My First RP please be nice

rules: my actions are final and being punished means you didn't follow along correctly
have fun
uber = bad
if i notice anyone ruining the rp by screwing with the story ex: gona turn a switch to save the world and someone destroys the building [bad things happen]
you can avoid above by reading. not reading the last sentance from the lattest post and acting based on your 1 sentance worth of knowlage.

Setting: Vault 13 is trashed. The steel door being blasted open nothing left behind exept junk and the mirky smell of death and solitude that reeks in vault 13.

Rules: you can interact with the main character, create your own story that ties with the main character. lazer pistols pistols etc are allowed in the begining your allowed to make up a mele weapon that isn't in game for example: studded belt

name- nice name works
age- try and keep it pre war to current
race- anythin goes
description- the more the better
history- same as above
starting equipment- keep it casual and weapons like swords/sticks/ etc are fine but no godly weapons early in the game


My character

Name - Crii
Age -18
Race - ???
description- Black dress shirt with white and black striped tie in a half windsor. 6 feet tall average built agile, Brown eyes short silver hair.Also wears a black pre war fidora with a silver silk collar wraqed around the rim.
history- Born in the vault our hero wakes up from an unknown event. only remembring his name, he faintly remembers a girl with a gun saving his life from the radroaches who traqed him in his room. From that moment a book case falls on top of him knocking him out.
Equipment- read below.

Waking up from a dream I hastly try and free myself from the book case made from oak. Freeing my self from the clutches of that damned book case i find at my side a wooden sword. Thinking to my self how in gods name did this appear here i quickly regain my state of mind. As i walk out the dirty paper infested room i find that the rest of the vault has sercumed to the same fate. Searching the rooms for survivors i find that my head aches with pain, blurring my vision as i move to the next room. Tripping over a dead body with its left leg incapacitaed i quickly gain foot and run down the empty halls. Finding more dead bodys of children, teachers, and scientists my natural instinct kicks in and i begin searching the dead bodies. Only finding 3 stim packs and 4 bottles of clean pure water i walk into the overseer's office.

[out of character] more to come on my story get working on yours

OK!
So a few questions before I make a CS (character sheet)
Can the Chars start outside the vault?
can you start with something like a weak laser pistol if it fits with your char?
Are we going to be writing in present or past tense?
Is this going to take place in the capitol wasteland or somewhere else?

Yep thats about it, once you answer a few i'll post, don't worry i'm a noob RPer too, the most exp I have is Vault 207

i like to speak in first person but thats just me 3rd is alright narritive its all good.
yes chars have can start out side the vault if its in the vault like vault 13 but you know its trashed lol. unless its before the radroach dream lol.
The capital wasteland is alright you can use the lazer pistol its just i don't want people who just waltz right in with a mirv

ok! ty
Name: Mark Brown
Age: 22
Race: Human, caucasion
Description: Around 5'8 in height 180 pounds. Wears a RobCo jumpsuit with some armor on it, wears eyeglasses, has shaggy blonde hair, peircing blue eyes, and somewhat pale skin.
History: His family was klled by raiders when he lived in a small village but he was out scauaging so he survived. After his family died He went on a trip up to megaton to live with his sister Moira Brown in Megaton. After he got there he started to help with craterside supply by scavuaging for equipment for it. He always loved robots and technology and in one vault he found a deactivated protectron, so he activated it,reprogramed it and now he calls it cords because every now and then he will have to replace some faulty cords.
Equipment:
Armored RobCo jumpsuit
Laser Pistol
Wrench (his side weapon)
Eyeglasses
A pip boy 3000 he found in a vault
whatever he needs to fix Cords

Mark was headed up to valt 13. He found an old Vault Tec map showing locations of DC vaults and he had scavved from most of the others so he figured, why not? He set off with Cords a backpack, 5 days of supplies and a kiss from his sister. "Bring me back some interesting stuff ok?" Moira said
"will do" replied Mark "but if I find any really cool tech I'm ganna keep it"
"Oh all right. Be carefull out there Mark, and watch out for Raiders!"
"I know, I know, we'll be careful Mark said as he walked out of megaton " come on cords, lets get going "agreed" said the robot. After 2 days of uneventful walking Mark cme to the entrance to Vault 13 wich was closed but beaten on and scraqed. "wow this place looks pretty trashed, what do you think?"
"Threat level...... yellow."
"Huh who ever did this must have already cleared out, I hope they didn't scav very well. Well here goes nothing" Mark said and he punched in the acces code......... the door started to open

