Looks good, going to give this a shot! I'm going to use my character from my fan-fic, so you might recognise him!
Name: Jason Fraide
Age: 29
Race (Ghoul, Human, Super Mutant): Human
Gender: Male
Appearance: Stands at 6 foot 4 inches, taller than most of his friends. He has mid-length, dark brown hair, nearly black, with piercing blue eyes. He is well-built, no fat, all muscle. A scar stretches across his right cheek, a remembrance of the trials he has faced. He tries not to loom over people, and sits down when talking so as not to scare people with his height.
Weapons (Three Max): A modified laser rifle, hand-crafted to fit his style of fighting perfectly. A laser pistol from his friend Sam who he watched die. A double-edged combat knife for close encounter, one side is serrated and the other is smooth.
Clothing/Armor: Brotherhood power armour and helmet. Recon armour for underneath the PA. He also carries the holotags of his friend Sam with him
Outpost: BoS Outpost where he protects the base from attack.
Personality: Jason is a calm guy, but when roused he can be deadly. He protects those he cares about, and would do anything to help them. He has a great sense of humor, and his squad have almost been attacked many a time because of their laughter. When under fire, he remains cool and collected, and will counter attack immediately.
Bio: Jason was raised in the citadel from an early age, he enlisted in the ranks as soon as he could, wanting to learn the skills of a soldier. When Casdin left the order and abandoned Lyons, Jason followed, sure he was doing the right thing. However, in the days before the infection, he began to have doubts that he was doing the right thing, and when Outcasts started to die, he left Fort Independence and re-joined the Brotherhood, intent on helping people.
When the infection arrived, Jason was one of the few who survived and sent his time burying the dead and helping those still living. As the infected started to re-animate, Jason knew what had to be done. He killed those zombies which he could, burning their remains. He now spend his time at the BoS outpost, helping protect the scientists within who are trying to find a cure.
Anymore I need to add?