OOC: Sorry guys i slept most of the day, huge bender last night lol, anyone else who wants to join can either be BOS, intellegant deathclaw or an enclave soldier.

Ok guys this is were it kicks off.

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IC: He floated, Tenpenny Towers just in the distance. His glow was bright as a second sun, illuminating the night sky with power and rage. He floated over to his quarry, the building inhabited by the damned. Suddenly he jerked down to his knees and a final cry was shouted to Tom and John " HELP ME!!! Tom it has taken me, the power is not mine and neither is the mind that drives it, it calls itself Atom and seeks to leave the land empty of life, HELP!!!!" The voice was crushed by Atom's iron will and Eli was dead. The night patrol strolled around the perimeter in a greater number than usual. Tom must have gotten the word out to GNR. Atom could feel his leuitenants pain but could sense her charge was fulfilled. Atom came to the gate, dulling himself to a glow weaker than a naked flame. The cheif gaurd came to the gate, his fear giving Atom renewed confidence. " Who gos there??? You shouldnt be out in the wastes at night with that crazy gouhl around, get in here where we can put a bullet through his zombie face " Atom rasied a hand and threw of the cloak covering his form, he flooded radiation at the gates melting them and killing the gaurd. A fireing squad arrived at the courtyard firing multiple rounds at him they hit but passed straight through, normal bullets would do no good against the power of Atom. He raced through the line his hands blades of pure radiation, they sliced through the guards leaving thier corpses charred and headless. Atom broke the doors of thier hinges and set about massacreing the residents of the tower. cry's of pain and fear rang out as residents were vaporised, burnt, decapateted and engulfed by radiation. Atom floated up the elevator shaft, coming to the room of the richest man in the wastes for all the good it would do him. Atom walked up behind the old man who had managed to sleep through the massacre of his guests, Atom lay a hand on tenpennys head killing him silently and painlessly. Atom retrived what he had come for in the next room over, killing the resident. He had heard of his latest victim and he deserved his death. Atom floated from the tower after melting its foundations and levleing it, killing all that remained.
Atom found Sarah wounded on the hill overlooking the building, he put some radiation through her to heal her. Deathclaws started ariveing from their respective missions and Atom took his troops and left for thier fortress and his spritual home, Dunwich.

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OOC: I think you know the componant i grabbed and the owner slaughterd DS???

(So we can't keep our original chars?)

yeh you can, thiats for people who want to join brand new, who werent in the old one

(Ok then. :thumbsup: )

(OOC: The persons room that was raided was that persons name who just talked 2 posts ago, I think?)

IC:

I felt the shift in Eli, as he was taken over, I could hear his mind until I felt him get taken over by something else. Atom. I could no longer hear his voice, I was scared. I walked over to Jon and supported his weight, Sarah had manged to do him some dangerous damage, but he was alive at least. I chuckled, "Jon, I told you not to go it alone, oh and you lost your..." I started, then I stopped as I realised that he'd lost his rifle. With his ammo, I shuddered at the thought.

I looked around then coughed, "Come on Jon, let's leave this place of death," I muttered to him, walking out with him towards the exit. I tossed around some thoughts in my head, then I delved into the tunnels, heading towards Rivet City. We didn't talk along the way, as it seemed to be too painful to talk for him. I just kept moving, funnelling small amounts of radiation into him to heal his many wounds. He wasn't too bad going so I just left him after a bit, he walked a couple of metres away from me, thinking. I thought myself.

I wondered at how a simple amount of radiation had changed Eli into something... Else. I shuddered then saw the exit of the Metro leading up to Rivet City, I moved quicker at the prospect of safety.

Sebastian sat in Big Town, looking at the few Ghouls left. Without a leader of sorts, most of the Ghouls returned to thir hiding places, settlements, caves and metros. One particuarly large Ghoul seemd to be deteremined to watch Sebastian.
"Sarah aint comin' back." He observed.
"Neither is Eli, but why do we care? It's not like we have anything better to do." Said another Ghoul sitting around the fire.
"Well, I gotta babysit this brat until he does." The large Ghoul pointed at Sebastian
"I am not a brat! And you can go any time you want. When Eli gets back, everything will be OK. Won't it?"
"Kid, he aint comin back. With power like that, he won't need us." Said Another Ghoul, eating a dead iguana.
"OK kid, let's take you home. Where would that be?" Said the large Ghoul, staring thoughtfully at some Squirrel Stew someone had left out.
"Tenpenny Tower. It's not far, and nothing dangerous hangs around those parts." Replied Sebastian.
"Well, just in case..." The large Ghoul flashed a very powerful looking Shotgun.