As i walk into the overseer's office the steel tables and leather couches where turned over. Searching around all i see is a terminal and 3 lockers one being open and over 100 documents scattered across the steel tiled floor. As i aproch the locker i spot an old fashion small brass lock, finding a bobby pin nearby i faintly remember being taught how to pick locks, but has luck have a red handled screwdriver laid by my side i decied to attemp to pick the lock. As i randomly moved the bobby pin wile turning the screw driver i hear the noise and scream on the other side of the vault the faint sound comming from the hallway. The bobby pin broke. Thinking to my self I bet something's in there I pull out my wooden sword and start slashing fieriously with no form at all. the lock broke. Searching in the locker i spot a poster with a man in some wierd amour egnoring it. I continue to search smiling sharply i found what seems to be a key being hanged from a small linked chain grabing it i walk towards the computar terminal. Spotting a small bracelet with the number 3000 i realise its a pip boy lux model. Putting it on it feels like handcuffs but with the silk feeling as well i turn on the computer. It askes for a password leaning against the computer with the wooden sword hung over my shoulder the computer beeps and i look at the screen. Thinking must be my day today i look at the contents sublined on the terminal, looking closly i spot my name Crii in red opening up the file it says " Crii is a strange person he scored 100% in all his tests. Im getting worried that there's something wrong with him all he does is spend time in his room stairing up at the sealing. He occasionly goes out of his room to wander around with a grim look on his face. If it were up to me i would kill him my self but latly i hear faint noises comming from out side the vault mabie radroaches. Crii would always go to the reactor level alone carrying a wooden sword and i can hear the scientists complaining about him getting in there way. One day Crii was down in the reactor and some thing went wrong. The reactor levels reached very high and Crii was still in the chaimber for some add reason the reactor stabalized and Crii broke the steel door. the scientist saw what seems to be crimson coulard eyes as he walked out the door. Then something bad happed to Crii it was when ......... ......". was i realy like this? There was no time to think because the faint sounds of screaming creeped closer quickly opeaning the secret passage i close the door behind me climbing a series of rusted steel ladders i make my way to a small platform. As i looked around i spotted a piece of papper with my name in bold Crii As i picked up the letter it read.

[o.o.c] my character is taking a secret passage different from the blasted vault door. we need more characters

As the door slowly opened into the cavernous depth of vault 13 Mark immediately noticed this one was dead. "damn, for a second I thought whoever hurt the door wouldn't have touched the inside. Oh well, lets g see if theres any scavvage to be had." Mark exclaimed as he walked into the filthy vault."

name-Todd
age-26
race-human
description-5'10 brown hair wearing brotherhood combat armor
history- born in the lost hills bunker Todd became a knight when he was 15. he hasn't seen much action but hes very good at making and maintaining
weapons and armor. he's recently been assigned to a paladin hunting for pre-war tech in vaults.and now hes been told to go to vault 13 and see if he can
find any technology.
starting equipment-brotherhood combat armor,pip boy 2000,AER9 laser rifle and a 10mm pistol.

The letter read you don't know who iam but you'll know in due time be careful out there its a dangeriouse place out side the vault but a new life awaits
thinking what iam going to do know I continue to climb the rust ridden stairs opeaning the steel steel door i step inside. Inside the room i scan for nearby clues and spotting plenty of burned books the inside of this building seems to be a gas station. Going outside the room i spot a scorpion the size of a bull dog and i quickly retreat behind the door. Thinking what the hell am i going to do i take another go at scaning the room. Finding this time a bb gun with 30 bb's and a holotape i play the holotape as soon as possible. " Crii sorry for not giving you a head start but this will have to due remember be careful out there and ill always have your back". " Damn, what the heck is going on" I continue to look around the room. The now empty room was well over searched and i decided after an hour to attempt to fight the scoripon. Opeaning the damaged splinted door the strong scorpion lunged. Dodging but getting scraqed by its poisionous tail i quickly swing my sword with might hitting the tail. what! its still alive I jump and take another swing. The scorpion counter attacked wile in mid air getting stabed in the stomach. As my movements slowed down the poison weaked my body. A faint light overcomes my boddy blurring my vision. slowly walking towards the scorpion with one hand on my stomach and one hand on my sword i creep closer to the scorpion who now is ready for the final blow. The light still blurring my vision i take my last breath and i swing with all the strength i have left. Then my vision goes black.

name- Trigger (Doesn't remember last name)
age- 19
race- Human
description- 5' 6" shoulder-length, semi spiky auburn hair, average build, green-gray eyes, and wears a partial torn t-shirt (gray) with blue, baggy jeans (Has holes along the right pantleg)
history- EDIT:Trigger was different than everyone else, and he knew it. But, due to certain cymptoms, and a slight case of amnesia, he's unable to remember anything.He has a grudge against raiders, as they killed paople important to him, possibly his parents. (I'll edit this post as my character remembers things, k? They'll be different colors for each edit, if that's alright... -_-)
starting equipment- lead pipe, 2' long.

