. She interacted enough to get jobs and to get paid, but beyond that, not much more.

Eventually she did uncover that more caring side of her that she had thought had long since died and it had, bizarrely, taken finding a Deathclaw hatchling to drag it back out. Raising the tiny creature to a fully advlt and proudly built male had sated something deep within herself, a strange desire to help those in need that simply would never be helped otherwise. Not one to take up causes, for the absolutely downtrodden, for the "freaks", for the "monsters", she showes this compassionate, loving side.
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 7:20 am

I think you're a bit lost Ambrose Lord Dren hmm? The TES fff is down there.

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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 11:16 am

Since Scatmang's character sheet is the first up I'd like to take the time to point out that this is just as much my rp/fanfic as everyone else's. If you see something that's exceptionally ridiculous, point it out. Have them change their character sheet not to fit your liking, but to make it more realistic. Scatmang your character sheet seems a bit out of the ordinary but then, I've never really cared for ordinary.
Excellent choice on the orange hair.

My character sheet:


Name: Isabella Jones
Nickname: Izzy
Ethnicity: Puerto Rican/African-American
Gender: Female
Age: 27

Mental Description: Izzy, like most of the Enclave, is hard-hearted, having seen things no human should ever encounter. She is merciless in her effort to help rid the Wastelands of radiated infection and mutation. Although she believes in her effort, over the years she's lost enthusiasm for the Enclave's harshness. Some could even say she's on the verge of mutiny. While during a time of combat she is vigilant, quick on her toes, and very direct, she has a softer side. Rasing her son and fighting for the Enclave was all she though she needed in life. She was wrong.
Pet Peeves: insubordination, liars, thieves, drunkards
Hobbies: telling her son stories and woodcrafting

General build: Isabella is somewhat petite with thinner hips than the usual Latina. She has a thin face, curved chin, and thick lips
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Dark brown with blonde highlights
Other: (Scars, tattoos, piercings, etc...)

Armor: She wears the Enclave Hellfire armor and an officers cap
Weapon(s): Plasma rifle and 10mm pistol on her hip
Skills: energy weapons, explosives, small arms, hand-to-hand, lockpicking

Location of Residence: n/a
Occupation: Enclave soldier
Rank: Captain

Short Bio: Isabella was born and raised in the ranks of the Enclave. She was always taught the Wastelands were a place of uncontainable mutation and filth. And that the only way to treat this was to kill it. She met Sgt. Isiah Jones when she was 19, giving birth to a son on her 20th birthday. His name was Isiah Jones II. They were married a few short weeks after. Isabella Gonzalez was now Isabella Jones. During her two-week maternity leave, Isiah was sent out on a raid mission that would calim his life. Due to his heroism in combat his wife was awarded with a promotion in rank and another two weeks leave to bury her husband. Ever since then she has carried her duties to the Enlcave with loyalty, slowing climbing the ranks to Captain. It's been 7 years since her husbands death. She has grown much wiser of the Enclaves treachery and even now despises their corruption. She must escape.
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 1:29 pm

Right-o!
Like I said, I'll have my sheet up as soon as possible. Curse you, work, cutting into my RP time...
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 11:21 am

FalloutHero you're spamming this thread. Your statement holds no relevance to the topic of this thread or anything within it. Please have a mod remove it or I will.

And come on guys, Half asian half mutant?

Are we taking this seriously?
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 10:38 am

Uhoh.. I have a feeling Rachael and Izzy aren't going to get along very well :o

EDIT: Did you read her bio? I explained it there :( I don't like usual characters and had the idea for her stewing about for months. :(
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Rebecca Clare Smith
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 8:42 am

Half asian half mutant?


I agree, it is slightly ridiculous.

But it's interesting none the less, and I like interesting. But, still. Perhaps a little too far, Kikai?
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Hayley Bristow
 
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Post » Sat May 29, 2010 11:18 am

I've just finished reading your bio Kikai. Please ignore the above statement I made so ignorantly. Very interesting. You pulled it off nicely.
Keep it!

A few more character sheets and I'll be able to post the plot.
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Post » Fri May 28, 2010 11:09 pm

I meantioned it very early in the thread and nobody said anything, so I figured it would be okay. She's from another RP which I can link you to if you'd like to see how I write her.

As for being half mutant, I justify it by the fact that FEV is the most unstable thing ever and it wouldn't be too far-fetched for, say, 1/1000 ending up not sterile. Yeah it's a stretch, but I thought it would be an interesting character concept, especially because she has to deal with the tempramental issues and still function as mostly a normal person to fit in as best she can.

EDIT: Augh you people type too fast.
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