Sebastian followed the Ghoul out of Big Twn, where the two travelled to Tenpenny Tower.

(DeadlySin, you don't mind me taking over Charon do you? If so, I'll change my post.)

Jon awoke a few hours earlier on a medical bed with bandages wrapped around his torso, and a splitting pain that radiated down his left leg. He looked around and saw no one next to him besides other patients that were sick or something. He looked up at the ceiling, and thought of what a failure he was to the cause. He shouldn't have hesitated to kill Sarah, she was no longer who she once was, and he had tried to change that when he should have killed her.

"We're all going to die, and I could have stopped it all." Jon muttered to himself as he sat up in his bed, holding his bandages. The battle was a little hazy, but he knew Sarah had slashed him, and left him for dead. Luckly Tom was there and helped. He was dressed in a medical gown, his clothes were no where to be seen. Suddenly a woman, a smoothskin walked in and noticed him instantly.

"Oh no you don't! You stay in bed and rest, you've suffered serious injuries and are going to be out for a bit." The woman layed him down, and covered him up with the blanket. She probably thought that Jon was a zombie just like the others, but was nice enough to help, maybe not.

"Where is everyone? What happened to everyone?" Jon asked looking at the woman with his dead hollow eyes. Some hair fell off, but Jon didn't bother with it, it was a usual occurance with ghouls. Jon was the oldest ghoul that had not been tampered with by radiation. Tom was still the oldest, but only by a few years, but he was not a pure ghoul in some aspects.

The woman took some notes, and took his tempurature and wrote it down, then walked off into another room. Several other patients were moaning and talking with one another, some about Jon, but he didn't mind it at all. It was all good what they were talking about anyway. As soon as the woman was out of sight, Jon leapt to his feet, and hurried out the other door the woman had come into. Next to the door were several lockers with names on them. He looked at them, and found his name. This must have been where they kept patients clothes until they were released from the infurmary. Jon didn't have time to dress so he just walked off up the stairs to the security room in the conning tower. Harkness was probably out on his patrol, and Tom was no where to be seen at the moment. Probably messing with his ghouls or something.

Jon felt bulkier, and realized that Tom had pumped him with some radiation while he was out. It gave Jon a more muscular tone and body mass. He quickly slipped into a changing room for the security in Rivet City, and put on his Combat armor, and placed his two pistols in their holsters. Jon quickly realized his M14 was gone, and along with it, a clip of his Depleted Uranium rounds. He would have to go out into the wasteland, and get his two footlockers full of the Depleted Uranium rounds, and his spare M14 and a new suit of armor. Jon quickly slipped back out of the changing room, and hurried down to the door where they had probably entered. Harkness was there, standing on patrol with another security officer, he didn't know her name.

He ignored the two, and walked across the bridge when Officer Harkness ran over. Jon turned around, and looked up at Harkness a little worried he might send him back to the infurmary.

"Jon! I was going to give this to Tom, but since I found you first." Harkness pulled a small sheet of paper from under his armor, and handed it to Jon. "I didn't think they were letting you out of the infurmary so early, must be making a stellar recovery?" Harkness added as Jon read the letter, looking up at him, then returning to the letter.

//From: Elder Lyon's//
//To: Jon or Tom//
//Message: Agreement//
// Dear Jon or Tom,

Several of my patrols have reported what you say is true. My Knights and Paladins have been on high alert, and are now bringing refugee's to the Citadel from the wasteland. I have been given several reports that Eli and Sarah have been seen moving around, one of them seemed to be injured severly. This may be a lucky break for us. When you get this, please know that the Brotherhood is on your side until the end.

//Transmission: Over//

Jon handed the paper back to Harkness, and continued walking off. Harkness looked confused as Jon continued walking.

"What should I do with this?" Harkness asked looking over at the other officer.

"Give it to Tom, let him deal with it. For the moment, I have to go somewhere." Replied Jon quickening his pace.

"Let me send some guards with you, for security?"