[o.o.c] don't forget to tell ur side of the story. A hero can't be a hero unless u know who they are

My name, as I can remember, is Trigger, or at least, was given to me, I think. I awoke in utter silence, and, I can only feel burning feeling on my forehead. What is this feeling? I thought, as I got up, and looked at my surroundings. Scratches and bullet holes were marked along the walls, and I lay on a half torn matress. A ruined apartment complex? Why would I be here, and more importantly, how could I have gotten here.

Shaking the thoughts aside, I still wonder about this burning feeling, but, as I began to get up, a clank of something falling triggered my senses. I looked down and saw a lead pipe, about two feet long. I pick it up and got into a standing position, my shirt straightening out as I did so. My head soon began to thump in agony, the feeling returning, but worse. Why, and how did I get here...? I thought, though I didn't exactly finish.

I finally notice a door to the right of the poor condition matress, scratch marks across the white paint. Having little choice, I walk over to the door, the pipe in my right hand. I raise and place my left hand on the doorknob, and, slowly turn it to the left. The door, or what's left of it, for some really odd reason, was unlocked. Who, or whatever left me here must not have know that I would awaken, or possibly know that I wasn't even here. Then a question struck me, why was I sleeping, and, more importantly, how did I get in that situation?

Shaking these thoughts aside, I slowly open the door, its creaking noise harming my ears. I look out into the hallway, silent enough as it was, my calm breathing could've been the only thing that could be heard if you listened closely. I step out, the floor making similar noises that the door made. Well, I guess that ruins the silence. I calmly walk through the hallway, the creaks continuing, and also avoiding any holes along the floor. Such a poor conditioned place, what could've done this sort of damage? I thought, as I came up to a set of stairs.

They looked like they would collapse at any given time, but, it was the only way down. I carefully place my foot down on the first step, a loud, dangerous creaking sound followed shortly after contact. I carefully decend the stairs, slowly putting my weight down so it wouldn't collapse easily. After ten minutes, I finally got off the stairs, my breathing returning to normal. I look around, noticing more scratch marks and bullet holes along the walls, as well as holes in the floors. I walk over to a nearby door, and as I pushed it open, the door just fell forwards, as if it were never attched to the frame. A small dust cloud erupted, but only for a minute. I step out into the bright sunlight, from the darkness of the abandoned apartment complex. Should I remember... any of this? I thought, as I walked out to the abandoned street, as if a vehicle has never driven by in years. I walk along the sidewalk, wondering where it will take me...

as Todd walked into the building were the entrance to vault 13 was located he heard sounds coming from the back room and opened the door just in time to see a man collapse fighting a rad scorpion
at first he just passed it off as another dead waste lander then he noticed he was wearing a vault suit "well i guess i should help him"he muttered to himself pulling out a stim-pak while putting a slug in the rad scorpions face."hey wake up. are you still alive?"

waking up in a blood filled rage i swing my sword heavily at this unknown man striking his head. The scorpion lunged townard the man in steel no time to counter as his fate was now sealed. As my eyes turned read i take another swing taking his head off. The scorpion started stabing his stomach minalikaly he was no dead forever. Taking his amour and picking up his body i cram it down the ladder that i once climbed. the screams of the undead below howl as if this person where a free meal. The screaming and howling lasted for hours exusted i see black and faint starting to have a dream.

Name:Jordan
age:27
Race:Human (mutant)
Description:6', glowy green eyes, slightly green skin, and scars all over his body, including a long reddish slash going slanted across his face. He wears a beat up wastland trader outfit and a raider blastmaster helmet.
History:beat up and injured badly in an encounter with raiders, Jordan hunts down raiders and sells the goodies he finds at their bases. He has a dog named Jim.
Starting equipment:a 50% laser pistol, and a kitchen knife

Jordan was walking through the wastland randomly, when he saw an open vault door. "what the hell..." He walked over to it, and saw that this vault had either been scavved, or closed late when the bombs fell. He decided that there might be a little stuff, locked away in a chest or locker that nobody was able to open. Walking through the vault, he finds three lockers, two open, one of them seemingly smashed open. the one that was locked was easy to pick, as Jordan had been taught how to open locks when he was 7. He found an energy cell and one of those computer thingies that go one your wrist.he tried to turn it on, when he realized that the batteries were out. *facepalm* he put the E cells in it , and the screen buzzed to life, revealing that his right arm was at 11%, almost broken. He wondered how this had happened. He looked at his arm, and saw there was a huge gash on it. Then he heard some commotion down the hall, and used a stimpak on his arm, and went to investicate, with his laser pistol in his hands.

