Nice dog post Erasmus, I like it, also the idea that this is just a powerful illusion. Maybe in reality the Altmer is walking about on his hands and and it just
seems to everyone involved (himself and Fiona included) that he's a dog. Or maybe he is. Who knows? Don't go peeking up the Witch's robes while you are down there though
Maybe it might be for the best if that reference to immediately guessing that the Dunmer is a Vampire is removed, unless there is an especially good reason for it. If a character is based around being a Vampire that no-one notices, it's not nice to go against that without very good reason. For example, Gavril's post mentioned something smelling off, I think that's the right approach. Fiona likewise would be able to tell something is decidedly
wrong with Raryn but wouldn't be able to put her finger on it, without casting the necessary spells, which she probably wouldn't think to do until knowing the Dunmer for a while.