"No! I can not let anyone know about this place." Jon replied turning around quickly, and jolting it out.

"You'll need help out there, you can't do this alone." Harkness demanded. Jon just kept walking, but decided it would be best for them if he allowed them to come.

"Fine, hurry them up." Jon said standing at the other end of the bridge, crossing his arms and tapping his foot on the ground. Harkness looked at the other officer, and quickly she ran off to grab another guard. Jon stood, irritated at allowing them to come. This place had been a secret for many years, Jon had been very careful not to allow anyone to know about this place, but this was a poinent time, and something needed to be done.

Two guards quickly returned, and followed Jon as he made his way to his secret place. The way was very confusing to the two guards, making strange left and right turns, then circling back, and then going off in a tangent path, it was all very confusing, they would forget what they saw.

OOC: Since Jon isn't a super character like the rest of you, and I don't plan on him becoming one, I've got to have something that can stop Eli and Sarah

(I'm not a Super either. :thumbsup: )

Yes I know, but since your on Eli's side, or captured, something like that? And only Francois and I are fighting him and sarah at the moment, I needed something that could stop them. Your character hasn't done much in the way of stopping Eli and Sarah from doing anything.

your rifle is fine, ill wait for deadley sin's next post before advanceing Eli/Atom's events

OOC: If I want to sign up as BoS? How would i do it? and where do i fit in with the story?

Just copy the Character Sheet from The Uprising thread 1, and create your BOS character, simple don't you think. Then just add your character into the story somehow. You'd be fighting against Eli/Is-It-Just-Me and Sarah/DeadlySin. Just being a helpful hand

we'd love to have you aboard dan, if you could it would be a great help if you were reacting to the destruction of tenpenny tower

Sebastian approached the Tower he had once lived in. A familiar tune filled his head, the wonderful lobby music. Then he stopped.
The music wasn't playing, he was imagining it. What on earth was going on in there? He and Charon ran around to the front gate and stopped. There, in the middle of the fountain, lay Allistair Tenpenny. His body had been dropped from the balcony and it landed in the Fountain, splashing blood everywhere. His neck was dangling down from the basin like a flag from a pole, as if it had been taken from his body. Around him lay some brutally murdered gaurds, their organs and blood scattered across Tenpenny's fountain plaza like confetti, And A few rifles lay snapped in half in one corner.

"I... What?" Sebastian was lost for words.
"MUM! DAD!" He ran through the door, almost tripping over the corpses of several residents before reaching the Lobby. There was his mothers head, ripped from the body, lying neatly on the reception desk. Sebastian picked the head up and held it, Not looking away in case it were to dissapear. Her eyes had been gouged out with something, and a huge claw mark spread across her face. Charon was scrounging the shops for food.
"Jackpot!" He said, walking into the lobby with his arms full of Instamash.
"Hey, kid, what are you doing with that head? That's disrespectful ya' know."
Sebastian looked at charon, radiated tears in his eyes.
"She's my mother..."
"Oh... Kid, I... I'm sorry."
Sebastian placed the head back on the desk.
"That's it. Eli's gonna pay..."
Just as they were about to leave, they heard a creaking noise. Like a door opening.
"Wait here kid, I'll check it out."
Charon marched up the marble staircase and to one of the suite doors. He pulled out a female ghoul in a pink dress, she was kicking and screaming.
"Get off me! Off me I say!" She pushed Charon away and dusted herself off. "Filthy brute."
"Bessie?" Sebastian said in shock.
"What? Sebastian?" Bessie ran down the staircase and embraced Sebastian. (Hugging )
As the two stood in the once luxorious Tenpenny Tower Lobby and explained what had happened since they last saw eachother, Charon knew something. Whatever they were up against was one hell of a fighter. He stared at an old womans' corpse, who seemed to have been strangled so hard her brain was splattered across the wall behind her.

(OOC: I'm sorry that I haven't been on, and I'm sorry to say I don't think I'll be on much in the near future. This is a message to anyone who reads it, tell the others that I won't be on. Is It Just Me? I think you'll understand what's happening, to everyone else I'm having problems with people close to me. Sorry, just control my characters, I'll be back when I can, only have time to say this, sorry.)

thats ok francois, matters like that come way higher in prioroties.

DEADLEY SIN, POST!!!!!!!!!!!