I look around, and like the appartment a ways behind me, I see many buildings in practically the same condition. But, there are also buildings in a worse condition, as some are covered in a moss-like substance, resmbling that they have been like that for many years. For how long I've been walking, I don't know, and I have a strange feeling that I'm being watched. I shake that thought aside as I continue down the street, looking for any other sign of life.

Eventually, the paved road along the right side of me turned into a dirt road, which probably led out to the middle of nowhere. For all I care, I stop when the sidedwalk also comes to an end, and I begin to look at my surroundings. It would appear as though that I'm probably at the other end of the city, and the sun is still hanging overhead. I still have no idea what the time is, but my guess was that it was probably mid-afternoon. The lead pipe was still in hand, just in case anything were to happen this minute.

I look to my left, and I saw what looked like an abandoned gas station, an old, broken down vehicle parked at one of the gas probes. Not sure what model it is, I walk over to the vehicle, when I hear comotion coming from inside the building. Should I enter, and possibly risk losing my life, or should I just remain outside unil it dies down...? I thought, as I heard some sort of whacking noise of some sorts. Then, for some reason, all went silent from inside, the eerie silence causing me to shiver slightly.

For how long I've been standing there, I'm not sure, but it was still bright, so I'm probably guessing only a few minutes. For all I know, it could just be a person going crazy or something, and I can't see what's going on as I don't see any windows I could look through... I thought, as I looked around the uilding, only finding a window which didn't show anything, and also the door that led inside. I grip the pipe with my right hand as I head for the door, rested my left hand on the doorknob for just a minute before turning it. I opened the door slowly so I could hit anything that could be on the other side of the door...

waking up from a bed in a blurr of white i see to my left a scientist with red rimmed glasses, lab coat and appears to have her sunset brown hair in a pony tail. I can hear the faint sounds comming from the other room echoing inside my head " he seems to be all right daine but you never know what to expect from him" looking to my right i spot a doctor with a mask on picking up an unknown tool that looks to be like a pizza cutter but also like a needle. The doctor to my left smiles sweetly and covers my face with a rubbery mask and then my vission turns black.

what seems to be a few hours later i wake up once again to find a girl with vanilla hair wearing a jacket with green eyes. looking around swiftly to find that im in a totaly different room that has a bookcase, looks oak and a steel polished table i tried to get up. feeling a seering pain in my chest and mid stomach area the girl says " don't strain your self it will only cause more damage to your internal organs." thinking "whaa" i ask her whats going on. Her only reply was to turn her backs and smoothy walk towards the polished table. Asking " whats your name?" the lady sits in the chair by the table crossing her leggs and hands over her head she replys " my name is not importaint but the importaint thing is get ready." "get ready for what" i ask. The expression on her face was priceless and unforgetable as her smile turns into a laugh. "don't worry about it the time will come." We staired at eachother for a well more than a minute. Looking into her grass green eyes i sence the feeling that everthing will be alright and also uneasyness at the same time. The girl quickly stands up and heads for the door. "see you later she said." As the door open i said "wait!" "yes" she replyed. looking towards the seeling the neon light nearly blinds me. " why was I in surgery? " as the girl walked out the door she said calmly" this is only a dream."

OOC because i am not in this RP but i like to read them anyway sometimes: spellcheck please?

the summary of the story so far

crii is having a dream and hes about to wake up

mark is in vault 13 looking for supplies

todd is now dead in the secret passage filled with the screams of a unknown enemy

Trigger is opeaning a door to a gas station wiht god knows what inside

Jordan is also in vault 13 looking for supplies -mark and jordan haven't met yet

the unknown girl who's helping crii is still in the wastes



heres a tiny map that shows the locations of our hero's

///////////////////////////////////-Secret entrance////Building/////////////////////////
////////////////////////////////// Todd *dead*//////////Crii //////////////////////////
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//////////////////////////////////////////////////////-Gastation/////////////////////////
///////////////////////////////////////////////////// Trigger /////////////////////////
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//////////-vault 13/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
///////////Jordan//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
////////////Mark /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////



Crii and todd are in the same location. Todd is underground and Crii is above ground

trigger is at a gas station a few city blocks away.