Eli surveyed the wastes and his future dominion, he had been able to snatch dominance from Atom for a period and had set about planning how to combat this new evil within his soul. Eli had sent Sarah down to megaton to see what had become of the town after the attack that felt like an age ago. Eli looked down at his hands, if they could be called hands. If he tried hard enough he could slightly alter the shape of glow and thus the shape of the hands.
Eli turned to one of the deathclaws sarah had left behind, he didnt bother speaking he knew the deathclaw wouldnt understand his words, instead he broadcast a series of images and feelings directley into the mind of the savage beast, elis message basicly inquired as to wether sarah was loyal to Eli or Atom. " I dont know sir and to be honest i find your delivery method of the question quite insulting to my new found civilty and intellegence." The deathclaw's voice was low and rumbling like a thunderclap. Eli was taken aback by the intelligence of the creature " Find the Enclaves base and report back only if i ask, i never seem myself these days. " The deathclaw ran at a huge speed toward the setting sun, the sun seeming to signify Eli's fall into Atom.

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" Hows it coming with those ferals kid??? " Tom had recently entrusted the brotherhood paladin Gunny to train his ferals in how to use pwer armour and sophisticated weapon systems, Tom was unsure about the wisdom in this plan but against Eli every little would help. " Better than I expected.....sir" Tom could tell the soldier resented adressing a ghoul as sir " They have the muscle mass and the technique to wear the amrour but the thermal display on the helmet confuses them and they panic. "
Tom had marshalled a huge army of ferals for the battle ahead but he didnt know how they would do against the combined forces of Eli and Sarah, now there were even rumors of organized deathclaw movements with a huge talking deathclaw at thier head. If Sarah was this leader of the deathclaws then it didnt bode well for the rest of the wasteland.
Tom thought back to the carange at tenpenny he had seen from the eyes of a feral hidning at the window. It seemed to tom that Eli was near to decending into insanity and feralism. Atom seemed to be the darker side of a split in his personality when he was given his power, all of Eli's ambition,hate, anger and intolerance of anything but his chosen few had created this personality deluded into the point of beliveing it was a god.
Tom looked out at the sunrose hoping to see many more.

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come on guys, this is to good to die

I don't really know what I'm supposed to do with this, so lemme know if I can join or not




Name: Kross

Age: 13

Time spent as a gouhl: None, Kross is a slightly mutated Deathclaw

Talents/skills: Fast and can shred enemies to peices

Apperance: Tall and brown. Not much I can say here

Bio: Kross was the runt of the group. His brothers and sisters constantly attacked him over and over again. While cleaning his wounds once again, Kross used radioactive sludge instead of water. The Radioactivity seeped into his wounds and warped his mind. Immediately, his senses were heightened and he became self aware. He stood tall and slaughtered his family, and watched his brothers and sisters die brutal deaths. He started to wander the wastes, and started learning how to speak. Kross can now speak broken English, and Has had a previous "owner," or at least a good friend. A human friend.

Armour: None

Equipment: All Kross has is his wit and claws.

just start posting mate, be the deathclaw Eli was just talking to if you want

(OOC: I apoligise that I haven't been on, I've been on live because I'm really angry. At the moment I'm angry at a friend so that's why I'm on now, won't be on for long.)

IC:

As I looked around me, I felt sadness meld into me. I sat down, no one else was around, the ghouls were gone, Jon was gone, I was alone. I started sobbing, remembering my past, thinking about my future and wondering about the present. I stood up and walked out of the Citadel, I left a holo-disc with the guard at the front gate for Jon. I just walked right out, going to a place that I'd only ever heard about. I kept moving, I didn't stop.

I stumbled across the destroyed ground, past a Super Mutant, he was tall and seemed even more ugly than the others. He looked at me and grunted, "What are you doing, ghoul," I chuckled,
"I've come to get something, I heard a lot about this place and I'd just like to look around." I walked past him and into the radiation, I felt it prickling on my skin. I just walked through it and towards a wooden door.

I moved cautiously through the metal passageways, after moving for about an hour I came across a chamber. I saw what appeared to be a stand for what would've been a GECK, I looked underneath it and found a compartment. I smashed it open and my eyes flew wide open, I picked it up and looked at it carefully. Behind it was a scrunched up piece of paper, I picked it up slowly and unfurled it. My eyes grew wider after every word I read. When it got to such a point where I dropped the paper to the ground.