*beware some thing evil is roaming vault 13!!!!*

name- Lieutenant Mike Haverson (lets try this again since the past rp's I tried died from lack of posts )
age- 42
race- caucasian, human, male
description- 6 foot 2 inches. Brown Buzzed cut hair and brown eyes. Reasonably fit.
history- Enclave Armed forces. Born in camp novarro. Works in enclave intel unit.
starting equipment- 20%Advanced Power armor mk II, broken laser rifle, trench knife. ( 0 microfusion cells)

:status: wounded, lost near gas station. Survived poseidon oil rig. Vertibird ran out of fuel and he has been walking for a day. He has no water.

(starting RP)

- Haverson cursed his lack of preperation as he trudged through the wastes. Walking in Mark 2 combat armor isnt exactly something done with ease. He barely got the knife from a traveling trader who was just as ill prepared as he was. This gave him an advantage enough to take the trench knife from him by force, and by force he used his broken laser rifle as a blugeon. This obviously didnt help fix it. Mike saw what appeared to be a gas station. He shambled towards it in hopes of water...-

Name- Dharok Cline
Age- 17
Race- caucasian, male
Description- 5'11. black hair, long legs and large shoulders
History- dharock grew up in a small settlement near vault 13. kidnapped by raiders but he somehow escaped, now has stumbled upon vault 13
Equipment- Raider sadist armour, a large dagger at his hip and a 10mm (22 rounds)
(starting rp)

Dharok glared at the large smashed door. He gazed at the blank horizon and decided he should just go in. Going back would be dangerous, and who knows there might be water and stimpaks inside. Dharok walked through the empty doorway and was suprised at what he saw. The walls were dusty and rusty, and old papers and furniture were strewn around the little room. Dharok was stunned when he saw a small radroach crawl across the floor in front of him. "I guess there is still life here" said Dharok.

: Haverson stumbled into through the back door of the gas station. He hurriedly opened the shut off fridges and pulled out a water bottle. He didnt care at this point how radiated it was. Mike sat down and gulped down all of it. This gave him cramps but he didnt mind at the moment. Haverson took the time to pull out his laser rifle now and began to examine it. He hardly noticed somebody else was at the gas station...:

Walking down the short hallway Dharok took notice of the rooms on each side of him. Many of the doors were jammed, but the few that were not had large dents and rust all over. The rooms were mostly empty except for some rotten food and broken or turned over furniture. Dharok took what he could and continued down the hallways. Dharok had never seen a vault. He had grown up in a small settlements a few miles from vault 13 and was supposed to grow up and help his family heard Brahmin. Sadly that all changed when he was kidnapped by raiders. The raiders took kindly to him, but he knew they were wrong in their ways. After murdering a defenseless wastelander, he decided to run in the night. After a few days with little clean water and food, he had stumbled upon this place. Dharok was suprised because the door was wide open. Dharok will soon figure out there is more then just radroaches in this here.

I look through the door, but on the other side, I didn't see anything. I gripped the pipe as I walked in further, knowing that it only gave me limited protection for whatever might be here. More bullet holes, but only fewer claw marks, and also blood. But, the blood looked as though it had been there for weeks. I looked around, but nothing else catches my eyes.

I decided to look behind the counter, in case there was anything of use, but I only found a rough-conditioned 10mm pistol with what appeared to be no ammunition, besides the clip which was already loaded. I look at the clip, and only saw three out of twelve shots available within it. The firearm had it's safety set, so I can't shoot it until I unlock it. I put the clip back in the hand-gun, and placed the gun in my jean's pocket.

I then thought I heard a door open in the back room, and with that, I gripped the pipe, ready for an attack. I walk up to the door leading to the back room, and place my left hand on the doorknob, and gently turned it. I then slowly push it open, and in the dark enough room, I saw a figure, shadowy with their back turned towards me. I tiptoed over and stopped centimeters away from the figure. I slowly raise the pipe and, insinctively, brought it down onto what appeared as the back of the head of the figure, creating a thump noise. Not sure whether the blow was enough to knock the figure out or not, I hesitantly brought my hand to reach the poor conditioned hand-gun, but realised that I'd be wide open for any attack, so I removed my hand and looked back at the figure.