I looked at what was in my hands, I checked it all over till I found what had been mentioned. I held it close to me, then I did what had been stated on the paper. I instantly felt myself change, as though something was changing in me. After all the radiation that had been absorbed into the thing it had obviously changed from its purpose. I fell to the ground screaming, until I felt my whole body rip apart into something else. I read the words inscribed into the side of the thing, M.E.C.K. I remembered what it meant, who made and what for.

The Master Evolution Creation Kit.

(OOC: Apologies if this doesn't make sense, I haven't been around for a while. I hope I can keep it cause I have a great idea for it.)

OOC: Works. By the way, Kross isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer and is open to suggestion, a.k.a he'll help anyone who helps him.

IC: Kross ran vigilantly across the wasteland. He felt belittled by the glowing man, and he didn't like it. The more he thought, the faster he ran. The scars on his face ran deep, and being around the glowing one made them burn. His tall form sprinted across the wastes through the night, before finally seeing the base. Kross slowed his pace. What am I doing, and where is that friendly human girl? His mind raced. She was one of the only people who hadn't shot at him on sight. As Kross approached the base, a human in glowing metal armor advanced on him, and fired. Bright green hit Kross hard in the chest. The plasma burned hot and surprised Kross. Kross spoke, hoping to calm the man. "I am not enemy!" The steel-clad person stopped only for a second before shooting again. Kross dodged the shot and went straight in. Kross had no power over his instincts as he rammed his massive claws into the armor. The glowing yellow eyes dropped the where Kross had made an artificial maw. Kross pulled his arms apart and plunged them into the helmet of the man. The glowing yellow slowly filled with crimson...

good post francois keep it, but maybe edit were you just came from to fit in with my last post. id like to see were this go's.

good to have you back BTW. maybe MECK could stand for Mastered Evolution Code Kit, sounds a little more vault techy, but its your choice

Kross drew back his claws and retreated to lick his wounds. Not going good he thought. He hated being shot at or hurt. Since he was a pup, no one and nothing cared for the runt. People set him as an outcast, pushed him to the edge. The only thing keeping him from attacking the towns and killing everyone were the few that had treated him like a friend. She wasn't always kind, but that Deathclaw-like creature had helped him. It had created a stronger Kross. The only thing left for him to do was wait. Stupid ghoul. How is it going to talk to Kross? This thought bounced around Kross' skull for a good while. No Enclave had exited the building, probably because the man in the metal suit didn't have time to talk to them. Kross sat on the dusty ground. He had time, and he knew something was different, other than his bulkier mass and longer claws. He was still smaller than the others, the runt. Why is Kross obeying glowing ghoul? Why ghoul think Kross is stupid? Who is Kross kidding. Kross stupid.... This echoed in his head. He sat on the ground chanting "Kross stupid! Stupid Kross!" and clawing at his head, with the heels of his hands.

Jon returned to Rivet City with the two city guards. It had taken them sometime because of a delay with some Super Mutants that they crossed paths with while out in the wasteland. Two large trunk fulls of the specialized ammo. They had a sort of glow to them, but that was just temporary until they cooled. Jon went into the market place of Rivet City, and layed the trunks on floor. Jon looked at the work bench, and saw the weapons Flak and Shrapnel had.

"Those rifles, pistols, and machine-guns should be compatable with these rounds. So hand these out to everyone with a gun. And make sure they're practicing shooting. But not with these rounds, it takes time to make these." Jon began working with some tools and such to build more DU rounds.

"Yes sir!" The two guards said putting the bullets into empty magazines and clips. Tom was no where to be seen, probably working with his ghouls?

Kross stood up and thought hard for a second. Kross need to leave. Kross not like glowing ghoul. With that, Kross ran in the direction of D.C., more importantly, Rivet City. He didn't know what Rivet City was, nor why he was going there. All he knew was where it was, how to get there, and that it was somewhat important to the glowing ghoul. He ran harder than he ever did, and wondered what would happen when he got there. Would there be people who would like him? Would they shoot at him? Or would they simply stay away from him? Kross needed to know. He wanted to make friends with the humans, but he also wanted to help people. He didn't think that exactly, but that's what he thought he meant.

OOC: I'm just trying to get closer to the characters involved :/ Lemme know if I should back off